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 Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 8:50 pm
forgive me if i mispell a few words in this script i wanted to write this because it was a minor thought of twin time lords who might accompany the doctor
i might have to make parts of it so heres what i have right now
doctor who:the time lord twins
(a young teenage girl awakens in her bed, she hears her brother snoring loudly and muttering she is startled when she hears a loud crashing noise from outside the bedroom she sees a man with long dark hair and green eyes exiting a blue police box wearing a plain brown tweed jacket with elbow patches, a dress shirt, a bow tie, braces, a gold wrist watch, rolled up navy-blue trousers and black boots. she immeadetly shakes her brother reapeted and he opens his eyes lazily)
brother:edwin what is it ?(stares at a clock)its three in the morning why wake me up?
edwin:theres a strange man and woman are outside ,and he looks odd.go talk to him Tom after all you have to ask him why hes here..
Tom:are you insane? I'm really tierd why do you want me talking to someone this late at night.
edwin:because im your twin sister?(she looks at him sweetly)
Tom sad growls) fine just stay here
(Tom gets up wearing a shirt with pajama pants and walks outside to confront the man,he walks inside with the man following him)
Tom: he says hes a doctor
doctor: actually im called the doctor and nice meeting you edwin
edwin:hello and how did you get here?
doctor:well my T.A.R.D.I.S senced time lords here and well it crashed
Tom:and what is a T.A.R.D.I.S?
doctor:Time And Relative Dimension In Space
Edwin: a what?
Doctor(sighs)a time machine...
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Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2011 7:27 am
Wow that's really neat! I have a feeling I know where it's going. But I would have to see the rest to know for sure. Do post more! This is good stuff.
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Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2011 6:42 pm
Captain Kat Crane Wow that's really neat! I have a feeling I know where it's going. But I would have to see the rest to know for sure. Do post more! This is good stuff. thank you mrgreen if u want to send me any ideas id gladly add them
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Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:45 pm
this will be a continuation of my first part any ideas to add private message me please id greatly like to have ideas added
if anyone knows how to describe the noise the T.A.R.D.I.S makes please tell me
doctor:who the time twins(continued)
edwin sad scoffs)yeah right a time machine like those are real.
Doctor:it is a time machine ill show you.
Tom sad yawns)can it wait We have school in...(stares at the doctors watch) three hours until school.
Doctor sad annoyed) why we have all the time in the world in the T.A.R.D.I.S!
Edwin:Well i have a test so why not skip it
Tom:no learning skill in you is there?
(Edwin sticks her tounge out at her brother and she walks with the doctor inside the TARDIS which quickly begins to dissapere with whooshing noise edwin stands inside a large room and the control panel in front of her with the doctor behind her)
Edwin:dear god i thought you were just some weird man who didnt have a life
(the doctor pauses and glares at Edwin)
Doctor:well im sending the T.A.R.D.I.S three hours ahead
Edwin:really are you sure?
Doctor surprised f course I am sure
(the Tardis lands in front of Edwin and Toms house Tom stands there wearing a school uniform and a black backpack on his back.)
Edwin:hello Tom belive the doctor now he does live in a time machien.
Tom sad sarcasticly) yeah i belive so its been three weeks since you disapered where have you been? ive been so worried about you.
Doctor:I guess i messed up but i need your help with something both of you.(points at Edwin and Tom)I belive a race of aliens have appeared at a high school ,and I need people of your age to help me.
Tom:aliens?,time machiens,whats next santa claus?!
(a large sound is heard and all three turn to see a large group of santas walking towards them all holding a trumpet and other instruments)
Tom:...very funny
Doctor:Run! these arent really santa clauses
(he grabs Edwin and Tom and begins to run as the santas chase them raising their trumpets)
Tom:why are we running its not like they have guns.
(one of the santas blow into their trumpets and a large missle comes out soaring at them.)
Edwin:does that answer your question!!
Doctor biggrin uck!
( he pushes them forward making them fall forward and jumps down avoiding the missle)
Tom:its not even christmas why are they here?!
Doctor:they arent veary smart theyre robots so they might want to kill us.
Edwin:why does everything i love have to hurt me!!
Tom:i dont hurt you! and besides everyone lied about santa being real.
(the doctor pulls out his sonic screwdriver and aims it at the santas a loud noise id heard from it making the santas shut down)
Edwin surprised h thank god that was over!
Doctor:well what do you two say? do you want to help me?
Tom:Are you insane!!! kidnapping my sister was nice but evil robotic santas!! are you nuts why would i help you!!?
Edwin:you were happy that i was gone?
Tom:.. i didnt say that i was happy i just said that it was nice hehe heh...
Doctor:Well i know one thing you dont.
Tom & Edwin:whats that?
Doctor: you two are the only time lords besides myself,and i really want your help so please help me out.
Tom:how did you know that?
Doctor:It was pretty obvius she didnt overreact when she was inside the T.A.R.D.I.S and you didnt even call the police when she vanished.
Tom:yes its true but were only seventeen and well why do you want to send us to do something so...dangerous
who are these robo santas anyway?
Doctor:theyre machiens that are remote controled we need to find the person with the remote and stop them before something bad happens
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