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 Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 6:07 pm
Here you can show off your drawings..poems..etc..^^
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 6:11 pm
I HAVE A POEM! 3nodding
I See
I see you.
I see him.
I see her.
I see your sorrows.
I see your joys.
I see all.
Yet...I am blind.
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 6:16 pm
Zaeon I HAVE A POEM! 3nodding I SeeI see you.
I see him.
I see her.
I see your sorrows.
I see your joys.
I see all.
Yet...I am blind.I like ^^
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 6:45 pm
Zaeon I HAVE A POEM! 3nodding I SeeI see you.
I see him.
I see her.
I see your sorrows.
I see your joys.
I see all.
Yet...I am blind.
Nice twist. :3
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Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2004 8:50 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 9:06 am
Well, I'm a bit of a writer myself, but my story is far from complete. Maybe I'll post the prologue later heart
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 1:00 pm
silent tears,
for you i cry,
so many fears,
to pass me by,
i wish the tears,
would just break through,
so i could show my self,
how much i miss you.
replacement things,
and substitutes,
all this brings,
are memories of you.
and every word,
to every song,
althought its heard,
its been so long,
sing ive heard the notes,
the happy tunes,
all i notice,
are reminders of you,
and how you stray,
from present day,
and how it hurts,
to not be first,
and i still dream,
of how it'd be,
if you had stayed,
to comfort me.
and your name,
is such a curse,
yet so beautiful,
it couldn't be worse.
and so i sit,
up in my room,
inside my dream,
my image of you.
and as i watch the rain,
i try to gain,
a peice of mind,
a peice of what's mine,
a peice of my soul,
that you have stole,
i want it back,
release my chain,
so what's left of me,
may still remian.
*gasp for air* i have memorized this poem, it's called "let me live again" it was inspired by a breakup (like most sad depressing poems are) and i shall never date online again biggrin
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 1:08 pm
Damn, damn, damn, damn... stressed I just wrote a really long poem (that I have memorized) and it didn't show up... life's a big, fat, ugly, evil b***h. stare
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 1:26 pm
Kaimono Damn, damn, damn, damn... stressed I just wrote a really long poem (that I have memorized) and it didn't show up... life's a big, fat, ugly, evil b***h. stare
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Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 5:22 pm
I write poetry and i draw... i think i suck at it, but oh well...
All Pain Ends
As her tear drops fall down silently
as if they were rain,
She tightly clinches her pillow
while she holds back the pain.
Her thoughts keep on telling her
this will be her last night,
As she holds the empty bottle
her soul tries to put up a fight.
She just couldnt take it anymore,
all this pain she held inside,
Knowing this the last time she'll
watch the rain fall gently as she cried.
Thinking back about the events
in her life and how it has been,
She has no regrets for what she just did,
her heart just can not mend.
She wonders if they'll finally notice her,
Her family and her friends,
For This was just the only way out,
a final time where all pain ends
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 1:11 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 5:18 pm
 Todays shallow View is Nothing To You Tommorows Shadow Feelings Is Nothing to you Yesterdays Pale Figure is Still Nothing to you Days Go on By Nothing Ever new Today was meaningless to me and you ___ ts you That Ive Told Ill Always Keep your Soul. Its You that Has said Youll ALways hold my Corrupted Toll Its something We've Said We'd Keep Soem Sord Of Trust Tear it Away Make it Fad Cause Now Youve Done nothing But Decive Leave Me Alone Before I Slay Your Soul I feel So Used From You Leave me The ******** Alone Before i Currupt You Inner Roles _____ yes i know these are angsty and sad its not my good stuff and i have written over 2k of poems sincei was in 5th grade i picked these randomly But No matter what When Im Always with you
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 7:53 pm
gtg to bed goodnight guys sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 11:01 am
[Rhenium.09] gtg to bed goodnight guys sweatdrop good day now xd
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Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 7:39 pm
Heart's Woes
In one breath I rise
Soaring to the heavens
Never to look back again
Heading straight to my demise
I feel the pain you've given to me
Daggers of rejection
A beast has awaken inside
Hatred brews within me
How can one cause such pain
And not even bother to care?
Look at what you've done to me!
This burden is driving me insane
And now I clutch what's left of me
The nothingness
The suffering
Lost propriety
I hold on only to let go
For I cannot bear it any longer
And as I die I listen
To the last of my heart's woes
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