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[ENROLLMENT] Lily - Conquest Clan - APPROVED

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Saliru

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PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2012 8:28 pm


LOST CLAN CREATION FORM

The Horseman
Name - Lily
Nicknames - Qi, Liang Qi
Gender - Female
Age - 17

Original Clan - Conquest
Job Role - Artisan

Personality - Qi is a very sheltered but emotional horseman. She's eager to meet new people and make friends but isn't completely aware of social faux pas.

When her world was destroyed it shattered her greatly, she couldn't do much more than grab her twin brother and sob pitifully into his silent shoulder. If it wasn't for him, she probably would have given up on everything.

With him, however, she is trying to pull the pieces of her life back together. She changed her name to Lily, or at least that is how she introduces herself to outsiders. Liang Qi is kept as a personal secret memento shared only with those deserving.

She is hoping to be able to smile again soon.

Mount Form - Large white draft-type horse(gypsy vanner / white friesian) with ornate gold and jade horse tack.
Weapon Form - Ornate Longbow

FEAR ATTACK - Scornful Arrow (The Eye) A charged arrow aimed to cripple her enemy's attack.

Physical Description -
Eye Colour: Green
Hair Colour/Style: Long black hair with gold and jade adornments
Skin Colour: White
Clothing Style/Colours: Lavender Hanfu with violet and gold details, also wears a long flowing light cream sash
Extra: Golden jewelry, horns, and scaly ears. Long flowing horse tail that fades from black to white.
References: http://zoo.thesporkedken.com/download/horsemen/contests/conquestfemaletwin_pach.png
PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2012 1:22 pm


Hiiiii

Few things~

1- Why did she pick the name Lily? What is her reasoning behind changing her name, especially with the way conquest horsemen are all about tradition, what would make her give up her traditional name?

2- If her actual name is Liang Qi, and her nickname is Lily you should probably flip those into their correct spots because its a bit confusing.

3- Her personality is really really bare D: Emotionally sheltered is really all about her personality that is put down, the rest is more or less extra stuff. She shattered- how, what did that change in her? I think you can really expand here because right now there is just a tiny bit compared to what I know you can do. Maybe expand on how she interacts with others she doesn't know vs, those she knows well. How does she think of herself? Does she have an ego? How does she think of other clans and races? Is she bitter? hateful? There is a lot you can add in here Riyoku I know you can do ittttttt <3

4- SMALL SMALL thing, but her ears are not scaled, those are ear clippssss


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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2012 1:26 pm


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Halloween Immigration Form

  • Name: Lily
  • Gender: Female
  • Race: Horseman
  • Former Clan: Conquest
  • Job: Artisan
  • Status: Citizenship Granted


Welcome to Halloweentown! You are cleared to enter the Lost Clans Sanctuary.

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