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Was looking for some criticism?

Anilemy

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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 12:48 am

Hello Guild...I'm rather new to Gaia, but I'm no stranger to art. After 6, going on 7 years of practice, I've become confident enough to show some of my art here. While I am mainly an Anime artist, I have tried broadening my horizons to comic book art. This is one of my more recent artworks, and is signed with my pen name, Melina. I would love some criticism, though please don't be brutal. I'd like to keep the little confidence I have. I do not own a tablet, or a online art software, so I am stuck with the best tools, my paper and pencil.

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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 12:48 pm

Way awesome! smile

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Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 1:51 pm

I'd hafta say.. aside from her foot (feet are totally hard to draw and you did way better than I could ever do btw) It looks amazing smile

Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 9:29 pm

Wow! That's amazing! I especially love her eyes and her lips. Great job there.

Things I'd suggest is that the heel of her foot is too prominent, the end of her ribcage sticks out just a little too much and the line connecting her leg is just a bit too close to her hips. But you'd really have to analyze the picture to see those. c: