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Posted: Sun Oct 09, 2011 5:35 am
 ғeel free to call me. . . Mike Lycanheart
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . . Male (hard to see if I'm in wolf form)
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. . 17
The υniverse welcomed me on. . . Nov. 12
α lot of people say I'm. . . A foolish risk taker, lets just say that it can get me in trouble or turn me into a legend. To explain, I make crazy ideas to do things(like fight an entire clan of Vampires.) or doing things the other way around( like being said to stay off a battle, when I completely showed up and fight for my life.). Aside from that I would be dared to wrestle with the great warriors in our village, but sometimes I win sometimes I don't. So all in all, I don't do things very simple, but go extreme, just to make excitement to my life. And whatever your thinking I'm not trying to commit suicide.
can you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . . Born from a powerful werewolf clan named the "Lycan Hearts". Live in a village at Canada, his family and himself hide their wolf identities from humans and never harms them. Money never mean much for his family so were just middle class. Went to school, but got dropped out at sophomore year due to bad grades and poor attendance. The clan are skillful hunters especially him. Hunting by night and sell their game at day. him and his friends are very well when it comes to hunting, like say killing 10 wild pigs and 5 mooses in one night. My parents are worried of my sake cause sometimes he come home bleeding at night and seen me fighting vampires by myself. His parents saw his strength and decided teach him how to use a sword and he is perfect with it. Since vampires and werewolves are terrible enemies, one night while he was asleep he didn't notice that a vampire vs. werewolf happened in the village. He woke up seeing outside that all of his clan members are dead, his first guess of the killers are the vampires cause dead bodies of them are everywhere. Out of anger he himself invaded the nearest vampire clan,The Bloodsmears. But the Bloodsmears were too powerful for him to handle alone so he was knocked out and he woke up at his village since the vampires wanted him to be tormented by his dead companions. He set aside his past, gathered all he needed, sell what remains from the village, buried the dead bodies and went away for when he stays there, he is reminded that when he is weak and did not save his people. After much wandering (also not knowing where he is), he came across Fuyu Academy Forest(even know he wasn't knowing where he is). He sensed there are vampires nearby and stalked one of them and followed him to the school then he knew he was in Fuyu Academy and joined there to be trained to be a stronger person. vampire knowabouts of the Bloodsmear and the followed vampire courtesy of my friend vladmir_vod
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . . Werewolf form: Powerful jaws, quickness and as one of the Lycanhearts a power to turn into a shadow form. Human: Super strength and master swordsman. Both: a great sense of smell. and after morphing his clothes returns still at his body.
I aםore. . . ○ Meat, the only thing in my diet. ○ Working out, exercise 5 times a day. ○Hunting, just a habit ○Cooking, I'm wolf but I won't eat raw.
єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . . ○ vampires, those cold-hearted freaks killed my family and friends ○ vegetables, its a wolf thing ○ fleas, ALWAYS AT MY FUR AND HAIR!!!!
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . . House: Eirannes Dorm: Feldgrau Homeroom: Weaponry and Magics
чou see, I'm controlled by . . . kihmrock
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:06 pm
Please go into more detail with your personality and I'll go and look over it straight away.
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 12:36 am
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Posted: Fri Oct 14, 2011 9:10 pm
Ahh this is hard to explain but try putting more of what your character's like into the personality. Like what he's like angry and what do other people think of him besides being foolish and a risk taker.
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Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 5:51 am
iNishino Inferni Ahh this is hard to explain but try putting more of what your character's like into the personality. Like what he's like angry and what do other people think of him besides being foolish and a risk taker. Done
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 4:53 am
I know you're going to hate me for saying this, but you still need to add more to the personality. You don't get a sense for who your character is reading it, and also it's 3 sentences -- the minimum is 4.
Go into more about what Nishino asked for, please! Here's some starters:
Foolish -- does he get bad grades in school? Does he goof off a lot? Make jokes? Risk Taker -- Is he a dare me and I'll do it guy? Does he do crazy things jut for the sake of them? Does he make decisions on the whim?
Quote me when you're done c:
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 2:25 am
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 12:51 pm
That looks 20 times better (: He's been sorted into the Eirannes house!
He's been put on the to-be-dormed list.
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Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 1:23 pm
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Eirannes House, Feldgrau Dorm
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 7:12 am
██████████MIKE█LYCANHEART██████████ Not all werewolves are bad.... or  ....So I wont bite
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Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 8:04 am
 ғeel free to call me. . . Jack Morsel
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . . Male
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. . 17
The υniverse welcomed me on. . . April 2
α lot of people say I'm. . . A helpful, fun loving guy. I like hanging out with friends and spend time with my family. Barely people can see me in a bad mood and I might be the first werewolf without a temper. I also help out the ones who are in need, like helping an old woman cross the street or scare off vampires off the neighborhood. I just feel so happy doing all of this, cause I want to share smiles. On the down side he can argue with his copies cause the copies are like diff. individuals.
can you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . . In a rich werewolf family in Australia. My parents took care of me very well and always there in the time of needs when I was young so nothing bad happens to me. When I was 6 I discovered my powers when I turned to a wolf and duplicated to 7 bodies(weirdly) a vampire broke into our house to try and kill us, by the time I knew my powers I helped my parents kill the devil by ripping it with all the teeth and claws of my duplicates. Then when my parents got word from the clan about a Academy for the gifted I was sent to Fuyu to train and make my powers better.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . . I'm a werewolf, so I turn into a wolf that runs swiftly and equipped with powerful jaws and sharp claws. Also can Duplicate myself in 3 copies.
I aםore. . . ○ Music ○ Helping others ○ Anything fun ○ Sweets like cake and candy
єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . . ○ Sorrow of others ○ Vampires
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . . House: Catian Dorm: Zaffre Homeroom: Art / Music, or Magics and Weaponry
чou see, I'm controlled by . . . kihmrock
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Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2011 11:20 pm
Sorry for such a long wait!
Please expand on his personality - you have a good start, but right now he feels rather shallow and flimsy. He is a werewolf, so does he ever get angry? What is he like when he's frustrated, sad, etc.?
History: Can you elaborate? If he grew up in a family of werewolves, how did he only discover his own abilities when he was 6? Or, are you referring to his ability to duplicate himself? Also, how exactly did he and his parents kill the Devil?
As for his likes / dislikes, is that it? Surely he has, say, a favorite food or color? Or, a least favorite food/color?
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Rukia Arisawa Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jan 01, 2012 10:52 pm
I can't think of a reason why he would have a bad mood like Mike does but I already edited it.
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