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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 3:46 pm
Hai!!!!! This is where im going to post all my: -short stories -series (I have 3 main ideas) -writings -daily look (my day in a paragraph or two) NO POEMS! I suck so hard at poems, 20 minutes just to think of two lines. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 3:47 pm
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 3:48 pm
Directory -Trinket, Chap 1, (on page 1). introduction * comments * directory * updates * extra *
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 3:50 pm
Updates ----------------------- 5/1/2012 -Form is created -First post and Daily Look posted -First series and post of series, Trinket, is posted ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 3:52 pm
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 3:59 pm
Daily Look Tuesday May 1st, 2012 Everything's the same, very little drama, which is very weird in our grade. I'll tell you straight up, EVERYDAY is crazy. Too much drama. Karina and Tori are fighting over something, and their like BFs.
Ashley just backstabbed Jessica, by going out with Nico after Jessica and Nico just confessed their love for each other. I'm telling you, Ashley had WAY too many chances with Nico. Jess is going to move to Texas this summer and it was her last chance to finally go out with Nico.
Karina and Julia were messing around, theres 2 sides of the storys but long story short, Julia smacked Karina and Karina's earing was pulled down by Julia's hand. Now Karina has an infected and bleeding ear that's split open.
So that's my day, well at least what happened.... Video of the Day: Draw with Me by MikeInel -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 4:40 pm
Trinket Chapter 1
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He finally ran out of energy, though his foe seemed still up and running, full of power. Full of life. "You actually thought you could beat me, boy. I warned you, and you took it as a joke." A smirk appeared on her face. The boy gathered enough strength and got up to throw one hit, but she simply dodged it, grabbed his fist, and threw him across the field. She walked towards me, telling him something, but he wasn't sure. The boy's ears were bleeding and vision was fuzzy. The girl put her hand on his face, and that's all he could remember.
He woke up to food being put in his mouth. The person who was feeding him shrieked. "AHH!" the woman said. He spat out the food. He was slowly returning to conscious. The woman examined him. "Do you know your name" He sat there, confused, as raised his hand up to rub his head, "Um. I don't think so..." he heard the crashing sound of chains, and realised he was chained to something. His vision came back. The room was a pale blue, with hospital-like beds and someone laying in each one. Everyone seemed chained to the bed like he was.
"Zane. His name is Zane." A woman walked in. She was wearing a black with red stiching tux lwith bootcut dress pants. She had red hair with black highlights and a black top hat. She was ghostly pale and had ocean blue eyes. "Giselle? What are you doing here?" Seems like the woman's name is Giselle, the boy thought. "Nothing, Autumn. Just here to announce that now we have the mininum of 40 people, everyone will now be free from the room and will have their own dorm, with their team, of course." Everyone in the room cheered. Except for Zane. He was lost in thought. Autumn spoke, "You may be free from the beds," She pressed buttons that were on the remote, "Please line up, from who came here first, and who came last." Everyone obeyed orders. Zane tryed to make a break for it and escape, but when he got to his feet, he simply fell because of no balance. "You're a slow learner, now aren't you." Giselle's eyes, they looked familiar. Fierce but calm. Zane took his place with the others. "Okay, there gonna be 4 teams. Red, Blue, Yellow, and Green. Everyday there will be a challenge, whether independantly or with a team. You must obey the rules. Consiquences if you disobey." "As you can see, their is a types of potion Autumn has in her hands. Each challenge you may drink one or all of the potions. Don't worry, their's a great variety of potions that we have. Beware. Some can bring instant death, or great power. Portions are very important, too. Too much or too little can also lead to death." Autumn started pouring potions into little cups. "This is a harmless potion," Autumn had said, "And it will help you give you your true power, according to your personality." She gave the last one to Zane. "Have fun." (Should I continue or make some tweaks?)
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Posted: Sun May 06, 2012 2:33 pm
well i like your story a lot and hope you continue writing
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