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DarkHeartedSorrows

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 4:44 pm


Name: Adam Taylor

Nickname: ---

Age: 19

Birthday: May 10th

Sign: Taurus

Gemstone: Emerald

Blood Type: AB+

Fav. Food: Watermelon Jolly Ranchers - Hnnnnngh

Hated Food: Fish - Tastes... Fishy D:

School: Destiny City University

Hobbies:

Piano || Well, keyboard. He's too poor for a real piano. But Adam spends a lot of time playing and doing some lame composing on his piano. It's not a hobby that he takes seriously, more of one that lets him think and destress after a long day. He's no musician, but he'd like to think he's pretty decent at what he does know.

Romcoms || Okay, so its a little embarassing, but Adam absolutely loves Romantic Comedies. He doesn't care who's in them, or even how bad they are. He'll watch them all day long if he has the chance. Something about the witty dialogue and the heartwarming final confession of love just draws him in until he's absolutely absorbed into a world where that kind of romance is possible.

Virtues:

Protective || Adam can't stand to see his friends in trouble or pain. It ignites a bit of beast in him, and he'll go to great lengths trying to make everything better and protect them from further harm. It doesn't really matter how dire the situation, it could be protecting a friend from a bully or an enemy, or as simple as a friend stressing themselves sick, Adam will try to step in and fix the situation. He's been known to make enemies of his friend's enemies just on principle, and nearly nothing can make him budge on this.

Persistent || Adam won't give up easily on what he wants or thinks is right. He'll keep pushing until he gets a result he's pleased with, and if he fails he won't let it get to him, he'll just pick himself back up and try again. He's all about finding new tactics and techniques to accomplish his goals.

Hardworking || If Adam is anything, he's hardworking. He has a goal in mind, and he gets it done. He's entirely willing to put in the blood, sweat, and tears into whatever he's doing in order to get results. He's willing to take on just about any task, no matter the predicted difficulty, whether it's in his daily life, in his work life, or in his negaverse life. Particularly physical goals can tire him out, and he'll stress himself out over mentally taxing tasks, but he'll still give it a shot.

Flaws:

Workaholic || Perhaps the most significant downside to being hardworking is that sometimes Adam gets entirely wrapped up in his task. He'll spend hours working toward a goal and might forget the time or forgo sleeping in order to finish. He'll stress and work himself sick until he either can't anymore or someone steps in and tells him to chill out. Even then, he might put up a little bit of a fight to get to his work.

Rowdy || Adam can be a little... boisterous. Meaning he'll yell across a crowded room to a friend about something weird, or he'll dougie through his apartment to old rap songs that no one listens to blaring through the stereo without a care in the world. And if you think he's not going to tackle you and wrestle and rough house, well, you're crazy, because he will. Absolutely. Mostly this has to do with growing up in a home with two football star older brothers (if high school ball counts for stardom). It was a loud and rowdy house, and he became a product of that environment.

Vain || Let's face it, Adam likes the way he looks. From spending too much time on his hair in the morning to spending a little too much on his clothes, he takes pride in making himself look good. He's not even ashamed of the way his closet is sorted by jackets and shoes, because in the end, he looks damn good, and he knows it. If you tell him otherwise, he might just scoff in your face and call you jealous, because there's no way he's looking less than fabulous.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Red

Hair: Black, styled like this

Face: Angular

Clothes: Similar to this. Shoes and jackets really make or break an outfit for me, and I really like the shoes and jacket here. No beanie though.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:02 pm


Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Halite

Challenge: Lets light this city up!

Uniform: Main color is silvery-grey, trim is bright red

Top -- Jacket is a little longer than waist length, side fastened with two rows of buttons. Collar is short and stands up with a little fasten in the front, like a leather jacket has. One side of the jacket is long sleeved with the sleeve rolled up a bit, the other side is sleeveless. It's open slightly to reveal a plain black wifebeater underneath. Inside of the jacket is the same color as the piping
Bottoms -- Tight slacks with two lines of piping down either side
Gloves -- Strappy red and black glove, only on the sleeveless arm. Fingers of the glove only cover the index finger and the thumb. (Think how Sam's fingers are covered in Tron Legacy)
Belt -- Belt around his jacket, black with a silver buckle
Shoes -- Big, slouchy boots, metal toe
Shoulders -- Nothing on his shoulders
Accessories -- None
Weapon -- Red Glowstick -> Simple knife with glowing red markings in the blade -> Sword like number three with glowing red pieces and markings in the blade

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shibrogane

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 7:23 am


Just poking through to say that, generally, mineral names that are also periodic table names are not allowed. Why not look into arsenic group minerals, like Arsenolite?
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 7:37 pm


Oh! Didn't know that. Thank you. C:

Changing his name to Halite

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Sleet Tempest Snape

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:47 pm


Just poking in to say that Halite is taken as a name, by Sylent Nyte.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 2:29 pm


Oh o3o I must have missed it when I searched for names.

On to another name change, when I have the time.

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Sleet Tempest Snape

Noble Vampire

PostPosted: Mon Apr 02, 2012 11:27 pm


It's ok, she's not up on the front page. I only know because she's features in the owners signature. ::Nods:: She's also somewhat newish.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 30, 2012 4:22 pm


DarkHeartedSorrows


Heya, DHS!

So far, both of the hobbies look good to me (and I think his affinity with romantic comedies is absolutely adorable xD)! My only question is, do you know how you can incorporate these into roleplay? Both playing piano and watching romantic comedies seem like they have the potential to be solitary hobbies (unless he wants to play keyboard in public or can find situations to watch/discuss/gush over romantic comedies in a social setting) so, if possible I'd love to see another hobby added that would give him an excuse to interact with other people.

Now, for the most part, his virtues and flaws look wonderful to me! They all tie together very nicely (persistent, hardworking and workaholic all compliment each other wonderfully!) however in looking at the virutes—while they all work—I'd like if you could elaborate on how they negatively affect him? Just for clarification! For workaholic you've said that he can stress and work himself sick—how much does this affect his social life? Do his friends grow disenchanted with his work ethics? Does he often push them aside when he's trying to complete a task? And for rowdy—has his rowdiness gotten him in trouble? Has he lost friends? Have the police ever had to interfere? Or is he just loud and occasionally obnoxious? And vain—this one out of all the flaws doesn't quite read as a flaw to me. I feel like you might be able to fit it in with virtues if you just renamed it 'Well-groomed'. However! If you could elaborate on the negative aspects this brings into this life, I think it would be totally fine! Does his vanity every make him late? Does he often go overboard in expenses to make sure he's looking his best? Has he ever gotten into a fight/is he willing to get into a fight to defend his fabulousness or does he just scoff and call you jealous? Or—does he think less of other people that don't dress well? (Or does he see other people that are well-groomed as competition?)

I know it's a lot of questions, but I just want to see it fleshed out a little more! Already you have a good profile that's been really enjoyable to read, and Adam looks like he'll be a fun character to play!

Regarding the Negaverse aspect of the profile, his weapon progression looks good to me! The only thing I have left to note has already been mentioned—that the name Halite is already taken. I notice that you said you'd look for another name when you had more time, so I know you're already working on this! Other than the minor changes/extra information I'd like to see (and maybe the addition of a hobby) I think that he'll be ready to be approved in no time, so if you've made some changes or if you have any questions, feel free to quote me and I'll get back to you as soon as possible!


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