So I made this girl named Noelle, and she's a martial artist. She boasts about being the greatest, in yet this is just a cover-up. She's skilled, but she's too afraid to apply her skills to opponents. She finds fear to be a weakness, so she covers it up with an "I'm the greatest fighter ever" attitude. She doesn't have enough confidence, either.

So she always loses in a fight, ALWAYS. Except I want to make one of the final chapters where she goes against this huge macho fighter who has the same arrogant attitude as her. But when he tells her, "You can't beat me!" and laughs at her, she snaps and goes all-out on him.

xd So what do you think? Does she seem like a believable character? I wrote all this down, too.

Btw, this is for a book by me, NOT a fanfic.