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PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2012 11:42 am


User ImageName: Tyalessa Kirkland

Nickname: Tye or Essa

Age: 18

Birthday: 9th June

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Pearl

Blood Type: o neg

Fav. Food: Chicken, anything with chicken is nice 3nodding especially currys

Hated Food: grenn veg (except for spinach)

School: HORIZON INSTITUTE FOR TECHNOLOGY AND SCIENCE (co-ed)

Hobbies:
Reading-Even though Essa loves to read she is picky about the contents of the books she collects, she does not enjoy fantasy stories as she thinks that many of the topic's are overused and she tends to enjoy history and facts in comparison to a conceptual reality that does not hold any real merit in the wake of science. Her favorite topic to read and study are murder stories and books on serial killers. Her interest in the morbid means that she can talk about some rather dark topics which might make others around her seem somewhat uneasy. These conversations usually arise when she is around people who annoy her because she thinks it will put them off of communicating with her, also because its somewhat fun to try and make a pretty cheerleader lose her lunch. (thank you biki cakes) She is not much of a movie watcher as they dont put as much detail into it as books are and it makes spotting the mystery quite easy. Tv is the same and she only watches documentaries and mythbusters on it

Dancing- Essa likes to learn complicated dance routines....just for the fun of it, she thinks its a good activity to do when shes not battling or learning at school. She started this when browsing anime amvs on youtube and found a dance she desperately wanted to try. Recently she has found alot of joy in dances from Japanese songs. Sometimes she will even miss doing work and school stuff because she much prefers to do active things, because being bored makes her extremely cranky and moody with everything and everybody.

Laboratory practicals- Essa's mum is a science teacher for a different university outside of town, and once she and Essa raised enough money, they got a tiny lab in their house to do experiments, this is to make sure Essa doesn't try them at school because they are the sort that if they went wrong, she would get kicked out of school. She enjoys making all sorts of chemical change colours and making small explosions, and knows quite nifty ways to quickly get one done, which means she is the top of the class when it comes to practicals. She kinda gets on teachers nerves with this as she is consistently getting away with sleeping in a pre-lab and then doing great in the following practicals. This makes Essa slightly smug whenever labs are on the subject

Puzzles- If one needs to cheer up a depressed Essa then puzzles are the way to do it. She loves puzzles to death and will spend days doing one even to the point of not being heard of, skipping classes and what not. This again is part of the rather-be-active-not-bored routine she does with dancing, (but this is for her brain not body). So to keep her mind stimulated she does puzzles, the more creative the puzzle, the more cheerful she is.

Virtues:
Logical- Essa tends to try and find rational explanation to things that happen around her, especially if they seem completely paranormal because Essa tends to think that everything runs in straight lines that can be connected to explain most mysterious, problem with this is that eventhough Essa thinks that, doesnt stop unexplainable things from happening.

Cheerful- Essa can brighten up almost any room with her cheerfulness, there is a positive colleration between her cheerfulness and her clumsyness (the more hyper she gets from being cheerful, the more clumsy she is) there is barely anything that will get her down no matter how much you try, so she can handly the most rudest of people, until her mood runs down sort of like how batteries run out of energy

Tolerant- When offended by someone, she only frets about it for a little while, it may be a few mins or just one day but after that she forgives and forgets. Most of the time its just little fights that don't really mean anything and she understands this. It will take a despicable mean so and so to get her down. But other than that her forgiveness is just given without any need of an apology.

Flaws:
Hard to make friends- Essa doesn't like speaking out infront of people that she hasn't known for years, making it hard to be in her enclosed circle of friends. She does tend to judge people who think they look cool when actually they look like complete jerks. She will eventually open up, pretty slowly though.

Impatient:- Essa doesnt like to wait around for things to start, for example those loading screens you see at the start of games, or even waiting to start a lab pratical in class. She may even be tempted to start without peoples permission.

Spacey:- Essa tends to daydream alot so it might get hard for someone to get her attention, it also means she will loose track of what people are talking about including teachers...in the middle of class. This is due to alot of daydreaming whilst reading books. This made her often late for stuff like dinner and family gatherings, so she would most likely be quite late for things in school as well.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Red eyes
Hair: Reddish cooper similar colour to this picture ^^
style: shoulder length ponytail with a fringe that is asymetical on the forehead, but the grows a bit lengthy at the sides a bit like this but shorter so you can still see essa's eyes
accessories: pumpkin hairpin like this, simple and something a kid can make

Face: heart shaped face, with a medium neck and a big smile. her eyebrows are brown, her lips are dull pink and a very light Mediterranean skin
Extra: i'm not sure if its possible or if the artist wants to do this, but if they feel like it can i have a tattoo on the left arm like this one: My tattoo (the red chest bit is only blood, its meant to be shadowing
Clothes: similar green jacket (unbuttoned and sleeves a little shorter)) that has sleeves to the elbow, a grey tank top with jacks head on the torso and dark jeans similar to this with these armer warmers armer warmer reference (my pride and joy) and trainers
PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2012 11:43 am


User ImageSenshi:Sailor Betelgeuse, senshi of pumpkins
Betelgeuse
Challenge: I'll carve you up

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Orange
Secondary Color: Black

Fuku:

Collar -- Orange with a black trim (colorist option: on each side have a pumpkin carved eye done in black)
Bow -- A big orange ribbon that eventually becomes kinda like vines (still orange) (colorist option: add two smaller ribbons on either side of her hips)
Bodice -- A tank top (i dont really want it white, however if theres no choice for a normal sailor scout then i wont complain )
like this without the writing
Sleeves -- no
Brooch -- It can be her gemstone, (black) pearl with a small orange dangly stone dangly from it
Bottoms -- a pleated skirt (like the kottan bell skirt) in two layers; the top being orange and the bottom being black (colorist option: the back of the second layer a bit longer than the front)
Tiara -- like a tangle of vines with a bunch of pumpkins growing out of it
Choker -- classical black choker
Shoes -- orange (broad, i hate tiny stilletos) heels with small black ribbons coming from the top of the back of it and vines comeing up from the actual shoes to the skirt
Gloves -- yes, similar arm warmers to her civ ones but the faces are now pumpkins
Accessories -- a nice silver charm bracelet around her left hand and a red and black ribbon hair clip with a pumpkin like the ones on the arm warmers in the middle



Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack: Name: Pumpkin Pounce
Essa can summon a seed for a normal-sized pumpkin, and throw it at her foes, it will then pounce onto the enemy (with cute evil laughing faces).
advantages: this is a distracting attack, so therefore other senshi's can have a chance to attack or heal while the bad guys are dealing with the pumpkins
disadvantages: It will be easy to swot away or destroy and wont do much damage if any at all
no. of uses: 2-3 times in a battle

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Name: Pumpkin Bouncy Pounce
The number of pumpkins doubles and they are bigger and stronger, so its harder to destroy, but they also bounce on the enemy alot higher than the first so its more dodgable
advantages: the same as the first, these are also harder to break
disadvantages: easier to dodge, still breakable and still wont inflict much pain
no. of uses: 2-3 times

Eternal Sailor Attack: Name: Raining Pumpkin Pounce
Essa will make it rain normal sized pumpkins, 8 at a time, on her opponent, they will be heavy so if thy manage to hit someone it will hurt and it will also hit her opponets faster than her previous too attacks making it harder to dodge
advantages: it does inflict pain (not much though) and hard to dodge (but not impossible)
disadvantages: Again if hit with some sort attack then they will break and there is a possibility of them bouncing towards someone on the friendly side or if a opponent is really clever, they can hit the pumpkins to project them towards Essa or someone else

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2012 1:34 pm


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Heya Choco 8D! Nothing official or anything, but a few things to think about that I saw.

Civilian:
- Reading: For me, I feel if she's an avid reader, she'd read any sort of book. I think what you're leaning more towards is like a love of mystery or... morbidity. When I read it, I feel as though she'd love morbid things in both books, movies, RL, etc. so you might want to change it.

- Laboratory practicals: I think this would be better if you mentioned her having invested some money for a small 'lab' at her own apartment. From what I know in undergrad, you don't really have full access to a lab and you'd always be under supervision, so her doing experiments on her own with the school's lab wouldn't exactly work out.

- Doesn't cry other spilt milk: I think it would make more sense to just make the virtue 'forgiving' or maybe 'tolerant'.

- Shy: I think you need to explain this more. From reading, it sounds like you're describing her more as judgmental and not shy.

- Dangerous: For some reason, this is hard for me to accept as a flaw. I think you're better off working with this last bit "Essa is the kind of person that has so much faith in her choices that she does not think she can be hurt" than dangerous :3

- Scary: I... Don't see much of this as a flaw either. Maybe you can use something like 'violent' or 'short-tempered' along side something where she likes to physically hit someone when she's mad.

Powered side:
- Please link to what Betelgeuse is. Like the wiki article or something <3 It's just important to know that it's an actual celestial body.

- First attack: Does she really fire 1000 seeds? If yes, you have to know that it sounds quite painful and seems like it could seriously harm someone if hit in the eyes or something. The basic attack is only supposed to do little harm, like how some people give like pin pokes, etc. This might be too strong for a first attack. You also have to put the limits of the attack and such. The basic info need are these: Execution (how it looks, what she's doing), Effect (what the attack does), Use limits (how many times can it be used in battle, how long does it last), Power limits (flaws of the attack), and Range (how close does your opponent need to be from you).

- Second attack: Your second attack is supposed to be an upgrade of your first attack. In this case, I feel like it is too different compared to your first attack, so you might want to either do the seeds or the vines.
---> An idea is that the first attack could be like 2 seeds that wrap up an opponents ankle for like 10 seconds. Easy to break out of, but can hold for a little bit. The second attack could be 4-5 seeds that cause 4-5 vines to wrap up the leg or something. Harder to break apart, but still breakable.

- Third attack: This needs to be explained a lot more. If you think about it, having a gigantic pumpkin explode can kill people, in which wouldn't be allowed. I like the general idea, but the attack seems way too powerful, so I'd suggest trying to flush out the idea more and see if there's a way to make this harm, not kill :>

G'luck! 8D
PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:40 am


okay just added something and some minor tweaks with hairstyle and want not
she should be a bit more descriptive

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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2012 9:40 am


Won a custom from guine
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after my exams im going to centre my focus on her to make sure she gets accepted
two exams left crying
PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2012 2:33 pm


Hello there! I'm not the most experienced staff critter, but let's see what we can do to help get you stamped. heart

Be careful with how smart/great/better than others your character comes off. It's totally alright for a character to be good at something, but it becomes a problem when they seem to be good at absolutely everything or even when they're stated the 'best of the best' at any one thing. This isn't necessarily a problem at the moment, but Essa could possibly tip over the edge if you're not careful. I myself got really good grades at school without needing to try so I know it's possible, just be carefully that you don't go over the top with how smart or clever she is with no effort.

Cheerful is a fine virtue. I'd just amend it to "Essa can brighten up almost any room with her cheerfulness" since there will always be that someone out there that is a total grouch and unreachable.

Hard time making friends / Skeptical of people might be better names then Judgemental for her first flaw.

Clumsy is not a flaw as much as it is a physical thing (not to mention there isn't really any reason someone would hate someone else for being clumsy), so you'll need to come up with a new one. Perhaps smugness or disrespect for authority?

Your attacks are REALLY cute. I love how instead of just hitting them the food you're also incorperating the sense of free or distraction which relates to jack o lanterns.

For her first attack I'd suggest only throwing one pumpkin (about the size of a real pumpking) at a time, and then be able to do the attack 2 or 3 times a battle. If you really want to do two at a time then I'd say she can only do the attack 1 or 2 times.

For the super I'd say you could kick it up to to two pumpkins (double or triple the size of a real pumpkin) and do it 2 or 3 times a battle.

The eternal attack though seems a little bit too much like just an attempt to reference The Nightmare Before Christmas. I'm alright with her using pumpkins now to actually hit and hurt opponents but there isn't much reason for it to be dressed up or all the theatrics. Here are a few suggestions I have.

1) It could rain pumpkins/jack o lanterns from the sky (maybe 6-8 ). This would be distracting, as the enemy would have to be focusing up above them to dodge and if they hit it could cause minor injury.

2) A hollow pumpkin could appear on the target's head (would dissapear after awhile or could be broken off). This in itself could be distracting enough, but if you wanted to add another small effect, like it laughing loudly still to disturb the person, or it causing a person to see something scary, or very minor vine wrapping around the person's shoulders that would probably be okay.

Go ahead and quote me back once you've had some time to think and tweak.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 8:56 am


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yeah im never been good with making personalities >.< i've made a few changes and i absolutely loved the raining pumpkin idea XD tell me what you think <3
PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:54 am


Impatience (can't wait) is a good change. It fits her other traits pretty well.

Still need someone else to give this total approval, but I'm dropping off a trial stamp. :3

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:57 am


thank you <3
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