Welcome to Gaia! ::

THIS IS HALLOWEEN

Back to Guilds

WHERE IT IS ALWAYS HALLOWEEN (and sometimes exams) 

Tags: Halloween, Demons, Monsters, Roleplay, Academy 

Reply { Halloween Subspace } --- Quests and character approval
[ENROLLMENT] Pich - Death Horseman [APPROVED] Goto Page: 1 2 [>] [»|]

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Sadi Sidhe

Shameless Nerd

12,200 Points
  • Millionaire 200
  • Bunny Hoarder 150
  • Pie For All! 300
PostPosted: Wed Apr 25, 2012 9:50 pm


LOST CLAN CREATION FORM
[Crits still loved!]


The Horseman

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

Name: Pich (pron: PihCH, Khmer for 'diamond')
Nicknames: Pik
Gender: Male
Age: -- N/A

Original Clan: Death

Job Role: Jewelcrafter
Jewelcrafters have the unique capability of manipulating Fear-imbued gemstones and matter and giving them a stronger power. They also are well versed in metal smithing and weapon crafting, combining their abilities together to create strong Fear-powered weapons, tokens of blessings, and specifically, accessories, Omens, that empower various areas of Fear.


Personality:
Pich is shaken by the loss of so many friends and family members, as well as much of his culture. While he does not yet know many of the survivors, especially those from the other clans, he considers their shared survival a sort of bond, and as such wishes to do what he can to aid the community as a whole. He is content to stay in the background, doing the basic but no less necessary tasks that he is best suited for, mostly involving metalworking. Whether making decorations to lift peoples spirits, and make this new place feel a bit more like home, or making simple nails for building, he feels a sense of peace knowing he is accomplishing something useful.

Humble - Pich was a relatively junior Jewelcrafter, and is not yet confident in his skills, for the most part. He wears most of his work beneath his clothing, if he wears it at all. The main exception is his work in scale-mail, which he wears proudly. He also does not feel himself above any task, no matter how menial, if he is the best suited to the task and it needs doing.

Quiet - Not to be mistaken with shy. If he has something to say, he has no problem whatsoever saying it. He just doesn't feel the need to make noise for its own sake. He tends to speak quietly, forcing those around him to be quiet as well if they wish to hear him rather than trying to talk over them. He rarely raises his voice unless there is danger or he is very angry indeed.

Elitist - This is not to say that he actually thinks any specific type of person is better than any other. Rather, he will always chose his own people - friends, family, anyone he shares some bond with - over a stranger. But who he considers 'his people' can be an eclectic choice, people from any clan or social caste, or even outside the clans altogether. However, he hates the Hunters for what they did to his people, and will never consider one of them 'his.'

Mini Pet Lover - Pich loves cute, furry predators. Such creatures, unfortunately, are entirely capable of sensing death on him, and as such tend to react with either fear or aggression. He is not discouraged, however, and keeps trying! Perhaps some day he'll meet one that can see past his aura of death to the basically gentle soul beneath. Or maybe one with an atrophied sense of self preservation.
He spends so much time observing mini pets, sometimes behaviors he has picked up from them enter his own repertoire when he has to deal with other clan members. He uses a lot more body language than is normal, sometimes in place of verbal language. A toothy grin makes him uncomfortable, even if he knows it is not meant as a show of threat. Occasionally you may even hear a growl, bark, chirp, or other odd sound pass his lips. He is also particularly good at reading others' body language and tone, though horrible at the subtleties of language.

Recluse - Pich spends so much time trying to make nice with vicious little balls of fluff that his socialization skills are a bit atrophied, even among his kind. The death of most of his friends and family has only heightened this trait in him, and now he much prefers being with mini pets to his own kind.
In general, he would much rather do his job quietly in the background and be ignored, or at least minimize direct interaction, then disappear off to somewhere quiet. Though, he remembers seeing a few mini pet-ish students visiting his isle... before. Maybe, when things are more settled and he has time, he will go see if he can find them...

Open Book - Due to a Jewelcrafting effort gone wrong, Pich has odd green 'wings' of FEAR leaking from his sides and just over hie eyes. They don't do anything useful, but they can be handy for reading his moods. When he is excited, scared, or angry his wings flare brighter with the excess energy he is giving off. When he is feeling particularly depressed, tired, or apathetic they can dim or even disappear entirely. He can exert some conscious control over this, just like one can control ones expressions with effort and if not taken by surprise, but it is harder to control than his expressions and takes much conscious effort.

Hobbies:

Scale-mail - Ok, so it's kind of part of his job, as metalworking is part of Jewelcrafting. But he has a special love of scale- and other chainmails, and it is the only part of his art that he feels truly confident in.

Braiding - Related to his work, but he likes braiding a lot more than just metal. He enjoys braiding string, hair, and even plants. Before his home was destroyed, he had a number of smallish plants that he had braided in intricate patterns as they grew, and he sorely misses them.

Mount Form:
Nebi, a ghostly leopard that appears to be made of whispy spiderwebs. If you look closely, you think you might just see its skeleton through the delicate form. Its eyes glow faintly blue.
Yes, it is an extension of himself. And yes, he named it. Boys have named worse, deal. He's touchy about it.

Weapon Form:
A pair of sickle-shaped knives with simple leather-wrapped handles. There is a ring at the base of each handle, and he sometimes uses these to twirl his blades as a form of fidgeting while he's thinking.

FEAR Attack:
Moonbeams Dancing on Water - Pich uses his FEAR to subtly move his scale-mail in such a way that it creates hypnotic patterns with the light, hoping to distract his opponent long enough to get behind them for a sneak attack. (Headlights)


Physical Description:
Eye Colour: Aqua, slit pupils like a cat
Hair Colour/Style: Silver, straight, slightly longer in front, with uneven bangs.
Skin Colour: Tan
Clothing Style/Colours: Black, loose-wrapped clothes, gathered at wrist and ankle. Scale-mail covering his back and lower legs. A bit of decorative scale-mail on his head.
Extra: Lovely green FEAR 'wings' from his sides and over his eyes.
References: Official Art? XD (by Cheshire)
PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:11 am


Taking crits/suggestions!

Especially looking for help with:

-Personality: the phrasing more than the basic idea, I really like how he's forming up but sometimes have trouble getting the idea across in words. Kinda like Pich! XD

Sadi Sidhe

Shameless Nerd

12,200 Points
  • Millionaire 200
  • Bunny Hoarder 150
  • Pie For All! 300

revenant aria

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:07 am


CAN I SAY .. I REALLY LIKE HIM OMG ;; <3 his personality is perfect and he's adorable C:

the little things you gave him are just perfect ok ;;
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:33 am


Random Artist


Aww, thanks! I'm glad you like him. <3
Especially since, if I am remembering correctly, you play his boss-lady. XD

Thinking of giving him a secret soft-spot for animals, or maybe just a certain kind of animal... not sure yet. lol

Sadi Sidhe

Shameless Nerd

12,200 Points
  • Millionaire 200
  • Bunny Hoarder 150
  • Pie For All! 300

revenant aria

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 12:57 pm


medea is his boss lady~ cool

YEAAH GO FOR IT
PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:43 pm


Random Artist


And maybe... animals do not like him! Because they sense the death on him. So they tend to react with either fear or aggression. But he keeps trying! Hmm...

Sadi Sidhe

Shameless Nerd

12,200 Points
  • Millionaire 200
  • Bunny Hoarder 150
  • Pie For All! 300

Boozver

Dangerous Fairy

PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 1:19 pm


My character, with all her bad temper, loves seals. And she's also death.... so probably, death has a soft spot for animals smile
PostPosted: Mon Apr 30, 2012 9:04 pm


First off, I can't wait to see what you do with him in RP, since I love Jewelcrafters~

Okay, now to the actual crit here. His personality actually meshes rather well, and I can't see any traits that don't make sense in context with his existence. Everything seems to fit rather well! :'D His personality as a character fits in well with what one would imagine to come from Death, and the details seem to fit rather well, too.

All in all, I think you've done his art justice, and I think he'll be a great character to interact with!

Some Questions/Suggestions, more out of my own curiosity than anything else. l'D;;

-- Why is his mount a ghostly-looking arctic fox? Is there some background knowledge about it, or...? (It seems slightly out of place to me, is all. Maybe that's because it the three tails seems to imply Kitsune (to me, at least) and there are Kitsune students attending Amityville, so it would be kind of weird to have one as a mount, you know? Arctic Foxes don't seem to match up with Death all that much either, so if you have a reason for him having one, I'd like to know it! :'D; )

-- So, about those wing-things. Maybe they're an effect of some kind of jewelry he has on? Or perhaps they were from a Jewelcrafting Accident? (Like, some Fear he was utilizing in a gem backfired, and he got stuck with the effect?) Or anything like that. Perhaps they're just wisps of Fear-Energy that comes from him naturally, like fog that rolls off some characters?

I hope you can figure them out, in any case. ^^ And again, I really like what you've done with him and I hope my comments will be at least a little helpful! ^^

Trira


Sadi Sidhe

Shameless Nerd

12,200 Points
  • Millionaire 200
  • Bunny Hoarder 150
  • Pie For All! 300
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 9:51 pm


Trira


His mount is an arctic fox... because I was trying to think of something cool and shadowy that wasn't a horse or the large cat that a lot of people seem to be going for, and that was a predator. The three tails really were just because I loved that image, I was thinking of taking them out and making a note to ignore the extra tails in the reference.

Oh, I like the idea of a Jewelcrafting accident as the cause for his 'wings.' I might wait to see if they release more specifics of the mechanics of Jewelcrafting before I give any details, but if I stay vague for now... I like it!

Thanks so much! Your crit was very helpful, and I'm glad you like the way he's going. So do I! XD
PostPosted: Tue May 01, 2012 10:11 pm


Random Poll! Reconsidering mount choice! XD Vote in poll please, or feel free to make suggestions!

Ghost Fox (ignore the extra tails)
Ghost Wolf
Demonic Wolf
Spiderweb Leopard
Other - please post


The people have spoken! The ghost fox stays! Still willing to consider other options until he's accepted though, so feel free to post if you have an awesome idea!

Sadi Sidhe

Shameless Nerd

12,200 Points
  • Millionaire 200
  • Bunny Hoarder 150
  • Pie For All! 300

Euphoric Ghost

Kawaii Cub

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2012 6:13 pm


Add more flaws.

It highlights the good things about him, and also adds more flavor.

Maybe something about being reclusive, like he like animals so much that he favors their companions over others, and maybe that'll explain his quietness too. With the loss of many friends and family, he surrounded himself with animals. He would have probably run away, but he still takes pride in being a Horseman and decided to stick around to continue the traditions.

or something. XD
PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2012 6:30 pm


Euphoric Ghost


Yay crit!

Recluse... I like that. I was trying to think of a good one, that fits him nicely. Maybe he would be more partial to animal-like students too. XD

Sadi Sidhe

Shameless Nerd

12,200 Points
  • Millionaire 200
  • Bunny Hoarder 150
  • Pie For All! 300

Euphoric Ghost

Kawaii Cub

PostPosted: Wed May 02, 2012 10:11 pm


Sadi Sidhe


Yay crit!

Recluse... I like that. I was trying to think of a good one, that fits him nicely. Maybe he would be more partial to animal-like students too. XD


Oh yeah, I forgot to add that, I thought about it when I was writing. Oh oh, to further his animal thing, maybe sometimes, he communicates with a series of chirps, howls and grunts, haha.
PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2012 8:31 am


Euphoric Ghost


Haha, do like! *is a total animal person, and has been known to do this herself - though only on purpose, so far* XD

Eh, what think you? Not sure if I should try to switch that over to the recluse trait, leave as-is, or make it an entirely new trait. 'Wild Child' or something...

Sadi Sidhe

Shameless Nerd

12,200 Points
  • Millionaire 200
  • Bunny Hoarder 150
  • Pie For All! 300

Euphoric Ghost

Kawaii Cub

PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2012 1:27 pm


Sadi Sidhe


I think it looks good. Wild Child might be too much, he's still Horseman, not a total animal. emotion_yatta
Reply
{ Halloween Subspace } --- Quests and character approval

Goto Page: 1 2 [>] [»|]
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum