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 Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:36 am
Name: Axzari Heyaki
Nicknames: Axy(by certain people), Ax, or uurrrm Gin?O.o
Gender: Male
Age: Human Age: 27, Shinigami Age: 425, Current age Unknown which will be revealed later.
Hair Colour: Grey, and spiky and a little messy, he also keep the back in a pony tail which reach to his lower back.
Eye Colour: Greyish blue, Hollow Gold in bankai
Height:5'11
Weight: 175
Blood Type: O+
Reiatsu Color: Gray inside and Blackish on the outside
Appearance: Axzari
Affiliation: Seireitei
Squad: Squad 3
Rank: Captain
Family: Heyaki ((Shihoin))
Personality: Calm and collective. He has a personality that is strange to some, how in battle he actually smiles and plays with his enemy. Though when someone besides himself get hurt, get serious, but still keeps a smile on his face. He is usually nice to everyone and is well known by others too, though one thing he hate showing people is his bankai because of the way it looks.
Likes:
1- Training
2- Sleeping
4- Seeing People Do Their Best
5- Fighting Tough Enemies
6- Girls, and Girls and Even Hollow Girls
Dislikes:
1- Disturbance in the peace
2- Fighting Useless Battles
3- Evil, except females to a certain extent
4- Losing a Pointless battle
Biography:
The Beginning:
In the human world, Axzari was know around the blocks as a good kid. Everyone always enjoyed his company, and even like buying gifts for him even when he never asked. He was always so apologetic which people saw as a kindness, even though they knew his parents were proud of their son for all the good works they did. The only problem with Axzari, as he got older he began to mature more which he had a weak reiatsu level which made him below average humans. As he was sleeping one night, a thunderstorm had passed through the town. It was heavy and lighting struck everywhere. He enjoyed looking at the sparks of lightning which, when a bolt of lightning struck the ground by his house, he immediately woke up. He looked outside through his window smiling. It was like christmas to him, but what he saw ruined his thought. He was twelve when he saw a giant hollow with a cobra like body, and a bone mask shaped like a great white shark.
This was not the only time he saw Hollow, because when he was a kid, he use to tell people about the men and women in black clothing, fighting these evil monsters. People smiled at him in disbelief. Which is why he always said sorry for telling them. Back to his present, after seeing the giant hollow outside his window, the hollow stopped. It suddenly looked at him which he made eye to eye contact with it. His little body was to frighten to move. It was almost as if time had stopped for him. He wanted to scream but couldn't. It felt as if his soul was being devoured right where he stood. As the hollow saw how faint his reiatsu was, it began to rush in too feed on his spirit. Thats when a man out of no where, came in and stopped the hollow with his bare hand.
Axzari eye began to grow big in amazement as he was happy to see the men in the black outfit, but he was different. He was wearing a white coat or Hoari should we presume. The man easily used a kido and bind the hollow down, and Axzari could never forget the words the man used to awaken his sword which was Axzari first time seeing a Shikai"Follow, Shi baipā((死バイパー: Death Viper))." In a instant, the mans reiatsu sky rocketed which Axzari couldn't move because how strong it was. Finally after it being released, Axzari looked up and saw the man holding a Green Katana, the whole blade was green, and large in mass. He stabbed it in the hollows hole and it was absorbed in the blade. He then sealed his zanpakuto back up, turning it back to normal. The captain walked up to him, and walked into the room Axzari was in. Axzari wasn't frighten but happy. He looked down to Axzari and told him"Hey, kid that was a mess back there. Between us two, your my new friend and I will watch over you till we meet again." this made Axzari smiled. He asked for the captains name and told him"Just call me Viper."Axzari nodded after given his own name, and from that day on he kept his won beliefs in what he saw.
Death:
Axzari progressed through the years, along with his knew friend. He had other friends, but none was closer to him then viper. After graduating from the University in his city. He began to start his own business, making a good living for himself. He would usually wait to see if Viper and his squad members were going to patrol which they did, and Axzari would watch them. So happen he met a girl from his past and they began to talk and began to get close. This was leading to being more than friends.
One day they were sitting at the train station, and believe it or now a hollow appeared. She saw it too, which is now shown that Axzari reiatsu grown over the years where it have now sparked onto other around him. She saw the hollow too, which had knocked her onto the train tracks. A train was coming at High speed, which Axzari jumped and pushed her out the way but caused himself to get hit harshly. She began to scream seeing the after math, Viper was trying to get there fast as he could, but when he arrived, she was cornered by the hollow. Again killing this hollow was no problem. The young lady looked at Viper, which Axzari told her the stories about him, which now she believes. When he saw Axzari dead body lying there ripped, and torn. Viper fell to his knees, and began to cry. It hurt him too see Axzari die at the age of 25. When he saw Axzari spirit with his chain, he quickly cut it down, and used the end of his zanpakuto and performed a Konso after letting him give his final good byes.
Shihoin:
Axzari was reincarnated as child being born in the Royal Shihoin family, which he was able to keep memories of his past life, being the Son of married couple. They reminded him of his family back in the world of the living, which they took the last name Heyaki, which was also given to him. This started his life story. He began to enjoy his life there, until he saw Viper again. He ran up to him telling how hew anted to join his squad, which Viper told him, if he could pass the Shino Academy in two years, he can join. They both broke out laughing, but it was a deal he made. After training days and nights in Shihoin training quarters, he began to master his skills faster then others knew. When he joined the Shino Academy, to some surprise, he passed with in one year.
Seireitei:
He signed up to join Viper squad which was Squad Eleven, after taking his time in this squad he was becoming to familiar and loving it. Though he then saw a squad he wanted join. A squad he couldn't wait to be a part of. The Squad known as Squad 3, some reason he was in love with the number three, but it didn't matter. He requested a transfer to squad three and Viper accepted it under a condition. He had to fight him using Shikai. Axzari wasn't to happy about this, knowing Viper Shikai was a Shikai wasn't a Shikai you want taunt. Though for his pride he did it. Axzari fought hard and long. He knew this was going to be most and toughest battle he will ever face.
Axzari literally battled Viper a whole day, which Viper was surprised about. The battle was over and Axzari was tired, but he knew giving up wasn't a option in the Squad eleven. Viper then told him, he did well, he then reminded him I"I said fight me, not try and defeat me in shikai."which Axzari smiled about though he was cut up and looked a mess. After getting himself together the next day, he was getting ready to leave until viper gave him a necklace. he told Axzari, he was like a son to him and he was happy they was always around each other. As time passed, Axzari rose in the ranks of becoming a Captain of Squad 3. He was the lieutenant of Squad three, which was leading to his win at becoming captain. When he challenged the squad three captain, he already knew his bankai thanks to Viper who actually was the only person to know. He cut the captain down in two slices, this shocked the whole squad but he actually was surprise, though he didn't kill him, the captain honored him to be captain. Sadly after the promotion, he heard Viper was assassinated by a high level arrancar. Axzari from that day on wanted to find out who did this. He keeps the necklace viper gave him, in memory of his long time buddy who was like a second dad who he will never forget. This anger also what brought his hollow to surface and becoming a vizard which only very little know of this secret about Axzari.
Zanpakuto Name:Kami no senshi((神の戦士: Divine Warrior))
Sealed Description: Kami no senshi((Note: Most times in the seireitei, Axzari keeps a fake zanpakuto or a normal sword. When doing this, he use his own reitsu to hide his real zanpakuto from the naked eye. Same thing, while in a battle he uses the normal sword until he see his opponent is highly stronger then he thought, which by releasing his reiatsu he reveals his zanpakuto which comes out of gust of wind.))
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:Senshi
Zanpakuto Spirit Personality:
Kami no Senshi has a calm personality. He is always motivated to see Axzari try, and lends him his power when needed. Though he hate that Axzari usually wins fights quickly, though he is happy to see Axzari relying on him. He is hard to deal with when Axzari wants to learn a new ability, but doesn't talk to him for a while. He finds it fun to fight him for long periods of time. In reality all he ever wanted was to see Axzari win because he cares for him like a son.
Inner World: Hikari (( he call his inner world Hikari because that was the name of a city he always dreamed of when he was a kid, which he actually found it strange that his inner world would look like a place he dreamed of.))
Shikai Status: Achieved
Release Command:Shine, Kami no Senshi
Shikai Released Appearance: Shikai: Kami no Senshi (Swords in Pic)). He can also form the second sword if he need to.
Shikai Abilities: Naturally ability, is to absorb mostly anything that has a substance of light. meaning, usually any attacks that consist of light and lightning he can absorbs. Also giving a great increase in speed.
1- Kami no surasshu((神のスラッシュ biggrin ivine: Slash)): Axzari create a multiple waves usually around 5- 7 waves of light. These waves can cause damage, and usually go from a range 10- to 30 feet max. Usually he moves when he swings them, so this causes his attacks reach to increase. These waves can be deflected, and there is a three second time split between each wave. Though he uses this to confuse opponents by making the time longer, even giving it a rhythm so they wouldn't catch on.
2- Kami no shi no kabe((神の死の壁: Divine: Death Wall)): When summoning this attack, Axzari swings his sword downwards. Suddenly a large wall of swords of light charges at the target at great speed. This attack can be countered, but id the target doesn't dodge or even counter or block. The target is then stabbed by the swords, which is then released into a explosion. The distance of this attack is fifteen to twenty feet.
3- Raifu danmaku((雷風弾幕: Lighting Wind Barrage)): With this technique, Axzari uses the wind around them. With this he can make the levels of the air heavy or light, while statics of lightning forms around him. He can then use the wind to unleash a barrage of blades in the form of light usually move in a group of 15t. If the target is struck by the swords((target must be hit by ten or more)), which ever part of the body was hit the most, large spikes of light began to rip through that part of the body which explodes after 7 post.. This attack can be dodged or even countered, because it takes a physical form to when it get three feet close to the target.
4- Shinrai-fū((神雷風: Divine Lightning Wind)): When using this, Axzari zanpakuto becomes surrounded in reiatsu. As he does this, he can unleash little needles of light towards his opponent. They fire rapidly at the target. They can be deflected or even countered. The range of these needles are between 10 feet to thirty. When the needles hit the target, and if the target is pierced, the needles then release spikes of light in the area of the wound where the target is hit. ((Note: This attack can be countered or deflected as stated, but the target is hit on the area that was wounded becomes covered in spikes: Ex. If cut on the right forearm then the right forearm."))
Bankai Status: Achieved
Name: Seinaru kami no senshi((聖なる神の戦士: Holy Divine Warrior))
Bankai Description:
-1. Bankai Outfit
-2. New Outfit((Achieves When I'm Done Editing It))
Bankai Abilities:
Basic: With his bankai, as in shikai his shikai basic abilities are enhanced two times before. Also giving him the power to control wind as a basic now.
1-Kami no hason o hoji suru((神の破損を保持する: Holy Divine Corrupt)): This is a complicated attack, but very effective. With this attack, by gathering reiashi into his zanpakuto, Axzari cut every piece of the body more then once of his target including((head, arm, leg, body)) the senses of his target began to slow down as in movement. The more he cuts the more slower they will become until the target see every thing moving either too slow or either to fast for it to react to. Of course Axzari would have to keep cutting, but this technique highly strong and effective which Axzari doesn't finishes the target of but rather leave them in the stasis they are already in. To get the first effect, Axzari has to at least get 15 cuts on his target.
2-Kami no hikari,-fū no ha o hoji suru((神の光、風の刃を保持する: Holy Divine Light Wind Blades)) : The main power of the 1000 blades or even more in the form of light. When lanched they form into wind. The wind then charges at the target creating a great deal of force behind it. The wind then reform into the sword but this time multiple swords. He can use this attack for offense and defense.
((Achieves Later)):
3- Shinrai-fū no shokku((神雷風のショック: Divine Lightning Wind Shock)): This is the Second stage of Shinrai-fū((Divine Lightning Wind')) Axzari rarely uses this technique, because of what it does. By grabbing his zanpakuto with two hands he point his zanpakuto upwards. The sky began open up around him and his opponent, within fifty feet of him and his opponent. Lightning then strike Axzari, doing this his body is now covered in light. This attack varies, if there is already a lot of light in the area plus the light Axzari formed, this could cut a target reiatsu down 3/4. if its only the light Axzari created then it can cut it in half, if he makes enough strike on his opponent. Which could also lead to his opponents death. To give killing blows he has to make at least 15 slices, with in 5posts. If its light plus his own light, all he need is 10 slices in 5 post to hopefully give a killing blow to his opponent.
Kido:*Individual spells can be listed or you can just list the number you know (ex.Bakudo 1-30) This can however be erased if the Hado and Bakudo sections are used.
Hado: 1-99
Bakudo: 1-99
Hakuda: He know allot about Kidou and still training with it till he perfectly got it down. He mainly focuses on the stronger Kidou seeing the lower number Kidou are easier to use. Dual wielding.
Hoho: Mastered
Abilities and Special Training: He has a lot of special training with the Task force basically Mastering all of their skills since he was born into the Shihoin family. He mastered flash stepping, becoming one of the fastest in the seiretei, hopefully one day he could keep up with Sun.
Utsusemi - It allows for a movement at great speed leaving an afterimage behind. The afterimage may even appear to have taken damage.
Motto:"I'll try To Give a Good Fight"
Quote(s):
"This blade is a Blade of Light, With it I'll Cut Through your darkness."
"I'll fight till its over, even if I'm the one who is dying"
"I honestly wish we had tea, Fighting before tea sucks..Really"
Theme Song(s):U/C
Trivia:
In bankai Axzari Irises resemble that of a Hollow/ Visord. Only few have noticed the light colored gold in his irises, even though his eyes are still white.
Other:
Axzari always carries a gourd of Tea, which some thinks its sake because on it is written Sake. it sits on the left side of his sash.
Axzari carries to a band around his right arm which reduces his reiatsu by 25%, and another around his left arm which does the same. In most battle he releases the right one before the left. Only few have seen and even noticed this. These bands came from squad twelve.
*- Basic=
He always wears the normal shingami clothing, and his sleeveless haori. He sometimes keeps his zanpakuto on his left hip, or his back. Depending on how he feels.
**-Option= Non at the moment.
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 12:41 pm
Dalaga Helios One thing jumps out at me right away when reading this profile, how you came to be part of the royal family, it doesn't really make sense to me, so if you could expand on why they would take a random nobody into their home and give him their family name that would be appreciated. Kami no Surasshu, do these waves have the ability to be blocked by a regular movement of the blade? Can they be redirected if one was to slap the side of one of these waves with a great enough force? Do these waves even have any physical mass? If not on any or all of these then limit the ability further, either to one wave at a time until the previous wave dissipates, or give them physical mass enough so they can at least be blocked or defeated. Kami no shi no kabe: this move does not have limitations aside from getting close to you and even then it doesnt help them in the least, this move either needs to be moved to your bankai instead or revamped alltogether to make it quite a bit more fair for your opponents. It is a bankai move used by a cannon character from the show, with small modifications, should that alone not tell you it belongs in your bankai at the least? Raifu danmaku: the only real change needing to happen to this attack is that you can make the air around your opponent and yourself heavy or light or launch blades from around yourself, having such an attack come from around them would make it near impossible to dodge, meaning the attack is to strong for its own good. Shinrai-fu no shokku: this move is simply to strong to be a shikai tech, if you wish to keep this move change it to bankai. the limit on bankai and shikai abilitys is still the same though so only move this if you plan to do away with one of your bankai attacks. Bankai basic: Ten fold is more then a bit overpowered, it would be closer to double not ten times. Kami no Hikari, -fu no ha o hoji suru: You will have to specify that you can only double your speed or use the blade launching ability, using both at once would be far to stong and make you near untouchable except for by groups. Not meaning to be a d**k but truly your character is far overpowered, but dont worry I am not picking on you im going over every profile even the ones that have been approved so that i can be sure no overpowered characters have slipped through the cracks. don't worry I purposely did this to see someone else point of view as to editing my character. I was hoping to get bad views and W/E so i can make the character better,. Again thank you for the help, I'll be doing lot of re editing to my character. So I'm gonna need this checked probably idk when ever you get a chance.
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2012 3:35 pm
Much better, though i have issue due to their being a limited number of visored total with any being captains, so for now approved, though the visored bit may change before the rp starts.
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2012 12:26 pm
Okay, Axzari new Shikai is up woooot XD
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Posted: Thu May 22, 2014 7:13 pm
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