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Name: Sairentoko Shiakuma

Age: 15

Gender: male

Sexuality: straight

Appearance:

Background:He was born on Febuary 17, 1997.He is originally from New York. He lived a good life for 8 years. Then suddenly in one night his family was taken from him. His family was killed by murder jack the ripper. Somehow he survived.He had no relatives so had to lived on the streets since he was 8(he was 5ft5in when he was 8 and 158lbs). He fought everyday since then becoming stronger than kids twice his age. H joined DWMA to find him and kill him.

Partner:He has no partner yet.

Abilities: He can use: Soul Perception: this allows him to see other peoples
souls.

Shattering Fist: he uses this to break any bone in the
human body

Phantom Kicks: a series of kicks that can't be blocked

Twisted Fist of Death: One hit from thid fist means
death for any person
(He doesn't use this move often)

Akuma Force: punches his soul into yours

Likes: He likes a good fight, delicious food, and his friends. He like every color. He also likes being sad. He likes darkness and night. Also he likes the moon.

Dislikes:He reals despises evil and people who hurt his friends and other people. He hates bright lights.

Personality: He can be really level headed but when in a fight he can get very angry.

Height: He is 6ft.

Weight: He weighs 180

Hobbies/skills: His hobbies are reading, playing sport, hanging out with friends, seeing new places, watching tv, listening to jazz music. Also he is very skillful in hand to hand combat and weapon combat.

Whose side you're on:He is on the good side.

Accepted

Sairento...would it kill you to use some proper spelling, grammar, and capitalization? And I agree with Kazuki; That is NOT a bio! Can you try putting some more effort into your grammar, spelling, capitalization and biography skills?
And for your bio, why don't you try being a little more specific?
Like, how was your family killed by the murderer? Were they ambushed? Plus, kids can't live on the streets at young age; they'll die. Kids from ages newborn to nine-years old cannot survive on the streets.
Again, I agree with Kazuki; Try being a little more descriptive when putting down the list of abilities. I suggest Soul Perception, High-jump, Dodge roll, Lip-reading, and what not.

That seems about right. I mean logically, babies can't really survive on the streets without proper nursing; they'll most likely die. Grim yes, but it's the sad truth.
You know what else is the sad (but more depressing) truth? Titanic. I got a magazine based on the Titanic from National Geographic a few weeks ago. I started reading it and...wow. Reading it made me depressed.... crying

The fact that everyone's ideal dream cruise just died is heart-breaking...

He edited his Bio. But there's one problem:
Jack The Ripper.
We know of him, but we've never seen him.
We know of him because he left letters written in blood.
Nobody has seen him.
No one has! We know of him but we know nothing of what he looks like.
You might want to edit that...