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Name: Kellan Ivory DeVille

Nickname: He has none

Age: 18

Birthday: June 9th

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Alexandrite

Blood Type: AB-

Fav. Food: Anything rich in flavor but he’s especially fond of traditional Southern Cooking and pecan pie

Hated Food: “American” cuisine like hamburgers and hotdogs. YUCK

School: Azure Valley Academy

Hobbies:

Playing the Piano – Music speaks to Kellan in a way people do not. He’s always been attracted to it and the only instrument they have in the penthouse is the upright piano. He begged for lessons as a child and now plays rather beautifully. He can sing to accompany himself but never will in front of other people, oh my no!

Composition – This includes musical composition but is not limited to it. Kellan likes to write when the mood strikes him about nearly everything including fiction and essays. He’s written some biting diatribes about his rich Southern family as well over the years. Some of these compositions are scattered across the internet and he keeps an anonymous blog that's gathered quite a following. He tries to post in it at least once a day.

Organic Chemistry/Botany – Kellan is fascinated by plants and what they can do to people. He studies them when he can, dabbling in making organic compounds to varying effects. If he ever gets a job he might consider making this his career. Since he lives in a penthouse he grows what he can on the roof of his building but mostly must stick to the gardens at school. He especially likes experimenting by making his own perfume and cologne.

Virtues:

Organized – Kellan is a very clinical and somewhat anally compulsive person. He must know where everything is. Because of this he is a good person for organizing things. He takes amazing notes that he will (sometimes) let people borrow for classes. All of his belongings are organized in tidy places just for them and he is very good about keeping dates and times straight (though to be fair when he does not attend a function for someone he has made the conscious decision not to go. He did not forget - see self centered). He can explain to you point by point how he feels and why he's upset. He doesn't mind telling you if you upset him and though he's not cruel about it (or, not intentionally, but his callousness can come in to play) he is rather matter of fact and clinical about his reasoning. You certainly won't leave the conversation confused about anything he's explaining.

Genuine – Kellan is very genuine. No matter what he says you can be absolutely certain he means it. He is not the type of person to say things in the heat of the moment that he doesn't fully believe. He's also very genuine in his manner. He won't pretend to be anything other than who he is and won't expect anyone else to, either. He especially will be forthright with how he feels about any person, place, or situation even if his opinion may be unpopular.

Loyal – If you manage to prove yourself to him, and this a huge if, Kellan will be loyal to you for the rest of his days. Though it takes some doing once past his wall and his mistrust it will be almost impossible to lose it. Even if the evidence is almost overwhelming against you Kellan will believe in you. That's just the sort of person he is. He'll do whatever he can to help once he knows he can count on you.

Confident - When he is doing something he knows and loves, like playing piano or creating a new fragrance, Kellan is very confident. He knows just what he's doing and how to go about it. He cannot be shaken by anything: hecklers, doubts, or even harsh words. When he is doing something he loves he is the king of his own world. Even if he's not doing something he loves (with the exception of public speaking. That just terrifies him) he will tackle it with an air of confidence. He won't pay attention to naysayers then, either, because they don't know him and they don't care about him so why should he listen to what they think?

Flaws:

Socially Inept – Kellan is painfully shy because he grew up alone. He almost never approaches someone first and if approached he very well might blush or be struck silent. He simply does not know how to start getting to know people. When introduced he can mumble his way through it but no more than that. When pushed into conversation he becomes incomprehensible and will find the quickest way to leave. The only exception to this seems to be when addressing other Negaverse agents, especially of higher rank than him because he *can't* avoid talking to them. This also extends to ANY authority figure in his life including, but only reluctantly, his parents.

Distrustful – Kellan is also naturally mistrustful of people and of their motives. If they’re not around him for his money then he believes they will only be bound to leave him in the end. He does not trust easily or well and fighting to get into that trust will take a lot of energy and time and most people give up.

Self Involved – Not in the conceited sort of way but in a general way. Being mostly by himself he is content to be by himself. Almost everything he does is a solitary activity and he's used to that. He may have promised to meet you at four but if he’s wrapped up in something else he won’t make it. His own life comes first. Besides, you’re not really his friend now are you?

Callous – Bad things happen in life, right? So why should it bother him? Your grandma just died? That sucks but it’s a part of life. Some people live and some people die. Some people are rich and some are poor. That’s just how it is. There’s no reason to cry about it. As you might imagine, this attitude does not work well around other people - especially anyone in the opposite of himself (poor, grieving, or sympathetic people). He is not shy about this attitude, however, and will not listen to anyone trying to scold him or explain that he cannot talk/act/feel that way. He knows that's how the world is. The rest are just naive.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Very large, very innocent aqua blue eyes.

Hair: Brown, clean cut

Face: Oval shaped with very chiseled aristocratic features.

Clothes: Kellan is a label whore but not really by choice. It's simply all he knows. In fact, what's Walmart, anyway? So long as they look like they're in the classic style and fit him well you can put him in almost anything. Though, he doesn't wear shorts all that often. I'd try the classic sweater over a collared shirt with jeans or slacks.

Kellan's Family:

Imriel DeVille, Father, 43 - Imriel comes from a long line of French money extending the whole way through France. They have been at Court in the early centuries and still retain an ancestral home in Versailles. They migrated to the new world during the seventeen hundreds and settled the DeVille Plantation in Georgia. It is still family owned. In the modern world Imriel is a well respected attorney specializing in corporate law. He takes most of his cases away from Destiny City and deals with them in his office building downtown.

Helen Seymour-DeVille, Mother, 40 - Related distantly to the one time Queen Jane Seymour, Helen likewise comes from old money, only hers is the English kind. She was born in England but moved to Boston with her parents when she was ten and lived there until she married. Her family went back overseas once George had a stroke. Though she didn't need to work Helen got into interior decorating when she was young and set herself up as one of the best in the city almost the moment they arrived. They live in an immaculate penthouse downtown that's perfectly decorated - his mother's calling card.

Antoinette DeVille, Grandmother, 67 - Retired to the family home in Marseilles when her husband died, leaving the plantation to her son, Imriel. Her husband, Armand, left Kellan his sizable trust fund to mature only once his parents die. He had access to a controlled portion of it a year in how own bank account and it will also pay for his college and living expenses once he graduates. In fact, all the family money will go to Kellan until another heir is born.

Jane Seymour, Grandmother, 59 - Kellan's maternal grandmother lives in Bath, England and is, quite possibly, the only good influence in his life. He's only seen her three times in his entire life but he loves her dearly. She seems to be the only one not affected by the family money's influence and married for love.

George Seymour, Grandfather, 67 - The Seymour's have settled in Bath and London and a portion of them in Boston in the early sixteen hundreds. They had a lumber supplier in Boston that finally sold after the civil war but did great business with the DeVille's. George lives with his wife, Jane, in Bath, now, but a stroke has left him quite debilitated and he must be cared for. This does not allow him or Jane to travel anywhere and George cannot endure company for long periods of time.

Kellan's History:

The DeVille Plantation is nestled in the heart of Dixie, on the coast of the Atlantic on the outskirts of Savannah. It was the home Armand's family built in the late seventeen hundreds when they came over to the new world in search of a way to expand their fortunes. It is where Imriel grew up. His family did a lot of business with Helen's and this family tie has extended over two hundred years. When Imriel took over the plantation in the late eighties he kept in touch with George in Boston.

Helen and Imriel married in the fall of 1990 in a marriage all but arranged in the traditional sense. It made sense financially, two wealthy families united by blood and bond. Though they spanned different states the old money names were well known to one another and, after all, Helen and Imriel were unmarried and near enough to the same age. They met in the middle in Destiny City and settled down. The only thing that kept this from being a truly great marriage was that his parents couldn't stand one another. In fact, Helen was in love with someone else. However, they both had fortunes to lose, though, and chose civil obedience. Kellan was born nearly four years later and both sides considered their obligations to the marriage fulfilled.

No one in Kellan's family shows much affection. In fact, he has never seen his parents show affection to one another in a single instance in his entire life. They spend holidays together in solemn silence for as long as it takes to finish a celebratory meal or open presents. Once that is finished both parents move to separate rooms. They have separate bedrooms, keep separate hours, and have entirely separate lives.

Kellan was raised by a steady succession of nannies through his childhood beginning with Emma and ending with Mildred when he was fourteen years old. None of his nannies lasted longer than a year because his father either bedded them or attempted to and those he didn't try to have relations with with were found unworthy (here meaning, not attractive enough to screw) and were dismissed. As you might imagine, this had quite an impact on Kellan and he learned two very important lessons early in life: you cannot count on anyone but yourself and anyone you love will probably leave you.

Kellan discovered his love of music thanks to Enid, who lasted the longest in the DeVille household at eleven months, 16 days. His mother brought home an upright piano for the family room to compliment the dark wallpaper and Enid was a talented pianist. She used to play for Kellan and taught him how to play. Once Kellan discovered that he was lost to it and developed his only lasting relationship to date - his love of music.

Though Kellan is the quintessential "poor rich boy" he came by his faults and his attitude honestly. His formative years were so unstable with personal relationships that he grew up rather intelligent but there was nothing formed to deal with relationships or other people. So he learned to get by for himself. He learned to soothe himself, play by himself, and depend only upon himself at a very young age. By the time he reached school age the damage had been done and he didn't bother to, nor care to, make friends.

To date Kellan is much the same as he ever was. His hobbies are mostly singular and he doesn't have to work but if he does he may consider starting his own custom line of fragrances due to his love of organic chemistry and botany.

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Socially Inept –

Leaving the big crits to heavy hitters that actually know what they're doing, this aspect stood out to me not as something inappropriate (because hey, there are shy people in the world), but as something that is going to be difficult.

Shy characters in a game that is by nature dependent on social give and take is hard enough. People so shy they are silent or actively seek escape means that its going to hard AND incredibly frustrating for the other people in a role-play to keep the scene moving or progressing at all.

All this to say that I'm curious what coping mechanisms you've got planned as a player, not as the character, to make this work in the system?

I would expand on "Callous" a little more. You have his feelings down, but not much else. How does he respond when people try to tell him things that he doesn't want to hear? How do people react to his reaction?

I like this character. He's pretty balanced and I love the bio. It's vey in depth. Anyway, just a couple things...

Romantic- Doesn't really seem like a virtue to me. The only people who are going to see this are potential romantic interests. Nobody else is really going to care, some guys might even look down on him for this. If you could make it read more like he's sensitive or good at communication about certain things it would be better.

Wicked sense of Humor- Seems slightly out of place. I see where you're going with it, so it's fine. Maybe expand a little on the types of jokes he tells?

Loyal/distrustful- Can you add some examples of exceptions? How can someone get him to trust them? How can his trust be broken?

Socially inept clashes a little with sense of humor. If he's so great with friends, what's so scary about strangers?

Hope this helps!

"Effective Comunicator" does not work well with "Socially Inept." Painfully shy people usually have a really hard time communicating their ideas because they're usually afraid of other people's judgement, or something like that. And really..just reading the two there is so much that clashes that I really thin you need to chose one or the other - is he confident in himself and his emotions, or shy and afraid of communicating? You even say inside your 'Callous' flaw that he ISN'T shy about his attitude, etc. And also, since a lot of what you've written about his personality can be summed up as "Arrogant," I'd like to point out that arrogant people usually aren't shy, and are quite proud of themselves.

"Wicked Sense of Humor" Does not read as a virtue to me. If anything, I'd say it is a flaw. My experience dealing with people with a similar form of humor is that me and my friends generally dislike the person because they come off like a MASSIVE douche bag. Whcih would work with the "callous" flaw.

I think "Confident" would be closer to 'arrogant' under closer inspection and fleshing out. It certainly READS more like arrogance to me. And"Self Involved" really kinda adds to that opinion.

So really, reading him he seems to be more like he is LOADED with flaws, because even his virtues seem like flaws. Even 'effective communicator' has it's downside, though is still probably the closes, most fleshed out thing, you have that could count as a virtue. But really, so far I don't see many redeeming qualities to him. ;<

I don't say any of this to be mean, but to help you build your character into something that might one day get stamped and accepted.