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[Q] Never the Faun (WIP)

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Saliru

Cluttered Hunter

PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2011 12:27 pm


AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name - Never
Nicknames - Nah
Gender - Male
Age - 14

Faction - Monster
Race - Faun

Natural Ability
Prowl - He enjoys sneaking around his environment causing various intentional rustles and twig snaps to incite paranoia. Sometimes though, no sound at all - creating that "I'm being watched" sensation humans love so much.

FEAR Ability
Pan-ic (Headlights) - Nah attempts to sing a haunting tune causing confusion.

Personality
He left it back home.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy?
Growing up, other monsters around him never really understood his scariness. In fact, it was even his father - the demon - who did the scaring for their family. He has never heard of any truly scary fauns, at least not in this day and age. He intends to change that. Bring respect to his kind and no longer be ignorantly labeled as demon. Hopefully he'll make his father proud in the process even if it worries his mother a bit to see him go.

Physical Description
He appears to be a human from his head to his waist save for a pair of impressive black horns and pointed fuzzy ears. Past his waist though he has the back end of a solid black goat.

Eye Colour - Green
Hair - Medium-length spindly black hair
Skin Colour - Slightly tanned
Clothing - A short toga-like garment or loincloths made of animal furs.
Extra - NA
References - He ugly.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:13 pm


It always feels like somebody's watching me~e~

Anyhoo, what I'd recommend is for you to expand. Where is he coming to Amityville from? Does he come from a family of fauns? How do they feel about his determination to prove his race's worth?

Also, go more into his personality. Maybe give some examples of how someone ended up on his sh*t list and what happened?

It's a good starting point, but you should expaaaaaand.

Kaze Taco


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:22 pm


This looks like a character that fits the shop perfectly. Good job. (:

I would love to see a little bit of info on his background! That's all I feel is missing. You don't have to get too specific, but something just to get a feel of where he's coming from would be cool.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 19, 2011 12:48 pm


Sorry for the delay both of you, it took me a while to make the changes and have them still flow and look okay.

Kaze Taco

I tried to elaborate and explain a bit better, even added a new history section to give a bit on where he came from. Better? Anymore questions or want anything specific elaborated even further?

Nio Love

First up, thank you! :> Next, I added a history section giving his past better as well as added things here and there hoping it'd give a better feel of him. What do you think? Any questions left unanswered?

Saliru

Cluttered Hunter


Saliru

Cluttered Hunter

PostPosted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 8:07 pm


Added a prologue section to basically show what led to his application being submitted in solo form. Let me know what ya'll think, hopefully it's given a bit of better insight into his mind and where he's coming from.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:16 pm


Fixed his ref arts to be a heck of a lot less hectic. Hopefully it's easier now to not just look at arts but to get past them to his history and prologue sections.

Saliru

Cluttered Hunter

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