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 Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 5:19 pm
Appearence:  -Description- Name: Wail Markus Age: while he is much older then he seems, he appears to be in his early 20s Gender: Male Race: Devil Likes: Wail enjoys music of any verity, and also loves books. He enjoys exploring old places for lost treasure, art, and loves money and power above all else. Dislikes: He hates those who act foolishly and fail to think things through, so idiots. He also hates those who defeat him or those who cling to honor and traditions. Sexuality: Straight Relationship Status: Single Alignment: Villain Series: Society Personality: Biography: (Atleast one paragraph.) -Fighting Style- Character Class: Powerhouse Powers: [Power 1] Weapons: [Weapon 1] Knowledge: [Knowledge 1] Speed: (Slow, Normal, Fast) (Super fast for Lancers) Weakness: (List one MAJOR weakness) -Author Notes- Username: Inspirations: Theme Song: Famous Quote: (A quote your character says a lot or is known for) Character Notes: (Anything Extra)
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 9:50 pm
1. Make the Hybrid something that makes sense maybe? I mean...pure energy? Really? No....just no.
2. Also, you have too many powers and none of them make any sense. Powerhouses have three powers. Not 2000. Fix it.
This character is not accepted.
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 10:05 pm
my powerhouse has 1 power with 4 sub abilities for it
My guy is part human and magic energy incarnated, meaning a human shell with magic energy, its half in half, hes not made of pure energy.
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 10:24 pm
I'm sorry, but this doesn't make sense. A human with magical energy is called a Human Mage. That's it. Not this hybrid stuff.
As for the powers, I will have Pan look at it. I don't like it, and not sure what to do.
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 10:32 pm
A human can already use magic if they learned it and have magic, the difference is that Infinities body exists with magic as a key element in his body needed to survive, while hes not made of magic, his human form could not maintain itself without magic infused with his body, the difference is a mage could survive if he loses his magic and just live as a human, without magic in his body, Infinities body would fall apart, he cannot live without magic.
And your skeptical about it because it has sub abilities, but thats a statement i could easily argue, if someone said they controlled fire, then i could make the argument that throwing a fire ball is a sub ability of that power, its what i call a branch, normally with a power, there's branches on what you can do with that (ex. Fire = fireballs Ice=Ice shards) if we looked at sub abilities everyone would have dozens of abilities, the difference is that my sub abilities are given out, theres a list of what i can do, and the limitations, meaning i cant just make up a new sub ability, i think that more then fits the requirements of the profile correct?
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 10:43 pm
Destiny just wants to be sure. I'm sorry but your gonna have to wait a little bit longer.
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 10:51 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:32 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2012 5:49 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2012 6:34 pm
The boss has spoken. It turns out that your powers are too open, so be more specific! Sorry for the wait. Also a bio... And Knowledge, and a weapon... And personality!
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Posted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 6:36 pm
ill be remodling this profile, so it might take awhile, ill start tonight though, thank you ^.^ so for now just dont look at that skelly.
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