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Abzu the forgotten Captain
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 Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:14 pm
people who r in the story
maxmillon - blood brother
kitten-blood child
cheran- war buddy
all the others cosmos, - brother hood brothers
dark cavelier- another old war buddy
neko- lost love
forgetten queen- maxs wife
seiko- a man who has been loyal to my dad and now is loyal to me
dream- maxs best pal form his child hood
yugi- cherans gurd
this is a story line were all of u are invold and plz post actives so plz join in
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:21 pm
the age after the fall of the cosmos the were we last of the cosmos is on planet were they humans live cosmos has bright his child who is young and his rest of his clan that is left . he whould look around the place with his eyes narrowed his face blank he says with a cold voice "sekio is this the only place we can live is there no other" as he say that his child wakes with eyes of saddness he looks at max and gives him a nod on be on ur guard
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:29 pm
At ease the Cosmos prepare to getting their equipment ready and gears were assembled.
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:29 pm
Kitten Looked up at her father, Scared out of her mind. "Dad... wasn't I born here?" She Didn't look anything like her father. She let out a small cough. Her ice blue eyes seemed off from the rest of the group, as well as her long crimson hair. Her skin was soft, with a couple scars here and there from intense training and such. "What is going on? Why aren't we home?" She hugged her father's waist, being quite a bit shorter than him. Only 13 years of age. A blade strapped to her back, so she wouldn't lose it. "Urk..." She coughed a few times. She had been getting colds quite a bit lately...
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Abzu the forgotten Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:32 pm
he whould nod to x and say keep going we need to set up before people come and he whould look at his child and smile and say" no child are home is gone and this is are new home and yes we was born on r planet and he whould hear a noise in the bush and nod to x as in got look wat that is putting his hand on his dads blade know as the sword of 7 tales
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:33 pm
neko looked at them both trying to figure out if she disturbed somthing a man named cosmos walked up to her max stood there watching both neko and cosmos as they talked cosmos asked her if she was ok neko told him shes been having a rough time lately so he gave her a hug knowing slowly hes falling for her but he said nothing.neko walked to the tree and sits in the shade she had a heavyhearted smile on her face as cosmos was sparring with max.
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:35 pm
Under direct orders followed direction then is completing the task.
[preparing the gears] all finished!!
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:36 pm
the women named neko cought his eye and walked over to here as she sat down near the tree and he whould kneel down and say "hello miss wat is ur name i am zero' he whould say with a smile on his face. he whould hold his hand up makeing sure none of his people try to attack
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Abzu the forgotten Captain
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Abzu the forgotten Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:38 pm
good x now go look around this planet we need to find more of this things that live here and make sure u dont get ur self killed i am letting seiko go with u
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:42 pm
She would watch as the two drew their weapons to spar and backed off, Sitting down away from everyone else She closed her eyes for a moment, and layed down on the grass, using her arms as a pillow. The Child started coughing again, and Forced herself to stop. Maybe she wouldn't collapse today like she did the night before, when she was alone. closing her eyes, she tried to rest, for her strength would need to be kept up in order to contenue.
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Abzu the forgotten Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:44 pm
he whould see his kid still sick and thinks to him self on mybe she has her mohter sickness but he shakes that thought form his head he whould nod to max as in we r done and walk over to his kid and covers her with his cape and pets her hair makeing it so she can warm up and sleep
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:45 pm
30 swords, 20 staffs, 70 shields, and 29 knives are ready Captain! May godspeed to the Cosmos! I will make more!
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:54 pm
neko looked at cosmos as he sat infront of her she saw his hand raise as if he is telling them to stand down neko looked at his people then looked back at cosmos and said her name is neko she wonders what cosmos or his people might do to her next.she didnt want to be a burden on them so she sat down quietly as she looked at cosmos again.
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:00 pm
he whould smile at neko and begain to ask her about her self and her likes about this planet he whould nod at x as in go on and he whould keep talking to neko
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 7:04 pm
Kitten curled up and pulled the cape close to her,resting her head on her father's leg, facing away from him, pulling the cape over her nose and mouth. She stayed quiet, and said nothing, just easing off into sleep. Much Needed Sleep if she wished to stay alive
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