Guys! It's published!

[pompoennetje]

Violaceous Vertigo

I'd like to add something.

"Because the learning ability doesn’t work anymore when your cat is given Valium, bla bla bla"

Their learning ability in their brains. Maybe I should've said it in that way.  

[Violaceous Vertigo]

Funklepuss

Violaceous Vertigo

I'd like to add something.

"Because the learning ability doesn’t work anymore when your cat is given Valium, bla bla bla"

Their learning ability in their brains. Maybe I should've said it in that way.

So do you mean the cat's ability to learn anything, or just their ability to learn how to get used to fireworks? You may want to explain that one a little bit further.

Writing sentences that are grammatically correct but still vague is a super common thing that most don't even point out or notice when they read them because they still get the overall meaning (or think they do.)

Like I said though, I'm nitpicky.  

[pompoennetje]

Violaceous Vertigo

Funklepuss

Violaceous Vertigo

I'd like to add something.

"Because the learning ability doesn’t work anymore when your cat is given Valium, bla bla bla"

Their learning ability in their brains. Maybe I should've said it in that way.

So do you mean the cat's ability to learn anything, or just their ability to learn how to get used to fireworks? You may want to explain that one a little bit further.

Writing sentences that are grammatically correct but still vague is a super common thing that most don't even point out or notice when they read them because they still get the overall meaning (or think they do.)

Like I said though, I'm nitpicky.

That first one.
Ugh, in my own language it's so much easier to explain. gonk  

[Theodra]

Aww.

That was cute.

And I am by no means a writer,
so for all it's worth... Good job!

Yay kitties.

 

[Reeves]

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