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 Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 3:19 pm
It confounds me
How life can be
Seemingly unreal
But oh can you feel
When you fall
When you must crawl
To the top once more
from the ocean to the shore
And even though it's in stone
That again you'll be alone
You'll never stop trying
And for a moment stop crying
Just long enough to be happy
Once again
~Miranda
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What do you think? I just did it five minutes ago...^^;
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 3:49 pm
I like it alot. I can't write something like that in 5 minutes. But i really do like it.
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 7:04 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 10:14 pm
Cool we have another improv writer! :applauds:
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 5:40 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 7:58 pm
That was really good! But did you write it in 5 minutes? I know it was 5 minutes ago (when you first posted), but did you write it that quickly?
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Posted: Sat Feb 25, 2006 8:03 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 4:36 pm
angryandhomicidal That was really good! But did you write it in 5 minutes? I know it was 5 minutes ago (when you first posted), but did you write it that quickly?
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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 6:13 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:25 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:26 pm
I cannot ryhme. I try, and I just can't. I'm good with haiku and freeverse poems, but I don't even try and write rhyming poems anymore.
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 1:40 pm
Leo D. Vincent I cannot ryhme. I try, and I just can't. I'm good with haiku and freeverse poems, but I don't even try and write rhyming poems anymore.
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 1:18 am
it's really cool. Keep writing wink
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