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Cranberry_Zombie19

PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2012 4:18 pm


So im drawing and going to be coloring this for my little sisters birthday in july. She loves octopus' for some strange reason what does every one think so far?

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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2012 4:47 pm


It's a little hard to make out some of the detail, but it does look very professional. Good job.

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Cranberry_Zombie19

PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2012 4:48 pm


thanks. its hard to make out some of the detail?
PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2012 5:04 pm


lillianna19
thanks. its hard to make out some of the detail?

Most of it's fine, but some of the lines aren't showing up so well, that, I think it's supposed to be an Angler Fish in the right hand corner, for example.

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Cranberry_Zombie19

PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2012 5:07 pm


Maltese_Falcon91
lillianna19
thanks. its hard to make out some of the detail?

Most of it's fine, but some of the lines aren't showing up so well, that, I think it's supposed to be an Angler Fish in the right hand corner, for example.

ohh thats cuz its not fully finished i havent drawn it in yet ive taken pictures of this picture all from beginning
PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2012 5:08 pm


lillianna19
Maltese_Falcon91
lillianna19
thanks. its hard to make out some of the detail?

Most of it's fine, but some of the lines aren't showing up so well, that, I think it's supposed to be an Angler Fish in the right hand corner, for example.

ohh thats cuz its not fully finished i havent drawn it in yet ive taken pictures of this picture all from beginning

Yeah, I'm sure it'll look really good once it's finished.

Maltese_Falcon91
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Cranberry_Zombie19

PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2012 5:10 pm


Maltese_Falcon91
lillianna19
Maltese_Falcon91
lillianna19
thanks. its hard to make out some of the detail?

Most of it's fine, but some of the lines aren't showing up so well, that, I think it's supposed to be an Angler Fish in the right hand corner, for example.

ohh thats cuz its not fully finished i havent drawn it in yet ive taken pictures of this picture all from beginning

Yeah, I'm sure it'll look really good once it's finished.

thank u
PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2012 11:29 pm


I think the angle at the end of the tail is a bit awkward, but the rest of it looks good. Can't wait to see it finished. Also, one thing to keep in mind is to not outline the lips. Try using shadows instead.

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