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chiickadee

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:47 pm


User ImageName: Magild Atalan
xxx- Magild from the norse name Magnhildr, meaning might/strong (Magn) and fight/battle (hildr).
xxx- Atalan from the Greek myth of Atalanta, a girl who was raised by bears and killed a boar and stuff. YEAH 8D

Blood colour: #d02727

Gender: female

Symbol:
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Thor's Hammer Symbol, symbolizing Thor, valor, fighting, etc.

Personality: Mag is a MANLY MAN troll. She lives out in the mountains with her bearmom lusus in the MAGCAVE. Everything about her life revolves around the hunt and being manly as troll Clint Eastwood. She's a bit rash (that's an understatement, she's INCREDIBLY rash), but she has her redeeming traits too. Anything that falls under the domain of her babies, she will protect to the best of her ability. She lives for Food, Food, and more Food. Food forever. Overall, she is just like her lusus bearmom, and wants to protect all her babies and wrestle and food and fight and MANLY MAN TIMES.

Strengths:
Strong: Mag is the type who's always striving to be stronger. Everything she does revolves around being the strongest. Hunting is a daily sport for her, as well as climbing the rigid mountains of her home, and tramping through the frond nubs as well. She's there when you need someone to carry a big bag, or just want to have a good wrestle.

Protective: Having been raised by a bear lusus, Mag has already adapted that mama bear sense of protective qualities. Everything she owns or even slightly cares about is going to be protected like a mother bear would. This doesn't necessarily only refer to physical fighting either; if you have anything slightly upsetting you, mama Mag will come and fix it better. As such, she tends to fuss over the people in her quadrants, even the kismesis.

Honest: When she does perform actions, they tend to be pretty gogdamn sincere. She's not the lying type, or at least, she doesn't try to be. Most of the time, her actions don't have real big ulterior motives either. Sometimes she might come across as a bit blunt, but for the most part its because she lets whatever's in her thinkpan flow out. Sincerity of actions and (most of the time) words.

Low Maintenance: Having her hive in a cave doesn't particularly allow for electronics or fancy gadgets anyways, but living in a cave, her life is pretty simple and primitive. Her hive has a cooking fire and a soper slime vat, plus a few necessities for living (UNLIMITED BLANKETS), but really, not much. This isn't to say she doesn't like technology; in fact, she's rather fascinated by it and thinks it's silly, but she just doesn't interact with it a lot in her daily life (save for, of course, when she goes to the city). She's pretty happy living simply, and isn't particularly high maintenance because of it.

Flaws:

Too Strong: Sometimes she's a bit ... too rough. Being raised by a bear, "fighting" was a type of playing. So apologies if her signs of quadrant affection come across as bone-crushing hugs. With the violent nature of trolls, its to be expected that she is rather rough anyways, but sometimes, she might take it just a bit too far.
((OOC Note: Obviously, Mag will never kill/injure another player without their consent! Just so you guys know xD))

Mama's Rage: The thing about being protective of things, is that there's no real wiggle room when your things are in danger. If you touch a hair on her precious grubbypoos, you're going to get it. Not only that, but if you're sick, or having a problem, Mag will nag your ear off until you fix your problem, or let her fix it for you. She has to be all up in everybody's business, making sure she's taking care of her grubbycubs.

Uncensored: Being as sincere as she is, Mag doesn't really think to ... stop herself from saying some things. She doesn't really have a concept of the right things to say at the right time, nor what the "proper situation" really refers to. She'll say "THE MOTHER GRUB’S HEINOUS UNDULATING a*****e" right in front of the gogdarn queen. Everything just flows from her thinkpan right out her squawk gaper, and sometimes its a bit untimely.

Food. Always Food.: Mag's thinkpan is ALWAYS on food. When are we getting it, how are we getting it, does it taste good; it just doesn't stop. It's sometimes a bit hard to focus her on a serious subject because she'll be busy comparing it to grubloaf. She just wants to stuff it all down her protein chute. She still has a heart, and thinks about other things, but expect food to be the topic of many a conversation.

Weapon: AXEKIND: A giant double-headed battleaxe of TROLLINESS. Leaving the appearance up to artist, but should follow these guidelines?
one, two, three.
Just a big axe. Basic idea/size on the right, but go wild!

[User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.Appearance:
Hair: Straight hair, maybe with some braids in it. Down to her hips/slighty above it?
Horns: Classic viking helmet horns ... except on her head? XD
Outfit: FUR FUR AND MORE FUR. See the righttt.

Lots of the inspiration for her outfit came from here/here/HERE, so feel free to take inspiration from that!

I imagine as a kid she'll be like the right, but as an adult she'll get more ... bling? Belts, armor, rings. I dunno. PLAY WITH ITTTT.

Home: A Mountain cave near the forest's edge. They live in a cave because ... well where else would a bear Luscii live?

Lusus: BEARMOM, THE GIANT BEAR. Well no, it's only about grizzly bear sized, but it took Mag into its cave. As a result, Mag is a bit more of a wild child, and has motherly-bear instincts. Mag's lusus keeps her warm and fuzzy in the cold mountains. Sometimes, bearmom even lets Mag ride her! Usually not though. Also, the lusus definitely isn't a polar bear. GRIZZLY bear.

Power: EXTREME BEARITUDE. Wait that's not a power.
(She has no powers xD)
PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:06 pm


> ENTER NAME.

Your name is MAGILD ATALAN.

You love being MANLY.

So MANLY in fact, that your whole life is centered around it. You have countless BOWS and AXES stored away somewhere in your MAGCAVE that you stopped keeping track of how many are broken. Speaking of which, you love FIGHTING and WRESTLING and ALL THINGS MANLY. If you could drown in your manliness, you would. It's especially IRONIC because you're a girl troll. You enjoy wearing fur to an UNHEALTHY EXTENT. Just the feel of that WONDERFUL FLUFFY SUBSTANCE makes you all tingly. Your laugh is pretty OBNOXIOUS to boot.

Above all things though, you love FOOD. Glorious GRUBLOAFS and troll drinks like FAYGO. You wish you could stuff it all down your GLORIOUS PROTEIN TUBE. Somehow though, with all the running around and screaming you do, you manage to say PLEASANTLY FIT. You love carving MANLY SCULPTURES of cute objects like muties and hoofbeasts for everyone to see. You often present them to your best friends, the FRONDLAND CREATURES. Accompanying that, you often have MANLY TEAPARTIES with your BEST FRIEND Maihue, who is extremely timid. You're not even really sure why you're friends.

What will you do next?

chiickadee

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amicableAggressor
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 11, 2012 1:16 pm


umum! super cute and I can't find that much to crit, mainly the words you use to describe her strengths/flaws.

for endearing, i read it more as honest or sincere, as her actions don't automatically inspire affection from others.

aand simple, idk first thing i thought was 'like .... slow in the brain what??' maybe saying simple living will make it a bit clearer?


fff i really cant think of much else to say!! i guess the only thing i can think to ask is you say she's always thinking about food, but also say she nags the trolls she takes under her wing and looks over them, does she tend to protect/mother/scold others 'on automatic' and not really think about it too much?
like if she sees a little troll get hurt she'll brush them off and clean their cut and make soothing noises, but her mind will be on what's for dinner rather than feeling pity?
PostPosted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 5:40 pm


amicableAggressor

(hope this is okay since i didnt want to resubmit the entire form for a few tiny changes)

changed endearing to honest
changed simple to "low maintenance." that good? o 3o

i suppose about the food thing ... it was a bit of a hyperbole to say shes ALWAYS thinking about food. i mean no one actually thinks about any one subject 24/7 xDDD ill edit it so its a bit less over-the-top XD

chiickadee

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 7:35 pm


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