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your babbygirl

PostPosted: Sat Feb 04, 2012 9:38 pm


in your eyes i see love for every thing
i am in love with your eyes.

in your actions i see all your kindness
i am in love with your actions.

in your sole i see your determination
i am in love with your sole.

but how will i tell you?
i have never seen you sickened.
i have never seen you amused by others desperation.
i will tell you today.

i see you with your friends laughing.
i love seeing you happy.
so ill wait tell your alone so if you do reject me it wont be public.
ill wait tell your alone.

it was the last hour before school was out
i was walking to class. i didn't see you,
you pulled me aside, and asked me
if im seeing any one.
i am clueless i say no still confused.
and you surprise me. you tell me to meet you after class.
"why?" is all i thought during class.
i even missed the question my friends ask me.


after class i went strait to my locker and got my stuff.
i met him by the front entrance of the school.
i wonder why dose he want me to see him?
dose he know i like no love him ?
is he here to tell me to give up?

i saw him.
i fight the erg to run .
wen i got there he said am i going out with any one/
"you already asked that."
he said just answer him .
in his eyes i saw something i have never seen in them.
but i new that look i have seen it in my eyes.
hope is what it is.
i said no.

he said i need to listen and then make a choice.
he said when i see you i feal like i half to be near you.
i always wanted to know you better, and be closer to
your hart.

dose he not know i love him
i need to say something or ill lose him
he started to leave
answer me tomorrow

that's when i new what was happening.
i ran after him.
when i caught him
i told him how i felt.
he looked so so
joyful .
then he pulled me into him and kissed me.

before i knew it i was kissing him back.
i was so well right.
when he pulled away.
he said "he could get use to this"
and that's how it all began.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 4:25 pm


really all i have to say is that you should watch your spelling and punctuation, it would be so much easier to read.

DrksStoryteller9000


your babbygirl

PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:37 pm


thx i will try better
PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 5:50 pm


i went back and fixed it . is it better? question question

your babbygirl


DrksStoryteller9000

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2012 4:58 pm


yes it is better, may i help you with your spelling? its nothing major.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 5:02 pm


yes pleez

your babbygirl

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