Satin Doilee
Hey! =D
To start off, I really like his concept... his base traits especially are really unique and fascinating; they convey a lot of character in and of themselves. I just have a few questions for you to consider befre Lukongolo gets his stamp of approval!
In a world where community is key to survival, what makes him so dilligently strive to maintain his "loner" status? Why is that reputation important to him?
What does he think about the Alkidikes, who he has no doubt encountered, living primarily on the floor? How does he deal with confrontations with him?
What would he do if he were in a situation where he needed help?
He feels his existence has been taken for granted: how does that affect his actions and mental state today? It seems to me that someone who felt underappreciated would strive for appreciation, but he does the opposite, in seeking solitude. Why is this?
I look forward to your responses! =3 XD thanks for the examination questions! this is going to help flesh him out a lot!
Oki so, Part of the reason Lukongolo takes pride in his ability to stand on his own, most of the time, comes from the sharp contradiction to the societal norm.
He tries not to think of it, because it feels very selfish, but deep down he really can't stand the constant intrusion that would exist if he embraced his family life. That being said, having spent so much time away reaffirming his own stand alone complex, when he does interact socially with his tribe he can be pretty rude and off putting, without ever truly meaning to. He has become just sort of a really selfish kid, and with him feeling so taken for granted, he takes plenty of the gifts around him for granted. It's gotten to the point where it's easier on every if he just stay nearest the floor. It's become the place where people expect him to be. It's his niche.
There isn't anything wrong with Alkidikes in Lukongolo's mind, ever since that first encounter when he had to be forcibly convinced that they weren't animals, and that calling them that was taken as highly offensive. That wasn't the last time Lukongolo has walked back to the village caked with blood. Now-a-days when combing the forest floor, if he should meet a gang of alkidikes he'd be most likely to introduce himself and seek to stick his ruddy nose in their business, sure to announcing his in-hostility at the very beginning. If he happened across a solitary alkidike however, watching from a safe distance would be his approach. His rationale being "the more of them there are, the more likely it is that one of them won't care to kill me."
In most cases where he find himself in a pickle he'd like to make his own escape, even if it comes at the price of flesh and blood. In a true jam he'd be likely to look for a temporary "friendship" if it proved a safer route than his own stubborn head strong idea. He likes words a whole bunch, and is a pretty good judge of character in animals, if at all possible he'd like to use a slick tongue to try to scrape by a tricky situation. He is a practitioner of self preservation by ANY means necessary.