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"His brain was being cooked, images started flashing into his mind. He remembered how the doctors had inserted those thin strips of metal down his spinal cord. Standard procedure, they'd said. In a deep sea prison, an inmate who lost his mind could do a lot of damage."


This is a futuristic, dystopian thriller that I've been working on in my spare time. If you've got any suggestions, comments, feedback or criticism, feel free to drop a post in the thread, or send me a PM, both are fine with me.

I've got a separate thread for this story on the Original Prose forum, but so far I haven't been getting any real reaction, so I though I'd try posting it here.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2