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 Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:31 pm
 ғeel free to call me. . .
Trace Alucard
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
Male
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. . Appears 17 but is Ageless He has however existed since beofre Jesus was crucified.
α lot of people say I'm. . .
Usually emotionless, Trace is known to show some emotion. When he's angry he tends to write you, off giving you the cold shoulder. If he's happy or has accepted you he appears to barely tolerate you. When saddened, well there's not really a change there.
can you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . .
Trace is a Shinigami, as such he has seen both the beginning of life and the end of it. By his hand many a mortal have met their destined fate for all things must die. All shinigami are born from an aspect of mankind he come from the sorrows of humanity. Recently his brothers and sisters have lost faith in humanity and as such wish to wipe them off the face of the earth. Trace sided against his death ruling siblings and was banished from the after life. He came to Fuyu academy to learn how to better protect the humans around him. Though he cannot permanately die, he can be "Slain". Slain is a temporary state in which a Shinigami sleeps for a predetermined time. Their powers are sealed and they are for a brief moment removed from reality. After their 'sentence', as it has been deemed, is served they are placed back into reality however for each time they are slain their bodies grow older until eventually they cannot return to the reality from whence they originated.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
Wields the legendary Demon Sword Masamune. He can channel his body's energy through Masamune extending the blades reach and even firing projectiles from the blade. Trace like all shinigami have the ability to tranform this ability is known as a shinigami ankejingu. Shedding there mortal bonds a shinigami's power is amplified. Trace's ankejingu is known as swordsmen's vengeance, in which his legs are covered in fur and his feet are replaced by bootlike hooves. Masamune becomes kurushime masamune , as barbs extend from the blade.
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: [House, Please edit in when you're assigned one.]
Dorm: [Dorm Room, Please edit in when you're assigned one.]
Homeroom: Weapons
чou see, I'm controlled by . . . March Soldier
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 7:09 pm
Hey March, I see you've joined too.
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 7:23 pm
ISAcademy Hey March, I see you've joined too. Yeah I'm just waiting on my character to be approved so I can start living with a certain someone....... No you can't have her she's mine
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 7:34 pm
Hey, keep me posted on which house you're in, I'm in Catian.
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 2:01 pm
Hey there! I was just browsing through all the characters. It's not in my place to say this because I'm waiting to be accepted as well, but I think you may want to add why you came to Fuyu Academy. It seemed a lot of people had to change their biographies because of that issue. Good luck, and I hope we can meet each other again!
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 3:54 pm
Evelyn Moonmeadow Hey there! I was just browsing through all the characters. It's not in my place to say this because I'm waiting to be accepted as well, but I think you may want to add why you came to Fuyu Academy. It seemed a lot of people had to change their biographies because of that issue. Good luck, and I hope we can meet each other again! It was posted on the instructions to make sure to include why you are at Fuyu Academy.
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 3:56 pm
ISAcademy Evelyn Moonmeadow Hey there! I was just browsing through all the characters. It's not in my place to say this because I'm waiting to be accepted as well, but I think you may want to add why you came to Fuyu Academy. It seemed a lot of people had to change their biographies because of that issue. Good luck, and I hope we can meet each other again! It was posted on the instructions to make sure to include why you are at Fuyu Academy. Yup! Tis true! That way I don't sound like some random person. Thank you surprised )
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 4:35 pm
And March to make this clear that is not me above... just sayin...
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:38 pm
Alrighties, here to check your character!
Although you say ageless, you need to say about how long he's been ageless. Does that make sense?
As a little note, I'm reading the personality now, and you may want to consider using some more commas, it would help your writing flow nicer.
Your history isn't really . . . a history. Nearly everything you wrote in it belongs in the abilities section. The only portion that belongs there is:
"Trace is a Shinigami, as such he has seen both the beginning of life and the end of it. By his hand many a mortal have met their destined fate for all things must die. His origins are as much a mystery to him as they are to the mortals."
And, also, if you check the skeleton again it clearly says that saying things like "His origin is a mystery" will not be accepted. Even if no one else knows, you do. Please go into it.
Also, like IS Academy and Evelyn Moonmedow reminded you, you need to have why he's at Fuyu Academy.
Please remove the black cloud form your abilities, it could be interpreted as a god-mod power.
Sorry I seem to be picky, but I will have to see those changed before I can approve.
Please quote me when you're done!
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 8:01 pm
Arisee Alrighties, here to check your character! Although you say ageless, you need to say about how long he's been ageless. Does that make sense? As a little note, I'm reading the personality now, and you may want to consider using some more commas, it would help your writing flow nicer. Your history isn't really . . . a history. Nearly everything you wrote in it belongs in the abilities section. The only portion that belongs there is: "Trace is a Shinigami, as such he has seen both the beginning of life and the end of it. By his hand many a mortal have met their destined fate for all things must die. His origins are as much a mystery to him as they are to the mortals." And, also, if you check the skeleton again it clearly says that saying things like "His origin is a mystery" will not be accepted. Even if no one else knows, you do. Please go into it. Also, like IS Academy and Evelyn Moonmedow reminded you, you need to have why he's at Fuyu Academy. Please remove the black cloud form your abilities, it could be interpreted as a god-mod power. Sorry I seem to be picky, but I will have to see those changed before I can approve. Please quote me when you're done! I did as you asked and removed my overpowered ability but I'm sad because I thought it was genius and as to the whole god modding power technically he is a god so it would fit
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 11:59 am
Okay, It'll work.
Even if the character is a God, we sill can't allow any God-mod powers. It may go with the character, but it would be unfair to other users.
House: Wyvern
Dorm: To be assigned
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 6:53 pm
Arisee Okay, It'll work. Even if the character is a God, we sill can't allow any God-mod powers. It may go with the character, but it would be unfair to other users. House: Wyvern Dorm: To be assigned Now I would like to live with Poetic's character Jenny
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 7:00 pm
March Soldier Arisee Okay, It'll work. Even if the character is a God, we sill can't allow any God-mod powers. It may go with the character, but it would be unfair to other users. House: Wyvern Dorm: To be assigned Now I would like to live with Poetic's character Jenny Please don't be demanding. If you give me a link to the dorm I'll see, but if it's already full I can't help you there.
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 7:06 pm
Arisee March Soldier Arisee Okay, It'll work. Even if the character is a God, we sill can't allow any God-mod powers. It may go with the character, but it would be unfair to other users. House: Wyvern Dorm: To be assigned Now I would like to live with Poetic's character Jenny Please don't be demanding. If you give me a link to the dorm I'll see, but if it's already full I can't help you there. I'm actually sorry if that sounded demanding and you may need to have her give you the link she asked me to live with her but yet again sorry if it sounded demanding it wasn't meant to
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2011 2:48 pm
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