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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:00 pm
I just started recording some of my stuff and this is one of the first songs I wrote. I'd be happy to hear your opinions on it; it's about a friend of mine in high school that was dating a guy to please her mom and he actually fell for her even though she told him she was gay. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bU514j9e5vQ&feature=youtu.be
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:03 pm
No bad, you have a lot of potential. I think a lot of people could relate to the song.
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:06 pm
Playboy Karasu Uchiha No bad, you have a lot of potential. I think a lot of people could relate to the song. Awesomee(:
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:50 pm
 I agree; there's great potential there! That song is super catchy. If you recorded with some better equipment so there's no distortion, you'd have a hit. whee
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:18 am
Daffodil the Destroyer  I agree; there's great potential there! That song is super catchy. If you recorded with some better equipment so there's no distortion, you'd have a hit. whee
Now I just need a better camera > >
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 4:34 am
Damn. If only you were here. I'd help you record that better. It's catchy. xD
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 1:06 pm
AnnaBananaBear Damn. If only you were here. I'd help you record that better. It's catchy. xD Yeah I need money >.< and thank you!
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 1:23 am
lmao, totally relatable. poor guys. lol
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 12:24 pm
my elephant dreams lmao, totally relatable. poor guys. lol yeah lol It's also kind to a response to how rude he was, he would make out with her in front of her actual girlfriend when her mom was around, knowing there was nothing she could do about it
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 6:48 pm
The chorus is catchy, & I love how you started out w/ first playing softly & then shifted to a louder tone. I like it. c:
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 7:05 pm
WalrusCokeheadLizard my elephant dreams lmao, totally relatable. poor guys. lol yeah lol It's also kind to a response to how rude he was, he would make out with her in front of her actual girlfriend when her mom was around, knowing there was nothing she could do about it Wow. Did she eventually break up with him and come out to her mother?
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 7:49 pm
WalrusCokeheadLizard my elephant dreams lmao, totally relatable. poor guys. lol yeah lol It's also kind to a response to how rude he was, he would make out with her in front of her actual girlfriend when her mom was around, knowing there was nothing she could do about it Wow, what an a**. Sounds like he was just taking advantage of her and the whole situation.
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 10:56 pm
Playboy Karasu Uchiha WalrusCokeheadLizard my elephant dreams lmao, totally relatable. poor guys. lol yeah lol It's also kind to a response to how rude he was, he would make out with her in front of her actual girlfriend when her mom was around, knowing there was nothing she could do about it Wow, what an a**. Sounds like he was just taking advantage of her and the whole situation. She did go down on her girlfriend and kiss him right afterwards haha @my elephant dreams Her mom saw her with her girlfriend last year at Kroger and disowned her for a while. She wouldn't even let her old girlfriend come over just because she knew she was gay and she didn't want her in her house. She's not a christian or anything, she just doesn't like gay people
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 11:19 pm
WalrusCokeheadLizard Playboy Karasu Uchiha WalrusCokeheadLizard my elephant dreams lmao, totally relatable. poor guys. lol yeah lol It's also kind to a response to how rude he was, he would make out with her in front of her actual girlfriend when her mom was around, knowing there was nothing she could do about it Wow, what an a**. Sounds like he was just taking advantage of her and the whole situation. She did go down on her girlfriend and kiss him right afterwards haha @my elephant dreams Her mom saw her with her girlfriend last year at Kroger and disowned her for a while. She wouldn't even let her old girlfriend come over just because she knew she was gay and she didn't want her in her house. She's not a christian or anything, she just doesn't like gay people LOL well, I guess that would teach him.
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 7:23 pm
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