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Illiandra

PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 9:58 am


Ok in response to iluvwritin's challenge here's a poem (keep in mind I'm not much of a poet)


Shredded into fine ribbon
Tiny bands impossible to rebuild
My trust. My heart. My respect.
Were all broken by a word.
I've been told words can't harm me,
So how do I fill this void inside?
Without love... what is life?  
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 10:20 am


Illiandra
Ok in response to iluvwritin's challenge here's a poem (keep in mind I'm not much of a poet)


Shredded into fine ribbon
Tiny bands impossible to rebuild
My trust. My heart. My respect.
Were all broken by a word.
I've been told words can't harm me,
So how do I fill this void inside?
Without love... what is life?


*insert major tear here* aww... umm well maybe break it up...like split it into two stanzas after we're all broken by a word.... but i'm not sure, i thought it was really good though!!! kudos to you!

iluvwritin

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