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  The Loyal Girl
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Biker_Chick94
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PostPosted: Wed May 30, 2012 4:12 pm


I was writing this thinking I might turn it into lyrics so the form is a little weird.


No one ever realized the pain they caused,
Till it was done and I was gone

Some people thought they knew me
but what no one knew

was that

I was never Queen of anything,
I never had much fun in school,
I stood by my friends when I was needed,
But when my turn came I was all alone.

People thought I was stronger than I am,
they thought that I would go so far

Sometimes I would Wonder,
“Why, Why ME?”

Cause

I was never Queen of anything
I never was with the “in-crowd”
I stood by my friends when I was Needed
But when My turn came I was alone

Everybody stopped and stared
when the TV man came on and said
“this girl’s gone and run has anybody seen her?”

They found me two states over with my grandma,
when I came home everyone cried

You might not be Queen Of anything,
It don’t matter if you aren’t the “in-crowd”
You stood by us when you were needed
We’re sorry you had to stand Alone

In the end I’m not sorry that I ran
it brought my friends back to me

now I’m glad
sailing high as a feather

cause

I might not be queen of anything,
I’m still not happy in School
But I still stand Strong for my friends when I’m needed
And when my turn comes I’m never Alone.

When My turn comes I’m never alone.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 8:59 am


Biker_Chick94
I was writing this thinking I might turn it into lyrics so the form is a little weird.


No one ever realized the pain they caused,
Till it was done and I was gone

Some people thought they knew me
but what no one knew

was that

I was never Queen of anything,
I never had much fun in school,
I stood by my friends when I was needed,
But when my turn came I was all alone.

People thought I was stronger than I am,
they thought that I would go so far

Sometimes I would Wonder,
“Why, Why ME?”

Cause

I was never Queen of anything
I never was with the “in-crowd”
I stood by my friends when I was Needed
But when My turn came I was alone

Everybody stopped and stared
when the TV man came on and said
“this girl’s gone and run has anybody seen her?”

They found me two states over with my grandma,
when I came home everyone cried

You might not be Queen Of anything,
It don’t matter if you aren’t the “in-crowd”
You stood by us when you were needed
We’re sorry you had to stand Alone

In the end I’m not sorry that I ran
it brought my friends back to me

now I’m glad
sailing high as a feather

cause

I might not be queen of anything,
I’m still not happy in School
But I still stand Strong for my friends when I’m needed
And when my turn comes I’m never Alone.

When My turn comes I’m never alone.


It feel's more like a song rather then a story in my eye's and I can say go for it I am possitive that you will do well if it hit's the recod's but it may seem bland due to all musical part's all have that same level theroy. But this feel's different and I enjoyed it.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:17 pm


meta-madness
Biker_Chick94
I was writing this thinking I might turn it into lyrics so the form is a little weird.


No one ever realized the pain they caused,
Till it was done and I was gone

Some people thought they knew me
but what no one knew

was that

I was never Queen of anything,
I never had much fun in school,
I stood by my friends when I was needed,
But when my turn came I was all alone.

People thought I was stronger than I am,
they thought that I would go so far

Sometimes I would Wonder,
“Why, Why ME?”

Cause

I was never Queen of anything
I never was with the “in-crowd”
I stood by my friends when I was Needed
But when My turn came I was alone

Everybody stopped and stared
when the TV man came on and said
“this girl’s gone and run has anybody seen her?”

They found me two states over with my grandma,
when I came home everyone cried

You might not be Queen Of anything,
It don’t matter if you aren’t the “in-crowd”
You stood by us when you were needed
We’re sorry you had to stand Alone

In the end I’m not sorry that I ran
it brought my friends back to me

now I’m glad
sailing high as a feather

cause

I might not be queen of anything,
I’m still not happy in School
But I still stand Strong for my friends when I’m needed
And when my turn comes I’m never Alone.

When My turn comes I’m never alone.


It feel's more like a song rather then a story in my eye's and I can say go for it I am possitive that you will do well if it hit's the recod's but it may seem bland due to all musical part's all have that same level theroy. But this feel's different and I enjoyed it.


this guild is for all forms of art: stories, song/poems, drawings (tho no one has put up any), etc.
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