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 Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2012 8:27 pm
.:l Active l:.
Kasie
Morgan
Annalie
Cyrus
.:l TERMINATED l:.
Snyder
Aerin
Briar
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:00 pm
.:l Critiques of Love l:.
~ I think you should have Kasie's stalking habits kind of come back to haunt her (hurr hurr) here and there. Like, she should catch herself stalking cute guys here and there before being like "Wait! Shouldn't do this. D=<"
~ I noticed you have some things in your profiles, that don't count as flaws (like not being able to use magic and such). It's not a big deal because you have other valid flaws listed but it might confuse new people when I say we don't accept them but they see them in other profiles. I think you should clarify that Annalie's wheelchair counts as a flaw because she refuses to walk out of snobbery, not because she's actually handicapped.
Made with love, StrawberryZ0mbie
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:01 pm
.:l TO DO LIST l:.
▷ Kasie Harper:
▶ Notes:
- She needs to nosebleed more often and stalk more guys. >:[
- She also needs to blab more about nonsense.
▶ Fixes:
- Taking out anything related to shyness for Kasie since... she ended up getting over that.
- Move the limitations about her in the flaws section to the additional information.
- ACTUAL flaws need to be added in
xxx- Easily distracted: Have you seen her? Her focus is completely shot as soon as something else pops up.
xxx- And.... anymore that I can think of! D:<
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▷ Morgan O’Donald
▶ Notes:
- This dude needs to be more CHILL. D:< He panics way too much, so it tends to show on the outside.
- Lessen the inner turmoil, and have him be more easygoing.
- PARTY IT UP.
- I need to play up on his moods more often since I’ve been too lazy to do that.
▶ Fixes:
- Add in worrywart to his flaws.
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▷ Annalie Dahl
▶ Notes:
- She needs to be more mellow than RAGE NAIAD.
- She needs to be more of a trickster too.
- CALMCALMCALM.
- POST MORE AS HER.
▶ Fixes:
- Add more in depth to the wheelchair part in the flaws.
- Add more to the personality.
xxx- Like how she’s very blunt and doesn’t really care for formalities.
xxx- She can get pretty violent when pushed too hard.
xxx- Emphasize that she is NOT nice.
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▷ Cyrus Hayden
▶ Notes:
- I need to post as him more often, so that he gets more friends.
- He needs to stop going crazy.
- I haven’t really posted as him enough, so I need to do that! D:<
▶ Fixes:
- Add in more flaws.
xxx- Scaredy cat.
xxx- Paranoia
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