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Half a year's growth. Am I improving?

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Air Beast

PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 5:35 pm


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So did I improve any? biggrin
PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:14 pm


As far as the color choice, yes it is. The colors you used are a lot easier to look at, as well as the gradiants for the background.
As for composition, the smoke in front of the piller gives it some depth, which is good.

So, overall, yes there is improvement. Good job. 3nodding

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Air Beast

PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:39 am


AuroraCelestine
As far as the color choice, yes it is. The colors you used are a lot easier to look at, as well as the gradiants for the background.
As for composition, the smoke in front of the piller gives it some depth, which is good.

So, overall, yes there is improvement. Good job. 3nodding

Yes! Thank you! biggrin
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 11:04 am


You're adding in a lot of shading, and some highlights, so that's good. I'd say it's definitely an improvement.

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