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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 9:26 pm

People have been asking me to upload some sketchbook pages so here they are:

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And heres a recent full body concept i drew within 40 mins:

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questions,comments,concern,critiques?

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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:54 pm

I know it is really odd, but i like the noses, haha. It's interesting seeing the different kinds, as well as the emotions in the eyes.

The legs and pose work are really good as well. I never thought to draw the horizontal lines that help show the roundness of the legs.

One thing I noticed was that you outline a lot of the women's lips. I suggest trying to use shading to define their shape, rather than line.
Just a tip I learned in art class this quarter.

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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 7:56 pm

AuroraCelestine

I know it is really odd, but i like the noses, haha. It's interesting seeing the different kinds, as well as the emotions in the eyes.

The legs and pose work are really good as well. I never thought to draw the horizontal lines that help show the roundness of the legs.

One thing I noticed was that you outline a lot of the women's lips. I suggest trying to use shading to define their shape, rather than line.
Just a tip I learned in art class this quarter.

Thank you very much for the tip! i will try adding more value to my sketches as suggested to make them seem more defined and more realistic =] tomarrow will be my sketchbook day, so i'll upload some new sketches tomarrow. today was my traditional modeling day so ive been modeling with clay all day.

but thanks again for the tip, i will definitely give that a try and post it =]

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