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PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 7:52 pm


Name: Chaaya Devoti

Chaaya - Derived from the Hebrew name Chaya, meaning "life." Chaaya in and of itself is an Indian name meaning "shadow" so her name has a double meaning.

Devoti - From the word Devotion, it's pretty self-explanatory where her name is concerned. It was chosen due to her love of what she sees as her calling in life.


Blood colour: A Prussian blue-ish/ dark teal color. [#005f6a]

Gender: Female

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Personality: When other trolls are out FLARPing, Chaaya is indoors learning to cook. She is not the type of troll for things she deems as useless and unimportant. Instead, Chaaya will almost always have something to do including cooking, cleaning, studying and many other things others would think of as chores.

Chaaya has been known to overwork herself to the point that she faints. If Dogmom doesn't make her, Chaaya will work through times she should be eating or sleeping. All of the food Chaaya makes usually goes to the army barracks, saving very little for herself which may be why she is so stunted in the growth department. But to Chaaya, cooking is not a punishment, but a reward. To relax after she ends up dring herself to exhaustion, she will create some sort of delicious dessert for herself.

Due to her dedication, Chaaya's food is becoming very good and is on the rise to being great. She has a flair for doing odd combinations and playing with them until they end up being tasty. Chaaya's food is not the best yet but she is dedicated to making something for which she will become famous.

Her biggest dream is to serve a meal to Troll Gordon Ramsay and have him compliment her hard work. And possibly to own her own restaurant. Whichever comes first.

Chaaya has no favorite dish in particular, as she doesn't like to cook the same thing more than once. If she were to pick a favorite ingredient, it would be milk produced by hoofbeasts.

When Chaaya does decide to venture outside away from home she is as prickly as a pear. She has a low self-esteem due in large part to her short stature though she doesn't feel like she fits in with others. Chaaya often feels like she's better than others due to her focus and drive which she feels other trolls her age lack. This in turn comes off as being a know-it-all and makes others troll her for that reason, which makes her feel even less secure in herself. Others' opinions shouldn't matter to Chaaya but they do and it hurts her to admit it. This, among other things, has opened her up as a trolling target. In response to this, Chaaya has developed several defense mechanisms.

Her short temper is perhaps the most notorious of them all. If you so much as look at Chaaya the wrong way, out comes her frying pan. She will give you a chance to change the way that you are behaving and if you don’t, she will behave worse than drunken Troll Snooki. Chaaya will resort to all manner of attack: scratching, kicking, biting, knife throwing and of course, her specialty of dealing out a mean serving of whoopass with her frying pan.

Another notable defense mechanism is her competitive attitude. If you think that Chaaya is too small to do something safely or just small in general she will not only prove that she can but that she will do it better. Often, she will do things that she really shouldn’t because it will endanger her but she doesn’t care – she is that determined. She doesn’t often succeed but she tries nonetheless and will continue to try regardless.

The one thing about Chaaya that she will never admit is that she loves to write stories. Her stories are not the average kind – they involve the people she knows and pails - lots and lots of pails. She is embarrassed by her stories but she is often driven to write them and fantasize of things that might happen.

Deep down inside, Chaaya longs for an amazing red romance but it’s hard for her to show it. Every time she has opened herself up, Chaaya has been hurt by another so she doesn't want to allow herself to repeat history. But if you’re dedicated, Chaaya will eventually let you close enough to know her. She may come off as gruff and often mean, but she is a dedicated friend. Any moirail she may eventually earn is one that she will keep for life regardless of their blood color. She believes that as long as a troll is trying, their blood color doesn't matter.


Strengths:
--+ Hardworking - Chaaya adores work and isn't afraid of taking up her share as well as another trolls. If you put her to a task, she will work unhindered until it is done - even if that takes several days. Chaaya will not break or eat unless Dogmom forces her to do so. She prides herself on her dedication to her work.
--+ Caring - Deep down inside, Chaaya cares about others. When she sees another troll, Chaaya wants to take care of them even if they don't really reciprocate her red emotions. The reason other trolls can get to her is because she cares. Chaaya hides it, but she can't help but to embrace the hurt of loving others - even the lower blood castes.
--+ Creative - Chaaya was hatched with a spatula in her hand and a desire to create beautiful dishes in her soul. Well, not really. It's more like Chaaya was flipping through the channels of her television and spotted Troll Gordon Ramsay on one of his cooking channels. After that, she was obsessed with making things as beautiful as the ones she'd seen him make. Chaaya painstakingly learned to cook and how to create unique flavors as well as how to display them beautifully. This is Chaaya's favorite trait about herself.

Flaws:
--+ Napoleon Complex - Chaaya hatched significantly smaller than the other trolls she knows. Due to this, she was often trolled by other wigglers. It got to be so bad that Chaaya developed a complex about being smaller. She is constantly trying to make up for that fact with bluster and noise, and if anyone so much as hints that Chaaya is small, expect her frying pan to come out and a battle to begin. She loathes that she is smaller and would rather die than to admit that all that trolling got to her.
--+ Competitive - Chaaya has a constant need to prove that she is just as good as everyone else. When she was trolled for her height, Chaaya set out to beat everyone as much she could. This quickly turned into a driving need. Once she was better at something than another troll, Chaaya couldn't get enough. She constantly challenged others to things and worked to be the best. Deep down, Chaaya knows that she really shouldn't be so competitive but it's so hard to turn off after all this time. A great deal of times, Chaaya will do things that are dangerous to herself or others because of the drive to be the best. This includes long hours practicing cooking (often to the point of exhaustion) as well as in battle. Chaaya can become so bent on beating her opponent that she will leave room for a maiming blow or worse.
--+ Obsessive - When Chaaya was just a tiny wiggler, Dogmom forced her obsession of cleanliness on her. If there was even the smallest of flecks of dirt landed on Chaaya's body, Dogmom would wash her clean. As she grew, Chaaya began to demand to be rushed to the cleansing vestibule when she considered herself "filthy." This obsession eventually branched out to a full blown disorder - items had to be in multiples of five or five inches apart. Chaaya has no negative feelings at all toward this trait - to her, having an obsessive compulsive disorder is just another part of her being. It's like the fact that she's left handed - something she could work at and change but really sees no need to do.


Weapon: A huge frying pan

Appearance:
--+ Hair - Short in the back slightly longer in the front, black and spikey. Similiar to a pixie cut.
--+ Eyes - cat-like and heavily lashed which are often hidden behind square shaped glasses.
--+ Horns - Medium length stag-like horns which have three prongs. They are all about the same thickness.
--+ Height - 5'1" at her tallest (as an adult)
--+ Body type - Very slender - she almost doesn't appear to be female, her curves are so slight.
--+ Expression - She is often with a look of concentration on her face - it isn't like she's frowning, just very focused.
--+ Pose - Chaaya often crosses her arms or has her hands on her hips.
--+ Clothing - Chaaya is almost always found wearing a black chef's jacket unbuttoned over a dark gray T-shirt with her symbol on it. She normally wears a medium shade of gray jeans and Prussian blue high top sneakers.
--+ Accessories - She has a silver earring dangling from her left ear. It's a miniature replica butcher knife which hangs down to near her cheek.
--+ Notable features - Chaaya has a large burn scar on her right hand from her palm to the inner part of her elbow.


Power: None

Home: The city - Chaaya lives in a penthouse communal hivesystem compartment which is kept spotless. The walls are covered with cooking related decorations and tons of posters of Troll Gordon Ramsay. The kitchen is the main focus of the hive and it is kept methodically neat. Every single item is kept in a neatly labeled jar or canister. Everything is kept in multiples of five - knives, plates, pans, etc.

Lusus: A small dogbeast resembling a Tibetan Spaniel that has horns similar to Chaaya's, Dogmom is on the smaller side barely coming up to the middle of Chaaya's calves. Chaaya learned all of her obsessive behavior from Dogmom's strange obsession with cleanliness a fact that is strange compared to other dogbeasts. Chaaya feels a closeness to Dogmom because they are both a little bit out there. Because of their closeness, Dogmom and Chaaya are rarely seen apart.


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 7:14 pm


Okey dokey, I think that she's as good as I'm going to get her without serious crit from the staff so how does she sound?

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 24, 2011 3:41 pm


Edited to reflect Dartanian Isthill's critique which was sent through PMs.

I also fixed the way Chaaya's name information was placed for readability.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 2:58 pm


i'm giving it a full read through right now, but one thing i see that strikes me as odd is having a dog lusus that is obsessed with cleanliness. a feline lusus, yeah, but the majority of dogs i have seen revel in dirt and stinkyness, and view baths as punishment.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 3:42 pm


Chaaya is a nifty troll. She seems to put a lot of pressure upon herself and that her devotion is a very strong character trait. I wonder though does she ever overwork and stress herself out? If she does how does she remedy it?

Another thing I wondered about is how does she view the hemospectrum? Is she all for it? neutral? against it? I kind of what to see where she thinks she belongs in society.

I'm also wondering what are some of Chaaya's favorite things to cook? It's pointed out that she is very serious about it but is it a passion of hers or just something to pass the time? Does she have aspirations to be a chef?

I hope that helps some, and best of luck with getting her!
PostPosted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:11 pm


Edited to reflect the newest crits.

Expanded upon Chaaya's cooking related bits and Dogmom's cleanliness.

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:30 pm


alright, i read over chaaya and she seems to have a good base, but there are some things that need to be worked on!

"When Chaaya does decide to venture outside away from home she is as prickly as a pear. She has a low self-esteem due to a lot of things, including her short stature. This, among other things, has opened her up as a trolling target. In response to this, Chaaya has developed several defense mechanisms. "

You're using 'a lot of things' twice here, to sweep over things that seem pretty important. Why else, apart from being short, does she have low self-esteem? She seems like a competent, talented, hard working young troll, I'm curious as to why she would think so little of herself.

What other reasons attract other trolls to giving her a hard time? Maybe she acts like a know it all, as she actually does know more than other trolls, but instead of coming across as smart and helpful, she unintentional ends up annoying and belittling other trolls?

the fact that she will work till she passes out and will throw herself into dangerous situations is a big part of her that is seriously bad for her self. does this transition over to fighting, and being careless in situations where she should be alert and trying to take care of herself? i think this would be interesting to work on and expand as a flaw, obviously you'd have to re balance the strengths, but i think it might end up making for some interesting situations for her! :O

the sentence about her receiving her scar and becoming hesitant to try new things seems slightly off from the rest of her, and clashes directly with her creative strength. after all, whenever you are learning something new you are doing so by trying something different, and pushing yourself forward. as a troll who spends all her free time learning and practising, it doesn't make sense that she wouldn't try to branch out every now and then. doubly so with cooking which is all about experimentation and inventing.

i hope this gives you enough ideas and directions to work off to make chaaya even more awesome! :>
PostPosted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 7:13 pm


I edited in the recklessness into her competitive streak since that's where it was supposed to be the first time, sorry!

I also edited out the bit about the scar since it was just a small thing for flavor that really wasn't needed.

I hope it makes more sense now.

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