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_Amyninkai_

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Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2011 1:14 am

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Duo manga made by _amyninkai_ & eternallunalight.

Kiyoko has always been a strange sort of girl, simple but head always up in the clouds it seemed. With her oddities, there were some that poked fun and knew she was strange, but Kiyoko knew that they were in the wrong. Then one day something decides to go ahead and fall right out of those clouds she has always looked among. Falling through a field of feathers, there they were! Angels! Now cornered by what her eyes cannot believe, these angels now tell her that her soul is in danger?!

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CLIFF HANGER.
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Muwahaha. What you think? x3

Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:27 pm

Stunning job. :3

Although page two... You could've switched Hikaru's spot with Yoru's, along with the boxes. I feel more like I'm reading it as "The other [blah]" and then "One was [blah]".

That's my only issue there though.

Otherwise, it's superb. 8D
POST MOAR. I demands eht. B|

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Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:51 pm

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Stunning job. :3

Although page two... You could've switched Hikaru's spot with Yoru's, along with the boxes. I feel more like I'm reading it as "The other [blah]" and then "One was [blah]".

That's my only issue there though.

Otherwise, it's superb. 8D
POST MOAR. I demands eht. B|

I agree with this fine gentleman above me. . o .

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