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Thadius J Elexion

PostPosted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 3:20 pm


Personal Information
Name: Thadius J. Elexion
Nickname(s)/Alias(es): None as of yet, he prefers to be called by his name
Age: 21
Reiatsu Colour: Red

Rank: No rank as of yet

Physical Description: Standing at an even six feet, Thadius is a tall, handsome young man with jet black hair and a lean physique. His black half-rimmed glasses give his somewhat feminine face a cool business type look. At first glance he seems like your average cool, calculating type, until your notice his eyes. Thadius' irises are a crimson red, and laced with little lines of yellow and orange. His pupils although not quite slits, are narrow and oval shaped instead of being round. Many have commented that Thadius' eyes look like they should belong to a snake. Thadius has great respect for the shinigami unifrom and all it represents, so he is rarely seen out of it. He also keeps it perfectly clean and tidy at all times, just like the rest of his body. He is meticulously tidy, and gets fussy if even the smallest amount of dirt makes its way onto him. Although he is not muscular, or even paticulary in shape, Thadius is by no means skinny, he eats right and takes good care of himself so he looks strikingly handsome and clean cut.

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Personality: Thadius is all about research. Even when he was a child, he was fascinated with figuring out how things worked, and finding ways to make them more efficient. He enjoys reading, researching, and creating new things more than anything else. He is also something of a narcissist. He is very concerned with how he looks, so he takes time to make sure he looks his best. He will even take time out of his research to work out and keep his body in shape. Thadius comes off as cold and calculating, and often will seem to only do things that he figures will benefit him. Although he puts off this cold exterior, to those who take the time to become his friend he is kind and loyal. Becoming his friend however, is no easy feat.

Likes: Food, books, learning, spouting off about things he knows

Dislikes: Dirty things, dirty people, people who hate learning, people who act like they know everything but actually don't

Zanpakutou:

Name: Quetzalcoatl

Spirit: A large feathered serpent. His feathers are mostly white with black streaks running along some of them, and his scales are a mixture between red and black. Quetzalcoatl has feathers covering the top half of his body, as well as two large wings about 6' from his head. His head and underbelly are scaled, and his eyes are crimson with long black slits in them. All in all Quetzalcoatl is roughly 25' long, and his body is about 5' thick. Quetzalcoatl is both similar to, and very different from Thadius. On the one hand he is very interested in learning new things (even though he already posseses a vast amount of knowledge) but on the other, he does not share his knowledge easily. Often if one is seeking to learn something from him, one must first pass some form of test or challenge.

Inner World: To put it simply, the universe. Thadius' inner world is smack dab in the middle of a solar system, one of the most intriguing, yet unsolvable puzzles in existence. Thadius has always been interested in how things work, and the way the stars move has always been one of his favorite subjects.

Sealed Form: Unlike most zanpakuto, Quetzalcoatl does not take on the form of a katana in it's sealed state. Instead it takes the form of a European short sword, with a rather unique design. Quetzalcoatl's blade is a normal straight double-edged blade, but the hilt guard is in the form of two spread wings with the tips pointing out toward the tip of the blade. From the shoulders of the wings sprouts the hilt, which is in the shape of a serpent’s head and looks just like Quetzalcoatl's sprirt.

(Not obtained yet) Shikai Name/Release Phrase: “Slide through the heavens, Quetzalcoatl.”
Shikai Description: When Quetzalcoatl is released, the Serpent's head that forms the hilt slides through Thadius' hand, and wraps around his arm. The wings become longer, and the blade slowly transforms into the body and tail of a serpent. As it completes its transformation Quetzalcoatl slides all the way up Thadius' body, and coils itself around his shoulders and neck, having become a living serpent that is about 3' long. It usually stays coiled around Thadius' neck, but when needed it is fully capable of striking his opponents. Quetzalcoatl can also speak to Thadius by whispering in his ear. He will often warn Thadius of attack the shinigami cannot see coming, and will somtimes (though rarely) offer strategic advice.

Shikai Powers: Quetzalcoatl's power is known as Vector manipulation. It is the ability to alter the direction or speed of and objects motion, or to take an object that is not in motion and cause it to move. Thadius can manipulate the vectors of any matter within a 25' radius of his body, although it is difficult to manipulate the vectors of other zanpakuto. The only things he cannot affect are biological (or living) objects. The power to manipulate vectors does come with two rather severe limitations. The power is to great for either Thadius or Quetzalcoatl alone, so they must remain in contact to be able to use it. Also it takes a large amount of concentration, and energy to alter the vector of an object so it is both difficult and taxing.

(Not obtained yet) Bankai Name: “Bankai. Come forth, he who knows ten thousand things. Quetzalcoatl.”

Bankai Description: Upon it's release, an explosion of power bursts from the ground at Thadius' feet, and both his and Quetzalcoatl's eyes glow with power. The serpent around his neck slithers down his body and starts to grow in size. The energy around them hides the transformation, and once it is complete the energy turns into a shower of feathers that slowly fall to the ground and reveal the change. In bankai, Quetzalcoatl takes on the same form as it's spirit, a 25' long feather snake with fearsome crimson eyes. Thadius stands on Quetzalcoatl's head and controls it from there.

Bankai Powers: Other than the scale of the power, there is only one difference between bankai and shikai. In bankai Quetzalcoatl can also manipulate the vectors of energy based attacks like kido. The limitations remain the same, it cannot effect living things, and Thadius and Quetzalcoatl must remain in contact for the power to be used. The separation of the two is less devastating in bankai however, as the rather large serpent is a much more fearsome opponent than the 3' long shikai version.

Other information

Special Accessories: The only thing Thadius wears that most people don't are his glasses, and he carries an ornate red and black pen with him at all times. The pen was given to him by a friend in the Rukongai, and he treasures it above all his other possessions.

Skills/Abilities: Thaduis is a very fast reader, and retains knowledge much better than your average person. His mind is like a safe, and once a piece of knowledge gets inside it never gets out.

Kidou:

Bakudou:

  • 1. Restrain (Sai)
  • 4. Crawling Rope (Hainawa)
  • 8. Repulse (Seki)
  • 9. Strike (Geki)
  • 9. Disintegrating Circle (Hourin)


Hadou:

  • 1. Thrust (Shou)
  • 4. White Lightning (Byakurai)


Biography/History: Thadius died at a very young age. His parents were both brilliant physicists, and instilled into him, a thirst, a desire to learn everything he could about all sorts of topics. He began reading at 3 years old, and by the time he was 6 he was reading books that were high school level. As a child Thadius was almost never seen without a book in his hand, and when he was first sent to elementary school this fact got him beaten up by the other children who were jealous of his knowledge. Fearing that he would eventually be seriously hurt, his parents pulled him out of public school and taught him themselves. Thanks to his thirst for knowledge, and his incredible ability to retain information, Thadius was able to complete the high-school curriculum by the time he was 12. As successful scientists, his parents had the money and the influence to get him into Oxford university, and after month of letters, tests, and arguments he was finally admitted. Sadly, he never got the chance to attend, the plane that he was flying in to head to the school crashed and he along with most of the passengers was killed. Many of the people who died didn't move on right away, so a small team of Shinigami was sent to help them to do so. Thadius watched as several people had their heads tapped by the hilt of the Shinigami's blades, and sent to the Rukongai. This process fascinated him and he started to pester the Shinigami as to how it worked. One of the kinder shinigami took his aside and told him how it work. With childish glee, Thadius gladly accepted the burial and was sent to the rukongai. Over the next five years, he spent all of his time finding out everything he could about the shinigami acadamy. He tried several times to get accepted, but the kept saying his was to young, and didn't have the right skills. It wasn't hard for someone as astute as Thadius to figure out that he needed to be able to control his reiatsu better. It didn't take him long to learn how to do it, but actually mastering basic reiatsu manipulation took him a few years. When he was finally admitted into the academy, he spent the four years studying every piece of material he could get his hands on. Just like back on earth, he was teased by his classmates, but no one beat him up this time. As dedicated as he was to books, and studying, he never really learned to fight very well, but he was a decent kidou user. By the time he graduated he had read all the library materials he was permitted to, and was a decent fighter. Upon graduation he set his sights on the 12th division, he wanted to become a scientist just like his parents before him.

(Putting this up as sort of... template I guess? This is what I was thinking about why Thadius would fear his own power.)

A few months after joining the 12th division and taking his place as a true shinigami, Thadius began to notice a slight change in his zanpakuto. Although he was devoted to his studies, he did make sure to practice with his sword each day, and even read a whole bunch of books about zanpakuto to learn everything he could about them. As part of his daily workout he would simply sit cross-legged with his blade in his lap, and meditate. He would clear his mind and listen to see if his sword would speak to him. At first nothing happened, but over time he started to feel something emanating from the blade. Not words, but a sense of age, wisdom, and power. As the feeling grew, he felt like something was lying in his sword, as if it was waiting. Finally one day he asked it, "Who are you?" and in his mind he heard, "I thought you would never ask."

Although he had asked its name, every time the blade replied he couldn't hear the answer. He spoke to the blade about it, but it simply told him that he already knew its name. Eventually he sought out the advice of his captain, who told him to meet him at the training grounds later that day. When he got there the captain was standing there blade drawn waiting for him. He was not prepared for what happened. The captain started to beat the ever living daylights out of him. He had no idea why, but it was all he could do to defend himself from the onslaught of attacks. Finally when all seemed lost, he reached out mentally to his blade pleading for help. "Call my name, I want to help you but you have to call my name first!" "But I don't know it!" "Yes you do, look deep inside, you've always known my name!" And suddenly Thadius realized it. He started to laugh at his own stupidity, the blade was right he had known it all along. His captain looked at him with a raised eyebrow as Thadius picked himself up of the ground, and spoke his blade's name for the first time. "Quetzalcoatl." There was a surge of power, and his sword transformed into a winged snake that coiled itself around his neck. "Lets finish this." "Yes." Thadius could barely stand, but Quetzalcoatl had tons of energy with which to fight. Making a quick decision Thadius drew on the full power of his blade. Normally he wouldn't have been able to do this, but pushed as far as he was, and with the energy of the initial release of shikai, he tapped into Quetzalcoatl's full potential. He made the air around him spin so quickly, and in such a tight circle that it became razor sharp, and in a fluid motion lashed out at his captain. The captain hadn't been prepared for that level of attack from a brand new shikai, and didn't block it in time. He was left with a very nasty slash that ran from his right shoulder, down to his left hip. Fortunately for both of them, the wound was not a fatal one, and the captain was able to get them both to the 4th squad, and recovered without much trouble.

Although the captain was fine, Thadius was not. His wounds from the fight healed up just fine, but there was a scar on his heart that would take a long time to heal. He had never before truly hurt someone. Sure he had killed his fair share of hollows, but he knew that he was purifying them rather than actually killing them. This time it was his power that had truly hurt someone. His captain told him not to worry about it, but he promised himself, than until he learned to control it, he would be extremely cautious with his shikai. This fact annoyed Quetzalcoatl, and caused many of the stars in Thadius inner world to start going out. Both he and the blade knew that if he was ever going to use his full power again, he would have to get over his fear of losing control.

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Graduate level Kidou abilites
PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 7:20 am


Alrighty then, let's get down to work, shall we?

First of, you will have to rework both your shikai and bankai abilities. Recently we have lifted most of the restrictions on zanpukatous but this one just seems unacceptable to me. By saying that you have the ability to control vectors of all matter you make it literally impossible for someone to land any physical attack on you. Then you go on to say that in bankai you have the ability to control vectors of energy which makes it not only impossible to land a physical attack, but an energy based attack as well. You have basically made yourself god and that's a no-no. Also, just fyi, acceleration isn't a vector.

Secondly I'd like to see a bit more length in your descriptions; mainly your appearance. As your profile is the first place people will come to find out about you such a key piece of information needs to be pretty in depth.

Next is the matter of the sealed zanpukatou. This isn't so much a problem as an inconsistancy really. Zanpukatou generally don't change their sealed form after gaining shikai. If you wish you can keep it like this (though if you do I want some details explaining why this happens) or you can just have it be sealed like the european short sword from the beginning (yes it's a bit out of canon tradition, but it is fairly common here). Either way, I want some details please.

Time for your skills/abilities section. Again, not so much a problem though if you ask around you will find that 'almost photographic memory' doesn't happen. The key thing about photographic memory is that there are absolutely no flaws with it, so almost wouldn't apply. Also, photographic memory doesn't help anyone learn anything. After all, all they have to do is bring it up and they 'know' it.

Biography/history: I get that you were a smart child while you were alive. Brilliant even, and while learning to read at three isn't all that difficult (my sister and I could both read basic books before our fourth birthday) being able to read at a highschool level at the age of six is a bit far-fetched. You explained it well enough, so I'll let you keep it if you wish, but I would personally rethink the time frame of it. Again, college at an early age is not unheard of... twelve is a bit young in my opinion but again you explained it so I'll let you keep it if you wish. The problem I have is with your encounter with the group of shinigami. It is against protocol to 'escort' someone through a senkaimon even if the spirit in question seemed to hold promise. All souls who enter the Soul Society after death do so through Soul Burial and I do not believe any shinigami (especially one so low on the totem pole) would risk breaking such a taboo easily. One last thing (and this is just a small thing) it is called being a 'star' pupil, not a 'start' pupil lol. Might want to go back and fix the typo.

Over all your profile is alright other than the stuff mentioned above. Your character does seem a bit perfect though. What I mean by this is he doesn't seem to have any real flaws, and without any real flaws he seems just kinda... drab, you know? Perhaps add something in that makes him defected like.... he has serious issues with people thinking they know something (even if they do) or....he has some huge fear that revolves around something prominant in the Sereitei. By doing this you add depth to your character as well as give it room to expand and grow.

KyrosDevil XIII


Thadius J Elexion

PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 7:48 pm


Ok then... I may be overreacting, but I can't help but feel like your just shoving all my flaws in my face blatantly. I don't mind making adjustments, you're just coming off rather strong about it.

Well first of all I actually already discussed this power with the guild captain, and he didn't have a problem with it. I don't plan on god-modding this power at all, in fact my character will rarely fight at all. I've placed two very major restrictions on my power that I think makes it rather fair. Firstly, I can't affect any living object, and secondly he has to be in contact with his zanpakuto to be able to use his power. In Shikai they would be hard to separate, but he can't affect kido, also you could quite easily punch him in the face but in bankai if you could just knock him off of the snake he would be powerless. If it would help, I could add in that it is harder for him to affect zanpakuto. Also, acceleration is related to vectors, vectors are a measurement of magnitude and direction. If an object is moving I can change the magnitude of the speed it's moving thus making it accelerate.

I will work on my descriptions, you're totally right about that.

The way I thought about my zanpakuto's sealed form, is that it wouldn't really have a sealed from until I discovered it's name. If I'm wrong about that, I will happily have it be in that form right from the get go.

As for the skills and abilities I think your taking it a little to literally, all I meant is that he has a really good memory.

As far as the being escorted into the Sereitei, would it help if I said he was taken in by a captian? I'm sure a captain or a vice-captain would get away with doing so.

Now that I look at it again, he is rather bland, I'll probably take out the part about him taking martial arts, so that he is physically very weak. The fear idea sounds good as well, I'll ponder on that a bit as well.
PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 8:25 pm


You're not over reacting. I am supposed to come off rather strong about issues regarding profiles. It's my job and it's for everyones best interest. If you have already discussed your zanpukatou with the GC then obviously I've been overriden (which isn't always a bad thing). I am meant to find zanpukatous and other abilities that give characters a godmod and put an end to them, that's it. Yes, it would be much appreciated if you added in the bit about it being harder to effect zanpukatou (and if you would play it proportionally I'm sure it'd be appreciated by others). And I wasn't meaning to say acceleration wasn't related to vectors; just that it wasn't one itself and that the way you word it makes it appear as though you're calling it one.

Thank you for working on your descriptions.

The sealed form basically comes to the shinigami from the get-go. It's what makes the weapon different from an asuchi (I may have misspelled that).

If all you meant is that you have a really good memory maybe you could rework the wording a bit. Like I said, I don't mind really good memory or nothing, just the way you word it comes off a bit odd, you know?

If you can get a hold of a captain or vice captain that would like to work that into their story I'd be totally fine with that as long as you understand that it breaks protocol and some how work that into your character.

I'm glad that you'll take into consideration about the flaws of the character. A lot of time that's the hardest part people want to accept... Most people want a 'perfect' character.

KyrosDevil XIII


Thadius J Elexion

PostPosted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:57 pm


Ah I see, well if that's your job then your doing very well.

I'll get my profile reworked tomorrow, and see what I can do about my back story. I might just have him go to the rukongai like normal, but get into the shinigami acadamy really quickly.

I do intend on playing my power proportionally as well, it's going to be very difficult to control, take a very long time to master, and even when I do master it, it's gonna take a lot of energy out me. I'll put that in my description as well.

(edit)

I actually reworked it tonight 'cause I couldn't sleep. I hope that it looks better. I actually suck at physical descriptions, so my wife (who's and artist) is making some art for me that I'll add in as soon as it's done.

I was trying to think of something for him to be afraid of, or for some kind of weakness but I couldn't think of anything. I changed it up so that he is lousy physical fighter, but I wanted to add in a real weakness. I assume you read a lot of profiles, can you think of anything that might make sense?
PostPosted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 2:40 am



First off, I want to say that I'm already tired and irked about work (9 hour shift of cleaning, fixing s**t and dealing with disgruntled guests), so pardon me if I come off as overly angry.

Second; my comments on your idea meant that I liked the idea, but I didn't exactly enjoy the application. I wanted you to evolve the idea into something workable that couldn't be turned into a blatant God-Mod with the flick of the wrist. The idea of having the ability of 'vector manipulation' was good, and something that I've toyed with in the past with a character who was the equivalent of a Captain-class, not someone who was a, and pardon my terminology, a newbie.

I wanted you to make something new and different out of the idea, and to push yourself in your writing ability.

Third: I may be the Guild Captain, but that doesn't mean I'm the end-all power in this guild. Yes, I can use that power, but I don't like to. Instead, I have people who are highly skilled in areas of writing do designated and specific tasks. For example, Kyros. He's my head profile moderator, and a highly skilled writer and thinker. If he says something in this thread, or about any profile for that matter, heed what he says. If there is a dispute about something, PM me, and I'll look into it, or request that one of my GVCs (Guild Vice Captains) looks into it.

I trust each of my mods with responsibilities not only because they are skilled, but because they are dependable, and Kyros is that to a 'T'.



And, finally, I want you to take a look at some other profiles to see what the general limitations are upon powers in this guild. My general rule-of-thumb? If it can control someone's movements directly or indirectly it is NOT allowed. I'm sorry for any confusion that this caused.

Your Guild Captain,
Jake

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Shattered_Fangs

PostPosted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 2:44 am



If you don't want to read everything I just wrote, then read this summary;
  • Listen to Kyros, his judgement overrules my own in this subject.
  • My crew is trusted in each task I give them because I know they are capable in the tasks I give.
  • I want you to improve your profile according to what Kyros said above.
  • And finally, the most important thing... HAVE FUN!!!

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 18, 2011 10:04 am


I'm sorry if it came off like I wasn't listening or was trying to go over his head. I'm actually very glad of Kyros' advice and I've already reworked my profile a bit by using it. I do plan on applying my power rather differently, and I can't use it to control someone's motions at all, I made that quite clear in the description.

I mentioned above that I wanted a true fear/weakness for my character, and I think I just thought of one. He is going to fear his own power. It's something he'll have to get over if I ever want bankai, but still. I never planned on using this power on people, I mostly plan on using it on objects around me. I told you in our conversation before that I would not god mod this, and I would appreciate a little trust on that. I know you don't know me, but still if I say I'm not gonna do it, you could give me the benefit of the doubt.

I really do want to have fun, and I'm glad of the help with my profile, but in all honesty you guys coming of so strongly right when I first join makes that a little hard. I feel like I've committed some crime, and I'm being reprimanded. All I'm trying to do is make a character. I know the power I want is very strong and could easily be modded with, but not only have I said I won't do it, I've placed 3 HUGE restrictions on my power.

I'm sorry if I come off as whiny or self-centered, but I'm bending over backwards to impress you guys I'm just not that good at making profiles.

Thadius J Elexion


KyrosDevil XIII

PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:58 am


Hey, stop worrying so much about coming off one way or another, alright? I'm sure we can all agree that it was all just one giant misunderstanding. Elexion, I hope you can see where we are coming from. In the past we have had people who have had similar abilities as your's and have abused them after a long history of what one would call appropreit behavior. As such we are a little gun-shy to let you have powers similiar. Perhaps we can keep the same idea, but reword them in a manner so they don't appear as something so.... rough? Would you agree to that? Talk to me about how you want to play them and then we can work on rewording them together so that there aren't any issues. With any luck we can make it so you don't have as big of restrictions on them, okay?

Being afraid of one's power is a good weakness. We should elaborate on that. Why is he afraid of his own power? Has he hurt someone close to him because of it? Does he find that it has no logical explanation? The deeper we delve into the fear, the better off the character will be.

Next I want you to go back over your physical description again. I appreciate the picture your wife has provided as it give something to look at. We can see you how you see yourself. This being said we still need more hard facts. How tall is your character? How much do they weigh? Does he have any scars, or a particularly unique shade to his iris? Stuff like this will give people something to work with the first time the meet you that way they don't automatically assume that you're shorter or taller than they are. Understand? Remember the more details, the more FLUFF you add here, the better. If it makes it easier you could remove that little section above your physical description and put the facts it contains into the description itself. If you do that you can elaborate a little more on them and give us a better idea of what your character looks like.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:31 am


I guess that makes sense. Mostly I just want to be able to make objects around me move. One of the things I thought of doing later on is having him carry a bunch of long needles with him and attacking with those. Pretty much I want him to be a "use your surroundings" kind of fighter, he'll work with whatever rocks or stuff he can find. As he masters his power, I'll have him be able to use more stuff, like air and water.

As far as fearing his power, am I able to put that description in right now? He doesn't even have the power yet. I like the idea of him accidentally hurting someone with it that's kinda what I was thinking as long as whoever I was rping with agreed.

I have to go to work right now, but when I get home, I'll fix up my physical, description again and try to add more "fluff" to it. What do you think of the history edit I made?

Also, thank you for your help I really do appreciate it.


(Edit)

Got home from work, edited the physical description, I hope it's better this time. I also put up a bit of a story as to why Thadius fears his power. He fears losing control of it. I imagine that controlling the air well enough to make it sharp would be very difficult, so if he hurts someone while doing so it will make him scared to fight at full strength for fear of hurting someone.

Thadius J Elexion


KyrosDevil XIII

PostPosted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 4:58 am


Accepted.
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