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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 5:35 pm
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Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:14 pm
As far as the color choice, yes it is. The colors you used are a lot easier to look at, as well as the gradiants for the background. As for composition, the smoke in front of the piller gives it some depth, which is good.
So, overall, yes there is improvement. Good job. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:39 am
AuroraCelestine As far as the color choice, yes it is. The colors you used are a lot easier to look at, as well as the gradiants for the background. As for composition, the smoke in front of the piller gives it some depth, which is good.
So, overall, yes there is improvement. Good job. 3nodding Yes! Thank you! biggrin
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 11:04 am
You're adding in a lot of shading, and some highlights, so that's good. I'd say it's definitely an improvement.
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