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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 6:31 am
ғeel free to call me. . . Gamzee Makara υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . . A Guy
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. . 17
The υniverse welcomed me on. . . January 3rd
α lot of people say I'm. . . Calm, just calm, I don’t get scared easily and I'm pretty laidback. I don’t overreact about things as well as other people. Scary, not just my appearance witch most people find unnerving but it is hilarious to scare other people. A jokester, I tend to joke around a little too much, I mean to me life is a joke and most people can’t tell weather I’m joking or serious.
care to hear my story? My dad is an eccentric billionaire of Hugh incorporation so he was never home, and my mother died when I was born. So that left me alone, my father paid my uncle Greg to take care of me. But Uncle Greg never came by; instead he spent his time out to sea leaving me home alone as he would occasionally check in every year or so to see how I was doing. When I turned 17 I decided to run away from home, I felt like no one cared about me there so I sighned myself up for the Fuyu Academy, packed my backpack with all my things grabed my pills and left.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . . I have the power to go into people's dreams.
I aםore. . . ○ Horns ○ My unicycle ○ The pies I make ○ Stardust ○ Miricles ○ My guitar
єveryone of these drive me mad. . . ○ People who think they are cool ○ Abusement ○ People who cant take a joke ○ Sunglasses (they make no sence gonk )
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . . House: Eirannes Dorm: Sinopia Dorm Homeroom: World Studies / Magical Creatures. чou see, I'm controlled by . . . Laurens backup
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 7:50 pm
Hello! Sorry for late feedback!
Personality -Could you elaborate on that? Individually, the points make sense, but put together, not so much. How often do you see a calm, yet scary guy who likes to pull pranks?
Biography -I understand you're trying to fit with the minimum requirement, but you must include why he is at Fuyu Academy or how he came in the first place. -Did anyone ever take care of him at all in his childhood?
Abilities -Please be wary that even controlling a dream is a form of godmoding, so I will ask that it be removed.
House: -Please select only one set of choices which you've marked there. So either he's in "Math/Science" or "World Studies/Magical Creatures".
Appearance -Out of curiosity, does he actually have horns? If yes, a simple explanation or comment would suffice.
Also, please note that there are a few spelling mistakes in your profile and we value literacy, so if you could edit those, it would be appreciated as well.
Please quote me back once you're done and I'll look back at it.
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 7:38 pm
Sapphire Waltz Hello! Sorry for late feedback!
Personality -Could you elaborate on that? Individually, the points make sense, but put together, not so much. How often do you see a calm, yet scary guy who likes to pull pranks?
Biography -I understand you're trying to fit with the minimum requirement, but you must include why he is at Fuyu Academy or how he came in the first place. -Did anyone ever take care of him at all in his childhood?
Abilities -Please be wary that even controlling a dream is a form of godmoding, so I will ask that it be removed.
House: -Please select only one set of choices which you've marked there. So either he's in "Math/Science" or "World Studies/Magical Creatures".
Appearance -Out of curiosity, does he actually have horns? If yes, a simple explanation or comment would suffice.
Also, please note that there are a few spelling mistakes in your profile and we value literacy, so if you could edit those, it would be appreciated as well.
Please quote me back once you're done and I'll look back at it. [edited] Personallity: i couldnt really understand what you ment by that so i tried to fix that Bio: i hope it meets your requirements Abitiles: fixed Appearence: yes he does have horns, sharp teeth, yellow eyes, and grey skin because he is a troll. House: ok i fixed that aswell Regard of spelling: i am not the best in spelling so i sent the profile through spellcheck hope it makes a differance
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2012 8:14 pm
Hello again, thanks for the updates.
Everything looks okay now, but could you indicate somewhere in his profile that he's a troll, like in Homestuck? I actually only know the series by name, so I was confused as to why he would be a "troll" until a fellow crew member helped me out there.
Gamzee Makara is approved and sorted into Eirannes!
Please wait for his dorm, meanwhile feel free to begin posting!
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2012 7:06 pm
Sapphire Waltz Hello again, thanks for the updates.
Everything looks okay now, but could you indicate somewhere in his profile that he's a troll, like in Homestuck? I actually only know the series by name, so I was confused as to why he would be a "troll" until a fellow crew member helped me out there.
Gamzee Makara is approved and sorted into Eirannes!
Please wait for his dorm, meanwhile feel free to begin posting! Thanks, and just for the record I laughed so hard when you called me out for being a homestuck
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:17 am
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Eirannes House, Sinopia Dorm
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Posted: Thu May 31, 2012 10:50 pm
ғeel free to call me. . . Tyler Ryan-Dean
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . . male
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. . 16
The υniverse welcomed me on. . . May 6
α lot of people say I'm. . . Shy, I don't have a lot of self confedence and I have a hard time speaking up for myself. A push over, people who bully me normally get the satisfaction of my pain and as I said before I have a hard time standing up for myself. Hopeful, I always think that tommorrow is going to be a better day and that you can always find the good in people.
care to hear my story? My childhood was pretty good, I grew up with two loving dads. One was gentle and overly protective, the other was outgoing and adventerous. All together we would have the best of times, just the three of us. When I was younger I was struck by polio and I couldn't feel my legs, and over time eventually I had to get them amputated from the knee down. My dads loved me no matter what happened they were always by my side. Occationally I would get bullied in school, the other kids would call me "retarted" because of my wheel chair and when I would cry from the torment they would call me a "baby", eventually my dads found out about this. There was absolutly no argueing my first dad pulled me out of school and my other whent right to my junior high and yelled at the principal for allowing this to go on. After years whent by I had finally convinced both of them to allow me to go to a public school and for them to quit home schooling me, so they sent me to the safest one arround, the Fuyu Academy.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . . The ability to manipulate fire, but I'm not the best at it occationally I accendentally burn myself while practicing.
I aםore. . . ○ Planes ○ Dreaming ○ Nice people ○ Animals ○ Being in the air
єveryone of these drive me mad. . . ○ Spiders ○ Bullies ○ Nightmares ○ The dark
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . . House: Dorm: [Dorm Room, Please edit in when you're assigned one.] Homeroom: World Studies / Magical Creatures. чou see, I'm controlled by . . . Laurens backup
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:20 pm
Hello,
After some discussion with the crew, we have come to a consensus that we are no longer accepting characters from original works. So, since Tavros Nitram originates from Homestuck, we cannot accept him as is.
Sorry for the inconvenience and hope that you can find some way to still create a character, feel free to quote me or PM me so I can look over the profile again or discuss this further with you. Thank you.
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Sapphire Waltz Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2012 3:27 pm
Thank you for telling me, I will no longer continue to do as such. I have made changes to the profile, but is it ok if I still use the same picture and behavior. I really had my heart set on roleplaying as a timid guy in a wheel chair.
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 2:40 pm
Hi again,
Everything looks okay, but could you expand on his ability a bit more? If you need some pointers: -How good is he at using his power? -Are there any drawbacks? -Any conditions to use his powers? (Uses his hands, mind, eyes, etc.)
Quote me again and sorry for the wait!
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 2:45 pm
done ^w^ with the edit, and yes he has to use his mind, look and point to the fire and move his hand to get it to move
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Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2012 6:03 pm
Tyler Ryan-Dean is accepted and sorted into Catian!
Please be patient for his dorm, meanwhile you many begin posting.
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 7:38 pm
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Tyler now has a dorm!
Catian House, Stizza Dorm
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