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Shalra Wolfsflame

PostPosted: Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:24 pm


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ғeel free to call me. . .
Shalra Wolfsflame. Preferably either Shalra or Wolfie.
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
a female

чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
fifteen

The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
April twenty-fourth. A Taurus.

α lot of people say I'm. . .
Too nice. I'll forgive someone over and over again if they apologize, but not if they don't truly mean it. They also say that I should be a therapist or guidance counselor because I ease their fears and worries; I just think I'm a good friend. I try to be a good friend, anyway. One of my most prized points is my loyalty and protectiveness. If you dare bully or hurt my friends, you'll have Hell to deal with because I'll send you straight down there.
Sometimes I'm a little too stubborn, though I try to be more flexible to the situation. Everyone I know tells me I'm a drama queen, but I react the way I feel, so buzz off! Don't get me wrong, I know I'm sensitive. Especially with animals. If I see you abusing an animal, or if I hear you abused an animal, watch out and sleep with an eye open. I hold animals' lives as dear to my heart as humans'.
When I'm about to cry, I try to run and hide. I hate it when People see me cry; for one I look ugly when I do, and two, I don't want people to think I'm a crybaby. I can't hold in tears well. I also cry when I'm frustrated, which can really get annoying when I'm trying to figure something out. Actually, the only time I don't cry is when I'm scared. Don't let whatever's scaring me know I'm scared.

care to hear my story?
I grew up with a normal family and lived a normal life. I had three older brothers and one younger sister. We were all a year apart, the oldest being sixteen, and were very close. I remember wrestling with my brothers and playing with dolls with my sister. My parents were very interactive with us, and took us out all the time. Until my thirteenth birthday, when they all died.
We were all going out to eat at my favorite restaurant when a car sped out of nowhere and crashed into us. My mother and father died instantly. It was then, as the cars burst into flames, that I discovered my ability to manipulate and control flame. I was the only one to survive. Later I was sent to live with my good-for-nothing aunt. After a month, she sent me to this school in hopes of never having to see me again. To her I was just leeching off her money. Whatever. I've learned to deal, to push it away. My family sent me here, they want me to be strong and live on; that's what I think to deal with the pain.

αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
Pyrokenisis, which is the ability to control and manipulate fire. I have recently discovered an ability to communicate with animals. I don't know their exact thoughts, nor they mine, but our feelings get across. It actually requires a lot of focus and concentration.

I aםore. . .
○ Cheese!
○ Fruit!
○ Hard candy!
○ Chocolate!
○Animals!
○Singing!
○Drawing!

єveryone of these drive me mad. . .
○ Spiders!
○ Bullies!
○ Liars!
○ Poachers!
○ People who judge "books" by their cover!
○Running!

мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: Eirannes.
Dorm: Olivine Dorm
Homeroom: Magical Creatures

чou see, I'm controlled by . . .
Shalra Wolfsflame
PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 12:06 am




Shalra Wolfsflame is not accepted.

The entire thing is far too short, choppy and unappealing. If you improve a few things that I mention below, she will be in the clear and I will approve her.

Personality Pointers:

●What makes her a good listener? Is she sympathetic or empathetic?

● Again, what makes her a little bit air headed? Does she deliberately act that way to get that reaction? Or is she air-headed due to lack of concentration? What causes it? How is it a good thing? No one is ever air-headed in a good way, trust me.

● What kind of things make her angry? Is it easy to anger her? What kind of other reactions does she portray when angry? What makes her glower scary?

● Why would her friends cry with her? Do they cry with her over simple things? Is she so popular and moving that her influence draws that reaction? What kind of things make her cry? Does she cry easily?

● Again at the point with how her friends are happy when she is, what is this influence she has over the emotions of her friends? It is not her power, it is by far unnatural - unless she's Hitler or Martin Luther King, she needs a reason as to why she's so influential.

● Why is her advice good enough to be in the ranks of a therapist or guidance counselor? Where does she get it from? Personal experience or just Internet?


Biography Pointers:

I'd like to start this off by saying, that is not a biography. That is just a paragraph of whatever came to your mind. How can she possibly cry enough to make it rain? That is also not a listed power.

Please fix the entire thing.


Ability Pointers:

● Please expand and explain her abilities to a more detailed manner.

Thank you.

tablowme

Fashionable Genius


tablowme

Fashionable Genius

PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:29 pm


I have got to say, this is well done and detailed, thank you very much c: One of the best edits yet.

Speaking of which, Shalra Wolfsflame is approved and sorted into Eirannes.

Feel free to go on and RP while we get her a dorm.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 12, 2012 8:35 pm


Thank you so much! 4laugh

Shalra Wolfsflame


Fuyu Muley
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:15 pm


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Shalra now has a dorm!


Eirannes House, Olivine Dorm


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:52 pm


Yay! Thank you! 4laugh

Shalra Wolfsflame

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