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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 8:16 am
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Username- _TOTAL_14_ RPC Name- Eric Ryan Age (Gaia)- 731 Age (RPC)- Roughly 30 Height- 6,1" Weight- 189 Hair color/style- Brown/ Messy Eye color- Green Nationality- Atlantic Islander Rank- Private
Bio- When Hammond was a small child, his life was a living hell. He was born and raised on a small island country, almost completely unknown to the outside world, and rife with governmental corruption. One of the worst examples of this was the work camps where children over ten years of age were sent, which is where Hammond was taken the minute he turned ten. He does not remember anything before that day. He worked, just like everyone else. When the children proved themselves strong enough, they were sent by train to a lab, where they were experimented upon to become a line of new super soldiers. .When Hammond arrived, he was cut open, and cybernetically implanted with advanced technology to improve his performance to the peak of human ability. After the operation he was put in a containment cell and stayed there for a very long time. After literally years of complete isolation, he was ready. They gave him armor, a L96A1 , a knife, and a .44 Magnum, and made him to serve their cause and kill for them. For a while, he enjoyed his work, ravaging the land and silencing any who spoke against the government he blindly served. But he wasn’t really in control, the government was. The entire time he was in the field, he was tracked. Every breath he took, every word he said, every single movement he made, no matter how minor or innocuous, they knew. When he realized this, his eyes opened, and he saw his “leaders” for what they truly were. And it pissed him off. After…voicing his protests, the only thing Hammond remembered was the lab and the villages burning and the screams of the corrupted souls dying slowly. During the mayhem, however, he was knocked unconscious somehow, and fell into the ocean. When he came to, he was on the mainland. He remembered what he had done, and felt an immense guild rise over him. Desperate to somehow redeem himself, he looked for a military to join, but instead found the Dark Legion, who welcomed him with open arms…
Personality- Quiet(Keeps to himself), Persistent, More of a follower than a leader
Branch- Army
Weapons- L96A1, combat knife, 44. Magnum
Abilities- Advanced marksanship. When John was in training, he was the top in his class, hitting every target at various ranges. Inhansed speed, inhansed strength.
Appearance- Green eyes, Brown hair. White long sleeve shirt, Tactical vest, Jeans, Military boots, Equipment belt, Headset
Other- N/A
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 9:41 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2012 4:30 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 9:11 pm
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 9:18 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 8:18 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 10:44 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 1:46 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 1:52 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 2:28 pm
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Capt Trident _TOTAL_14_ Capt Trident last thing you need to due is select a nationality, there should be no reason for it being unknown. also maybe select a race to, it may seem like something small but it has a big impact, because if you say unknown you could be Asian, Hispanic, African, European, and each one of us can see you differently. Well, did you read the bio? I think it kind of makes sense... you were born on an island... but you worked for a government so you have a nationality. race is still something thats important. Ok sorry, I'll think of one. By the way, what is that pistol on your avitar called?
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 2:33 pm
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_TOTAL_14_ Capt Trident _TOTAL_14_ Capt Trident last thing you need to due is select a nationality, there should be no reason for it being unknown. also maybe select a race to, it may seem like something small but it has a big impact, because if you say unknown you could be Asian, Hispanic, African, European, and each one of us can see you differently. Well, did you read the bio? I think it kind of makes sense... you were born on an island... but you worked for a government so you have a nationality. race is still something thats important. Ok sorry, I'll think of one. By the way, what is that pistol on your avitar called? pietro and its about 1.2 million
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 10:21 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 10:32 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 10:43 pm
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General Thomas Pryor Capt Trident What is this Atlantic Islander? there really is no such thing, people who call themselves that are not being serious, island in the Atlantic are one either their own country and race or belong to another country but are populated by people from other countries or the country who owns that island, i.e. The Fakland Islands. Last time a checked Atlantic Island was not a Nation, so its not a Nationality. I actually Accept that, reason being that some people would accept pacific islander, being that they are technically not in Asia, example being Easter Island. So I think its acceptable, not every comment we have to make is a negative one ya know. I am not trying to be negative... I have never heard the term Atlantic Islander, I had to look it up to find out what it said... and what it exactly said for an example was Irish.
I'm just trying to help him tell the difference between Race and Nationality, they are two different things.
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:59 pm
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Capt Trident General Thomas Pryor Capt Trident What is this Atlantic Islander? there really is no such thing, people who call themselves that are not being serious, island in the Atlantic are one either their own country and race or belong to another country but are populated by people from other countries or the country who owns that island, i.e. The Fakland Islands. Last time a checked Atlantic Island was not a Nation, so its not a Nationality. I actually Accept that, reason being that some people would accept pacific islander, being that they are technically not in Asia, example being Easter Island. So I think its acceptable, not every comment we have to make is a negative one ya know. I am not trying to be negative... I have never heard the term Atlantic Islander, I had to look it up to find out what it said... and what it exactly said for an example was Irish. I'm just trying to help him tell the difference between Race and Nationality, they are two different things. At ease, soldier. I said it was okay for TOTAL to use it as a nationality, since his country is fictional.
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