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Cory Koshiomi

PostPosted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 2:01 pm


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Basic Info


Name: Cory Koshiomi
Nickname: Cory
Age: Sixteen ( 16 )
Gender: Male
Birth Place: SunaGakure (Sand Village)
Rank: Hasn't finished the academy.
Kekkei Genkai: Magnet Release
New Clothes: The red suit his father (Gaara) used in the fight with Kimimaro.
Family:
~Fifth Kazekage (Father)
~Hina Takuro (Mother) -Deceased-
~Dawn Koshiomi (Sister)
Background: His name is Cory Koshiomi. He is the son of the Fifth KazeKage, an Hina Takuro. During his birth, his nerves an his spine weren't matched up correctly. In a desperate procedure, the doctors combined his nerve an spine together with chakra lines, both wind an earth. This gave Cory the natural ability to manipulate sand, But his mother passed away during the procedure. When Cory as a young boy, many thought he was a freak for the way he acted. He was very anti-social an kept to himself, so kids thought there was something wrong with. One girl did not leave him alone. Her name was Soraya Kityn. She was rather popular for her being the daughter of a famous ninja. Cory began to feel happiness, which was rare to him at this point. They slolwy began to have a small relationship. Around the age of six, Cory was playing by himself out in the woods, making sand figures, etc.. An came across a village that was being destroyed. Buildings were set on fire, an innocent lives where scattered across the ground. Cory got closer to really find out what was going on, an a demon named 'Mondaiji' was the cause of all the pain an suffering. A group of Shinobi were using a jutsu to control the demon but needed a host. Cory was in the wrong place at the wrong time, an the Shinobi used the young boy's body to host the demon. This jutsu blacked out Cory, an he awoke in his bed thinking it was just a dream. A few days earlier, Cory awoke to standing in the burning village, once again, but only to realize that the Shinobi were torn apart around him, an his body was soaked in their blood. He then blacked out again as he realized the demon could control his body. Mondaiji usually only shows on the boy as black sand that travels around his skin. The boy tried to hide what he had seen, an thought he done. He awoke again, standing at the foot of the bed, only person that cared for him. Her parents where scattered across the wall an she layed there impailed to the bed from a blade. Cory began to break down an cry as he walked over to her an held her close. He kept asking what had happen, but the only thing that came from her lips where "I hate you." She passed away a few minutes later as Cory didn't want to leave her. He was forced to leave the village for an being framed for the killing. He was six when he left. He lived by himself, in misery an pain, honing his skill's, an mastering the manipulation of sand. He is now the age of sixteen, an his skill's have grown greatly, yet his attitude makes it seem like he has never had it bad.

Character Info


Chakra Element(s): Earth, an Wind
(or) Type Of Energy: N/A
Strength(s): Speed, Compassionate, Smarts
Weakness(s): Feelings might get in the way, badmouthing, annoying.
Equipment: Iron Powder, Gold Dust, two pouch's of sand.

Transformation / Kekkei Genkai


Name of your transformation:
Stage(s):

Mondaiji Influence (Mondaiji's Control)


~Mind Control - The whites in his eye's are consumed by darkness as the symbol of Mondaiji appears within the replacement of his pupil. (Increase his speed, an stamina to two hundred percent that of his normal limits.)

~Physical Control - User Image
(Grants ability to manipulate blood. Strength an pain tolerance are increased by three.)

~Soul Control - Blood begins to seep from his eyes as they role into the back of his head, an the skin from his right eye, peels off showing a piece of his skull. The boy hunches over as his back bursts open, revealing the bone snapping sound as the cold undead wings begin to morph out of his back, still soaked in blood. His skin turns pitch black as he coughs up blood, an the bones from his arms begin to stick up like spikes all around his arms. The scent of blood takes over his own, as it sprays around his body, an hovers slightly as the boy looks up, an his head snaps to the side, as his forehead opens like a mouth. His lower mouth snaps open as the demonic grin grows over an a loud shriek echos throughout. (Mind an body is now under control by Mondaiji, allowing his demonic mind to spread. Mind is increased ten times, including strength, an chakra.)

Name of your transformation:
Stage(s):

Darkness Path (Mondaiji's Power Controlled)


~Eye's of the innocent - Cory's pupil is soon formed into a black 'x', as blood fills the white in his eye's an pours out slightly.
(Stamina, an reaction time increased ten folds. Grants ability to manipulate blood.)

~Skin of Mondaiji - Blood slowly begins to seep from the boy's pours as it covers a thin, transparent layer over his body. Black chakra courses throughout the blood, giving off a black pulse.
(Strength an Pain Tolerance increased ten fold.)

~Wings of Hell - The black chakra slowly begins to form two, demonic, an blood dripping set of wings.
(Speed an Manipulation of jutsu increased ten fold.)

Sand/Gold Dust Style


- Sand Armor [Suna no Yoroi]
The user creates a thin, although durable, armor of sand around their body by making the sand stick to their skin and clothes and then hardening it. It is not as powerful as the Sand Shield, but the armor can constantly be rebuilt. As the user becomes more experienced, they can use less sand to achieve the effect, as well as become more resistant to the effects of exhaustion.

- Sand Clone Skill [Suna Bunshin no Jutsu]
Creates clones out of the sand. Uses small amount of chakra and requires the presence of sand to perform. It is fully functional, meaning it can attack and be attacked but it has the appearance of sand so it's useless to use as a distraction. The sand is dispersed when clone is defeated.

- Sand Explosion Skill [Suna Bakuhatsu no Jutsu]
The user must be near a source of sand. Sand is gathered using chakra into a swirling ball that is hurled towards the opponent. Right before impact, the ball explodes into a group of riggid shards that can cut and sting their opponent.

- Sand Rope Skill [Suna Nawa no Jutsu]
Makes a thin rope of sand that the user can propel from a source of sand towards his or her opponent. The rope wraps around the user and tightens itself firmly.

- Sand Shield [Suna Hogo Sochi no Jutsu]
The user slams his hands down on the ground, bringing up a large amount of sand around him into the air to block attacks. The user cannot stray further than five feet away from the shield, otherwise the sand will collapse. The wall will be sustained as long as the user continues to feed chakra into it.

- Sand Throwing Stars [Suna Shuriken]
Creates shurikens out of sand. Uses a small amount of chakra and uses sand and hardens it to pose as a shuriken. The sand shuriken may be created from any source of sand and launched to an opponent by the user. The shuriken require a little extra chakra committed to them to be "thrown" if the user does not throw it himself.

- Sand Whip Skill [Sunamuchi no Jutsu]
The user plunges his hand into the sand, then draws out a length of whip made completely out of sand and chakra. It is around the thickness of a child's arm. With the whip, the user can attack his opponent from a short distance, either aiming for a blow that stings the enemy with sand particles, or wraps around a part of their body. If successfully caught, the user can send even more chakra through the whip, its victim to cause more damage. The chakra in the rope deteriorates over time, gradually reducing the rope's strength.

- Sliding Sand Wave [Suberi Suna Nami]
Not a very powerful jutsu in the least, this technique is mainly used to stop oncoming attacks or to psyche out the opponent. The user throws his hand to the side as if calling the sand to follow, it forces the sand on the ground to fly up in front of the user to either attack or defend against oncoming jutsu.

- Exploding Sand Clone Skill [Bakuretsu Suna Bunshin no Jutsu]
This jutsu causes one or more previously created sand clones to explode from the inside, sending the sand that was used to create them towards the victim.

- Hidden Sand Skill [Sunagakure no Jutsu]
The user must be around a lot of sand to do this. By slowly pulling the users body into the sand, the user is able to walk around underneath the sand.

- Sand Net Skill [Suna Bou no Jutsu]
Creates a large net out of sand from a source of sand that is hurled by chakra towards the user. If the net catches the victim it slowly begins to constrict around the victim.

- Sand Sphere [Suna no Kyuutai]
The user slams his hands down on the ground, bringing up a large amount of sand around him that will form a thick, powerful sphere around him, protecting him from all incoming attacks for a short remainder of time.

- Sand Transformation Skill [Suna Henge no Jutsu]
The user covers himself in the sand armor and if he wills it he may change the appearance of the sand to one not of his own. More useful than Henge, it is not easily dispelled unless the Suna no Yoroi is broken. Even Doujutsu's can't typically tell that it is a jutsu which makes it especially useful for spying. When Suna no Yoroi is dispelled, so is this jutsu.

- Desert Warzone Skill [Sabaku Kousenchitai no Jutsu]
After charging a fist with chakra, the user slams his knuckles into the sand, sending what looks like a shockwave of sand at his enemy. In reality, he is delaying the force of the punch and making it travel beneath the desert at his opponent where it then explodes. However, this jutsu is called 'Desert' Warzone for a good reason; it only works where there is a lot of sand on the ground.

- Great Arm of Sand [Suna Futoiude]
A huge arm forms from the sand, and tries to grab the enemy with its large clawed hand. This jutsu is usually used to grapple a victim, but it can also be used as a shield or powerful punch. The arm can be guided, and stretch easily beyond 50 feet in length.

- Sand Instantaneous Body Skill [Suna Shunshin no Jutsu]
A technique which allows the user to transport from one place to another in a veil of sand. | Chakra- 20 | ANBU | Can only be used once per battle

- Sand Dragon Skill [Sabakuryuu no Jutsu]
This jutsu creates a dragon from the swirling of the surrounding, which is quickly brought together and hardened by chakra. The dragon can shoot small blasts of sand from its mouth. The dragon has no wings and moves on all four legs. It like a lizard of sorts and it may use the Hidden Sand Skill at will as long as it is standing on sand.

- Sand Sphere Counter [Suna no Hangeki Kyuutai]
After creating the surrounding orb of sand and using the Daisan no Me to track the enemy, the user can make large spikes of sand move towards the enemy out of the orb.

- Sand Shackles [Suna Sokubaku]
This jutsu makes four shackles made of sand launch from a sand source towards an opponent. Each shackle reaches for a wrist or ankle.

- The Third Eye [Daisan no Me]
A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja uses sand to create an eye through which they can clearly see without fear of being seen. Perfect for spying or collecting information, or targeting an opponent while guarding himself with a wall-defense.

- Desert Coffin [Sabaku Kyuu]
The user's chakra controls sand and causes it to surround an opponent or parts of his body, capturing them completely in sand. Only the face is spared to allow breathing. After opponent is captured, they may slowly be lifted into the air and may even be attached to something. The biggest flaw in this jutsu is that the user must maintain concentration on this jutsu for it to work, or the sand to the ground.


- Desert Funeral [Sabaku Sousou]
This is a macabre jutsu outlawed for its "inhumane method" that is used as a follow up technique to the Desert Coffin. This jutsu causes the Desert Coffin to violently constrict, slowly crushing the entrapped victim. If the Desert Coffin stops working, so does this jutsu. | Chakra- 100 | Damage- 75 (Every Post) | Jounin, Kinjutsu | Desert Coffin must be active.

- Hungry Desert [Gakidou Sabaku]
This jutsu starts by saturating all the sand in up to a 10' cubic area with chakra. After that, the sand slowly begins swirling, pulling anything in the area or on the surface down gradually. It takes several seconds for someone to be completely submerged. Even once submerged, it'll take a while longer for the victim to suffocate. This jutsu is mostly used to immobilize the target, since it takes a lot of chakra to continue to pull the opponent under.

- Raging Sandstorm [Kyoubou Suna Arashi]
By drawing out all the sand in the vicinity in a huge wind the user forces all the sand toward their opponent causing an extremely lethal storm of slashing sand particles. Not only can this jutsu erode flesh and cut ribbons all over the opponent's body, the sand will remain in the wounds, heightening the stinging pain and making it hard to clean the cuts afterwards.

~Sand Rain
Type:Ninjutsu
Description biggrin esert rain is another way of creating the Sabaku Sousou, it gathers sound in the air which then targets in on the opponent from all the angles. This can also be used as just another attack by hardening and then going through the enemy.

~True Sand Burial
Type:Ninjutsu
Description:Gaara softens the ground below the enemy and creates a quicksand effect. The enemy will sink hundreds of meters below ground to be held there by the immense pressure of the sand and left to die.

~Sand Explosion
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: Cory uses the friction in the quick amounts sand moving back an forth, an sets off a small spark, which then using his wind chakra, sets it aflame causing a massive explosion.

~Sand Sphere
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A sphere of sand that rises around the boy, as protection.

~Sand Storm
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A storm of wind, an sand rise into the air, as it spins around, it would blind those caught it in.

~Sand Storm: Burning Tornado
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A slight spark would begin to set off a burning eruption, an using his wind chakra, would turn the storm into a burning tornado.

~Sand Style: Locator
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Cory is able to find his enemy using a certain type of vibration from the ground, as he could feel even the enemy's heartbeat.

~Sand Particle Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Ability to turn any body part into sand, an as long as their is a single grain of sand left, he can reform his body.

Iron Sand Style


~Iron Sand : Souls of the dead
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Rising the dead body's of Mondaiji's foes. He is allowed to use them in many ways. The projectile, the rush of clones, an the formation of objects.

~Iron Sand
Type: Ninjutsu (Forbidden)
Description: Iron Sand is a very compacted style of sand. This jutsu is usually forbidden to use, but from the use of Mondaiji's chakra, he is able to form enough to summon the power. Iron sand is not realy iron, its just a name for the color it gives off. Iron sand is actually a magnetic force of chakra that makes it much thicker, an denser, which makes regular sand weakness non existence. Like fire does not turn iron sand into glass, an water does not turn it to mud. Its usually indestructible but cory is not that power to make it that way, even though it is very strong.

~Iron Sand: Dragon Birth
Type Ninjutsu
Description: Similar to water dragon, it uses iron sand to form the dragon.

Wind Style Jutsu


~Wind Style: Slicing Wind
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: Wind rips around his location, slicing anything around his body, like a series of blade's, but wind.

~Wind Release: Infinite Sand Cloud Great Breakthrough
Type:Ninjutsu
A very powerful technique which requires no hand seals. Instead the user inhales deeply and blow a strong blast of chakra-coated coated wind and sand. The powerful squall covers a large angle in a stream sufficient to knock trees down, and the physical damage from the sand defies the imagination. This technique is extremely efficient even against multiple enemies.

~Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere
Type:Ninjutsu
The user takes a deep breath and exhales several small blasts of wind chakra spread out enough to make it difficult to avoid without taking damage. The blasts are capable of piercing into an opponent's flesh, similar to bullets.

~Wind Release: Needles of the Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. Because the needles are made of air they cannot be blocked or deflected. The only way to ensure safety is to dodge them.

~Wind Release: Wind Dragon
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Creates a dragon formed from wind. The dragon looks like a large serpent, a traditional Chinese dragon that is twenty feet long. The dragon has a red mane and the rest of his body borders light blue. The color is not distinct because the wind manipulates it from its color to transparency. The dragon can shoot wind jutsu from its mouth.

~Wind Release: Wind Drill Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user creates another arrow from his mouth that is fired from the mouth. This time though the arrow is in the shape of a drill, much like the arrow Kidoumaro uses in his last attack against Neji. The drill passes through stone and tree but once it hits the ground it dispels. This arrow can drill through a person.

~Wind Release: Low Air Pressure Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
This technique makes the air pressure in a room drop dramatically, causing anyone inside to fall asleep. It can only work in an enclosed area like a building or room.



Earth Style Jutsu


~Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Type:Ninjutsu
This technique allows it's user the ability to stealthily move under a light surface of the ground without being detected by the enemy. Once under the enemy the user is able to drag the opponent down under the ground to their head. The opponent will be immobilized momentarily until they are able to break free from the technique, this also allows for easy targeting to the head of an opponent for the duration of their capture. Skilled Shinobi can use the substitution technique to evade this fate however.

~Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld
Type:Ninjutsu
By changing the surface of an object (ground, ceiling, wall, etc.) beneath an enemy (relative to them) into mud and creating a small swamp through chakra, the user can sink his/her enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from there. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or having to face gigantic creatures. The technique can also be used on a smaller scale to trap individual foes.

~Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Type:Ninjutsu
This jutsu after the respective hand seals are formed. Can transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud to throw them off balance.

~Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
Type:Ninjutsu
When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, this technique can create a dragon-like head to fire concentrated mud at an opponent. The same chakra used in the Earth Release: Earth Flow River will be used to create the dragon .This can also be combined with a fire technique to shoot lava toward an opponent.

~Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique
Type:Ninjutsu
This technique changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy.One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach.

~Earth Release: Stone Armor
Type:Ninjutsu
This technique makes earth-chakra flow through the body, absorbing the properties of stone around the user to form a skin-deep armor that is transparent and is only visible when light reflects off it. Despite encasing the user’s body, the armor has no apparent affect on the user’s speed or agility. The armor is able to defend from all forms of blunt-force trauma. At the same time, it enhances the user's strength for more powerful physical strikes and break free or through restraints and walls. Because this jutsu works by constantly absorbed earth properties, it requires no extra chakra after initiating it, yet still needs a sufficient amount of stone to be performed. While powerful, it is highly absorbent and too much water will eventually affect the user’s mobility and reduce its defensive might. Also if in a muddy terrain, the user’s excess weight can lead to sinking.

Magnetic Jutsu


Magnetic Release: Electric Phantasms
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: If the opponent is close enough for the user to lay a hand on the enemy, he can quickly inject the user's cell's with his own chakra, turning the cells magnetic an turning the shinobi into a living magnet.

Magnetic Release: Infinite Meteorites
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The user will magnetize a spot behind the target and break up nearby earth. Then the earth will attack the use since he/she is in then filled of the magnetically charged spot.

Magnetic Release: Demonic Illusions
Type: Genjutsu
Description: Stops opponent from moving by messing with their minds electromagnetic fields.

Blood Release


~Blood Release: Ebony Control
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: Allowing the user to become so use to blood control not only do they expand their control to Desert Fist Styled distances and maneuvering, but by directly contacting other Shinobi's bodies directly the user is capable of manipulating their blood, able to remove and unwanted substances, correct flow, and anything else blood control within the body might allow.

~Blood Release: Obsidian Edge
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The rather simple jutsu allows the user to solidify their blood a substantial amount by pouring Chakra into it. This allows for Weapon creation in the midst of battle, able to take as unique a shape as the user wishes. The outer edge of the weapons are generally coated in the non-thickened blood to aid the user in wounding the opponent, but the blade functions at the base of a Rank C Weapon.

~Blood Release: Flow of death
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: If any part of the user's own blood is coated on the enemy, he has the ability to seep the blood into the user's through the pours, or any other opening, an then be able to control that blood inside the enemy. Giving him the ability to crush, tear or just toy with his opponents insides.

Jutsu for Mondaiji


~Power of Mondaiji
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: Using the chakra from Mondaiji, he is able to form a powerful sphere of pure chakra in his right hand. (Like a Resengan.)

~Mondaiji's Darkness
Type: Counter Genjutsu
Description: This pretty much allows Mondaiji to take control of the boy's mind automatically when he is sucked into a genjutsu. He can either toy with the genjutsu, or control the body since he is an alter mind.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 3:14 pm


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PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 12:49 am


Welcome to Akatsuki, Cory!
PostPosted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 2:10 pm


-Cory Koshiomi-
Omg. I'm so sorry~!!! Please forgive my forgetfulness and business. o-e Welcome again since the other two have done it for me... -____- uhm idk what Zigbon is talkin' about but you are usin' the right smiley unless you changed it earlier o-o uhm... just post where ever. Any questions and such just send me a PM or post in the Questions/Suggestions forum and I'm sure someone will say something back. Thanks for joining!!! :]

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 2:51 pm


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-Cory Koshiomi-
Omg. I'm so sorry~!!! Please forgive my forgetfulness and business. o-e Welcome again since the other two have done it for me... -____- uhm idk what Zigbon is talkin' about but you are usin' the right smiley unless you changed it earlier o-o uhm... just post where ever. Any questions and such just send me a PM or post in the Questions/Suggestions forum and I'm sure someone will say something back. Thanks for joining!!! :]

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