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Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 7:03 pm

Squad Name :
TCO

Squad Leader :
Jack Furlow
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Reason Squad Was Created :
A secrete orginization formed together by high up Military Leaders and Scientest to creat a usabual purpose for infection in soilders to creat a supper infected

Place Where Squad Is Mainly Located :
main HQ Found under the resis of Swesion
contacts around Utopul, and Tasmiba ( gathering high amount of Infected DNA and Data)

Squad Members :
curently:
Jack Furlow

Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 9:01 pm

Not accepted for the current moment. A few things will need to change. First, squad leader has to be an RP character.Two, fix up the grammar under "Reason Squad Was Created", because I can barely make out what it says. Sorry. Three, Utopul is in Asalus. Asalus wasn't involved with medical stuff.Swesion was the medical country, so I say make it so that a group of scientists there are trying to do this secretly or something. That's all that I see wrong so fix it up and it's approved.

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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 5:51 pm

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Not accepted for the current moment. A few things will need to change. First, squad leader has to be an RP character.Two, fix up the grammar under "Reason Squad Was Created", because I can barely make out what it says. Sorry. Three, Utopul is in Asalus. Asalus wasn't involved with medical stuff.Swesion was the medical country, so I say make it so that a group of scientists there are trying to do this secretly or something. That's all that I see wrong so fix it up and it's approved.

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