As the title says.. But I'm unsure as to whether or not I should.. You know. Post it in the guild or anything at all. It's a rather odd sort of storyline thing, and I came up with it like.. Long time ago. So like, what do you guys think? Are there things I should change? Or something? Anything. Is it so bad that it should be completely forgotten about and never even mentioned again?
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"They call it “Cirque du Vie.” But in truth, it was quite the opposite. The bright, vibrant colours don’t last long once you enter. The invitations are lures, just snatching unsuspecting teens. You were invited, completely unaware of what was waiting for you within. Or, you are one of the Carnies themselves, intently awaiting on their arrival. Regular people go for the fun and games when it comes to town. However, when you’re invited, that’s not all you’re going to see. Chances are, you won't even make it out.
The Carnies live in the Circus. It’s their life, and possibly all they’ve ever known, or all they can remember. They wait for more teens to be invited, whether it’s for a feeding, to play with their minds, or even make them one of their own. No one really knows, and only time will tell. Because numbers build over time, there are many of them. The Ringmaster pretty much takes care of all the Carnies, and thinks of them as some sort of twisted family. To them, the Ringmaster’s word was pretty much law, and nearly all followed it without hesitation.
Six oblivious teens were invited to the Cirque du Mort. They may or may not know each other. They will go to the circus with absolutely no idea that more than just circus acts await them."
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Then have a letter inviting the people and everything from the Ringmaster and stuff, but I just don't know. What do you guys think? Bad? Alright? Terrible?
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"They call it “Cirque du Vie.” But in truth, it was quite the opposite. The bright, vibrant colours don’t last long once you enter. The invitations are lures, just snatching unsuspecting teens. You were invited, completely unaware of what was waiting for you within. Or, you are one of the Carnies themselves, intently awaiting on their arrival. Regular people go for the fun and games when it comes to town. However, when you’re invited, that’s not all you’re going to see. Chances are, you won't even make it out.
The Carnies live in the Circus. It’s their life, and possibly all they’ve ever known, or all they can remember. They wait for more teens to be invited, whether it’s for a feeding, to play with their minds, or even make them one of their own. No one really knows, and only time will tell. Because numbers build over time, there are many of them. The Ringmaster pretty much takes care of all the Carnies, and thinks of them as some sort of twisted family. To them, the Ringmaster’s word was pretty much law, and nearly all followed it without hesitation.
Six oblivious teens were invited to the Cirque du Mort. They may or may not know each other. They will go to the circus with absolutely no idea that more than just circus acts await them."
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Then have a letter inviting the people and everything from the Ringmaster and stuff, but I just don't know. What do you guys think? Bad? Alright? Terrible?
