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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2012 5:49 am
Character Name: He commonly goes by Trik – Though his official name is Sparks. Type: Pokemon Species: Electrike Gender: Male Height: 162 cm (about 5’3”) Age: 17 Hair Color: Green with yellow chunks hanging over his ears. Eye Color: Gold Skin Color: Golden-tan Other: Nature: Loyal Ability: Static - Skill Set: Flamethrower, Thunder, Fire Fang, Thunder Fang Personality: -Positive trait - Before and after his dream of Munna, Sparks has been a loving pokemon. He would curl up in bed next to his trainer for as long as he could remember – always staying by his side, and never tempted by the gifts and promises of another. As a pokemon, Sparks would always do his best to please his trainer. He would battle until he collapsed, train as if nothing else mattered and heed his trainers every command with not the slightest bit of hesitation. -Positive trait - Passionate -Neutral trait - Active -Negative trait - Reckless -Negative trait - Excessive Strengths: Adaptable, Quick Witted, Physically Fast Weaknesses: Rushes into things, easily distracted, Clumsy History:
Stage one - Hatched in captivity by a breeder - Partnered with a six year old child (Breeder’s son) - Attended Pokèmon academy (Have to look up age limit) - Has battle experience - Protects Trainer-partner – is protected by trainer-partner in turn -Trainer’s overly caring – doesn’t want to push his Pokèmon too far -Sparks wants to prove he can protect his trainer just as well as his trainer can protect him -Desperate to prove himself -wants his trainer to understand his potential as a Pokèmon – cannot manage to get over the communication barrier - Trainer protects him all the time…
stage two - Massive battle – Sparks gets seriously Injured – The trainer they are battling is cruel – refused to let him and his trainer escape on defeat – demanded a ‘trophy’ tried to take Sparks for himself – Trainer ‘return’ sparks – runs, and is beaten by the cruel trainer. Police arrive on scene before Cruel trainer can strip Sparks’s trainer of his Pokèmon and possessions – Cruel trainer runs off – Sparks doesn’t know this until he is released from his Pokèball in the hospital – his trainer bruised and a little broken but otherwise fine. Sparks decides he wants to be able to help his trainer – be the one to protect him – wants to be able to prevent this from ever happening again.
Musharna Grants his wish – turns Sparks human.
Stage three
-At first, Sparks stays with his human – learning their ways as best he can – learns to cope with the oddities of being in a humanoid body – has difficulty learning to balance on two legs – never gets a total knack for it – wants to run before he can walk so to speak.
- Trainer accepts the change – and treats Sparks’ as an equal – helping him learn how to control the various abilities Sparks’ has as well as how to master the art of acting human – they become friends – not just Pokèmon and trainer.
- During their wanderings, come across the cruel trainer – Sparks recognises him for who he is and attacks him, giving him no time to react. Using his new found skill with the human appendages combined with his various skills that carried through from his days as a Pokèmon – Sparks defeats the trainer, and literally, kicks the man while he is down – causing near-fatal injuries.
His trainer stops him from applying the final blow – begs him to stop – and Sparks obeys, spitting at the bruised body of his trainers tormentor before, body bristling with static electricity, turning around and heading home.
It was a few weeks after that he asked to have his freedom – promising to return regularly but feeling he needed some time to sort himself out. He was afraid of hurting his trainer – though this was never brought up and the parting was a happy one.
True to his word Sparks returned whenever he could – and his trainer keeps up a regular correspondence with him – filling him in on all his teammates – for even as a humanoid Sparks never truly broke the ties that bound human to trainer – Sparks had proven himself to his trainer – and now he had to experience the world as his trainer had before – always knowing if things got too tough that his trainer would be waiting for him back home.
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2012 5:57 am
Critique is accepted at any stage in this process - I wouldn't post it otherwis. I like to catch things before I get too carried away - so the above is his basic outline... if you feel like responding Go right ahead and tell me what's wrong already ^^ I will have a To Do List just below this paragraph - so if something needs changing (iyo) just yell and I'll add it there...
This'll probably undergo several changes between now and when he's finished as I explore the various events in his life and alter how they could affect him.
Todo
Expand on Personality See if there needs to be anything added to "other" Add description of Pokemon Ability/techniques Join the dots so to speak in his history - smooth it out Edit his Personality so it reflects his basic History Bounce between history and Personality a bit, refine, rinse and repeat. check to see that History works with Plot outline Make sure Personality doesn't contradict itself
Ask for Critique -
Make changes as required
Possible refine, rinse and repeat on History/Personality and request Critique once more.
end todo
Note: Obviously, nothing's set in stone apart from the pokemon and his abilities... Personality, History and Appearance will probably undergo some drastic changes until I'm absolutley satisfied... if I'm really stuck - I'll ask for Critique - though I'll try to be finished without getting stuck ^^
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:03 pm
13/3/2012
-Have started updating his personality – may need to switch th ethr third profile style – not sure yet – doing this at work at the moment so can’t mull over it too much – just wanting to get my stuff out before I forget it. “Loving” Positive trait is not yet complete – will need to add post-dream “loving” specifics before moving on to other four traits. - I keep slipping bits into his personality that should probably be left for his History – not too sure. I’ll revise it this afternoon, for now, I shall have to leave as is.
30/5/2012
Been busy irl... Gonna get this done over the weekend ^^
I should have an update today some time =D
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