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 Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:59 am
Name: Hælliaine "Hailey" Natsukaze ~ heart Rank: member of the Royal Guard Kingdom: Ganan Height: 5' 10" Weight: 178 lbs. Age 50, appears about 15 Appearance: Markings/Tattoos: Abilities/ Powers/ Magic:Aside from her natural capabilities and stats due to her nature, Hælliaine can control earth, as well as shift into a [dragon form]. Her control over earth is pretty good, letting her do a variety of techniques though she prefers...and is more adept with...Life-based moves/attacks. (Vines, plants, animals, healing etc.) She can stil do other things, just not as well and without as much finesse, (includes changing her body minutely to dragon parts). It also allows Hælliaine to absorb living energy from the area, though she cannot absorb it from people or she will be cursed and unable to heal herself and would taint those others she'd attempt to heal in the future. The energy she absorbs can be stored in gems and crystals, which Hælliaine has a collection of on her person at all times. As a dragon, Hælliaine gets a sort of extra "look" into the well-being of things, and has more stamina to heal others though as a dragon she can also absorb another person's "Life" - raised stats as a dragon have extra emphasis on strength, defense and Magic stamina, while as a "human" the stats have extra emphasis on speed, agility and dexterity Race Dhræk - dragon/human hybrid ; father is a dragon with strong spiritual powers and mother a human mage Weapons: Twin katanas for melee and a blowgun or a longbow for range. Also has a broadsword that was a gift from her brother, hasn't had a chance to use it yet. Also has slim knives, two to a boot - but would rather not fight. Personality: Friendly, outgoing, shy in really large crowds, hyper and easy to excite or amuse. Dependable, almost motherly to her patients, loyal and sticks as close to her brother as possible. Often acts like she's a parent to him despite being younger. Likes:~being outside ~exercising/training ~healing people ~her brother, duh ~flying ~animals, Nature Dislikes/ Hates:~large crowds ~battle ~seeing her brother hurt or bothered by things ~feeling weak or useless ~bullies, liars and law-breakers History/ Bio: Hælliaine always stuck to her brother, especially since they were all that was left of their family as Hælliaine almost doesn't consider their father family as he rarely shows himself. The death of their mother is what started her determination to become a healer, though she still studied fighting along with Kæl. She looks up to him, and while she kind of idolizes Kæl, Hælliaine is well aware no one's perfect and does what she can to support him if he stumbles. She is grateful for the respect he shows her, and often feels guilty because Hælliaine sometimes sees herself as a burden to Kæl. Especially the time she'd been kidnapped by a slaver who had attempted to rape her to get a "feel" for the "quality" of the "new goods". That was probably the one time, scared and clothing in tatters, Hælliaine didn't mind someone dying. She still had nightmares from time to time, and eventually had to move in with her brother and becoming even more inseparable to him. However, when her brother was accepted as Captain of the Royal Guard and her as a normal one to stay close, Hælliaine made sure her nightmares wouldn't bother her and get in the way of her duties. Now she works as a sort of nurse for him and others, growing any and all plants possible while continuing her research into various medicines, also hoping she could find a cure for what had taken their mother. In the meantime, she trains and drills with Kæl, and also works with others for more forest-based survival training and on-the-field medical work while Kæl did strategies and actual fighting, the other sibling often being used for personal examples.
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:12 pm
There cannot be two people to hold the same rank. You need to choose another rank before I can fully judge your profile.
At max for most ranks, you may only have three abilities at the most.
Describe Life based attacks.
Once another rank is chosen I will further judge your profile.
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:20 pm
Zenaku the Demon There cannot be two people to hold the same rank. You need to choose another rank before I can fully judge your profile. At max for most ranks, you may only have three abilities at the most. Describe Life based attacks. Once another rank is chosen I will further judge your profile. Would something like Royal Guard Healer be acceptable, where they just work closely together? Life-based attacks are like vines coming out of the ground, plants growing, and speed healing people - all take energy, of course, although it also allows for absorbing energy from the surrounding area if there's foliage, say; I wouldn't want to go into absorbing it from people, though I guess it's a possibility with the spiritual stuff. I tried making it just three abilities; fire control, earth control (with Life-based versions more than say, moving rocks or make the ground do the Wave), and the dragon form - idea is her perception changes as a dragon as well as having a diff set of stats as a dragon. The spiritual stuff tied to her dragon form is basically just seeing auras around her, and maybe able to heal slight curses and/or deranged minds, etc - be like a ghost fire thing, only availiable as a dragon, if that application stayed Was my thought process, anyway *shrugs* how are you breaking it down, so I can better understand where the problem is?
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 4:31 pm
No you would just have to be the royal guard, and if that is the case, the maximum abilities you can have is two.
You need to put that in the description of the ability
A transformation counts as one ability, but of course a stat increase, like strength or speed increase sounds reasonable. One element would count as one ability. However, if you are just going to be a plain royal guard, then you can only have two abilities.
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:17 pm
Zenaku the Demon No you would just have to be the royal guard, and if that is the case, the maximum abilities you can have is two. You need to put that in the description of the ability A transformation counts as one ability, but of course a stat increase, like strength or speed increase sounds reasonable. One element would count as one ability. However, if you are just going to be a plain royal guard, then you can only have two abilities. So, just to clarify, the Royal Guard wouldn't have their own special Healer, or a Royal Healer sent to care for the Guards unless the royal family required them...? The general idea was that the brother/sister were always a team; so they'd always be together. JUST saying...not arguing...that it seems more difficult to keep that idea working if she only sees him in the position of a common soldier, and maybe at night if she's allowed in the special quarters I generally imagine are set up for the higher ranks...? I am aware of elements as one ability, and I was trying to stay away from specific examples/techniques aside from mentioning the earth was Life-based... As a normal guard, I wouldn't be allowed to train to a third, correct, as I wouldn't be put in a position where it's necessary? ..........or would you allow the earth...nvm, too much of a stretch, sorry. *sighs and rubs forehead* I'm not trying to argue, there's just a few things that I absolute want to keep...and need to re-think /:
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:25 pm
Nope, royal guards are there to protect the leader. They are only under the command of the royal guard captain and the leader of that Kingdom. No one else may command them, not even warriors like the Monogatari, Kyuui, etc etc. The absolute max for royal guards would be 2 until further notice. Until I can get more people in the guild, and fill the majority of the ranks up, it will be that way. I might open another Kingdom once the guild gets up and going good enough. Royal guards should be allowed anywhere the royal guard captain is, and the leader himself because they are there to protect said person.
But it is whatever you want to do, I think I actually have a limit on how many royal guards each Kingdom could have, but I forget gonk
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 6:40 pm
Zenaku the Demon Nope, royal guards are there to protect the leader. They are only under the command of the royal guard captain and the leader of that Kingdom. No one else may command them, not even warriors like the Monogatari, Kyuui, etc etc. The absolute max for royal guards would be 2 until further notice. Until I can get more people in the guild, and fill the majority of the ranks up, it will be that way. I might open another Kingdom once the guild gets up and going good enough. Royal guards should be allowed anywhere the royal guard captain is, and the leader himself because they are there to protect said person. But it is whatever you want to do, I think I actually have a limit on how many royal guards each Kingdom could have, but I forget gonk *facepalms* I must not have come across clearly, but menh...if she was their Healer, the only ordering she'd do would be along the lines of "shut up and take your medicine/let me stitch you!!" Lol But got it...sort of. Still stuck on how to do the abilities though......I guess I can compensate for my ego... =_= EDITED : okay, changed the profile around a bit. Better? (:
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:48 pm
Absorbing life from someone is a bit god modish to me, I really do not like that ability. Regardless you still can only have three abilities.
You will find out I am really picky with profiles sometimes... I apologize for that lol.
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 8:30 pm
Sorry I have a big question about this.
Why have Life-based moves/attacks classified under earth, I don't see the relation between, plants, animals, and healing with the earth or each other of that matter. Judging from Zenaku's last statement he might be thinking the same thing.
This life thing is starting to sound like control over all living things.
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Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 8:37 pm
Shadow Display Sorry I have a big question about this. Why have Life-based moves/attacks classified under earth, I don't see the relation between, plants, animals, and healing with the earth or each other of that matter. Judging from Zenaku's last statement he might be thinking the same thing. This life thing is starting to sound like control over all living things. Well they are a bit related in terms of the ecosystem. But as for abilities, it would be rather difficult grouping everything into one without making it sound like more than one ability.
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:35 pm
Zenaku the Demon Absorbing life from someone is a bit god modish to me, I really do not like that ability. Regardless you still can only have three abilities. You will find out I am really picky with profiles sometimes... I apologize for that lol. I don't like it either...pretty sure I said that s: that it'd be from plants if anything... And it's two abilities ; she's got earth control and her dragon form; I was just attempting to specify she's better with some tecniques more than others sweatdrop *shrugs* your guild...you're nicer about it than it usually comes across as to me *shrugs again* I apologize ahead of time if you know this stuff already... sweatdrop I don't know how much reading you guys have done, but there are constant references...even the Bible...to the body as Earth. "Ashes to ashes, dust to dust", needing sustenance from the earth to live, etc. So, as Earth, you can be affected by Earth - Earth is also a major grouping for anything in it*; metal and stone manipulation can be bent as Earth. ....pun not intended. rolleyes So, I'm just clarifying "Life-based" as her specialty to imply LIVING Earth; I.e., plants and healing...versus actually moving dirt around *you could almost argue that in calling it Earth, you're implying the planet as a whole, thus any and all existing (and least physical/Nature) elements are grouped.......but that's an absolute gmod *chuckles* just sounds better than saying "dirt" control d: cuz then you think of earthworms...and where's the glory or drama in THAT?? Xs
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:23 pm
Well thanks for clearing things up for me but if you want to control living objects rather then dirt why not use a different classification for you magic like Soul Controlling, Plant Manipulation, Necromancing or just Life Based magic. @Zenaku: back to you Zenaku
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:29 pm
Shadow Display Well thanks for clearing things up for me but if you want to control living objects rather then dirt why not use a different classification for you magic like Soul Controlling, Plant Manipulation, Necromancing or just Life Based magic. @Zenaku: back to you Zenaku Because to make myself feel better about losing fire, I just made it Earth, ALL Earth-based manipulations/attacks....she's just better at using plants and interacting with animals than throwing rocks around *shrugs* make sense...? (: And while someone told me Necro just means the body, period, Necromancy's traditionally associated with the dead stare yech lol
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Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:42 pm
As long as the is changed to absorbing life from plants, and not people. Then you should be good to go.
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2012 10:24 pm
Zenaku the Demon As long as the is changed to absorbing life from plants, and not people. Then you should be good to go. *shakes head* nope...she despises it. And it's what she considers black/evil magic - she'd be tainted, unable to heal etc. If she DID draw something out from others that was Life-based, it'd be an impurity...but not actual Life force to energize herself. Don't think she technically could... I think I will have it she carries gems that as she moves and travels, she picks up tidbits here and there and stores it in them, to draw from later...
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