Okay I am back...Once again!

[iluvwritin]

For those that have been members for awhile may remember me. I have tried coming back on this site once or twice already, however failing miserably, but here I try again. I have written a wide variety of new pieces, sadly (seeing as how they are a bit on the dark and depressing side), ones that are more personal. I have almost purely given up on hope poems, because they always seem to end up with the worst endings. In fact, sadly over this past month, I have nearly given up on poetry all together, but I hope that having an audience will help me regain my "mojo." So sorry if I seem to struggle coming back, sweatdrop but I hope to post my poetry, and comment on others'. Well... Here I go! 4laugh  

[iluvwritin]

My Shot

Your words crash into me
Like a shot to the heart
Check my vitals
I think I'm falling apart

At night I silently cry
Streams of broken tears
There is no more time to hide
From these vengeful fears

Take a shot at me now
Throw at me your hurtful stares
Your eyes burn through me
With your icy glares

I am numb to this pain
You can't hurt me anymore
Your shots no longer send me
Falling, dying to the floor

The last tear has been shed
And as I look through blurry eyes
I see you standing there
Just hoping that I will die

And as my knees buckle
And I fall to the ground
I know that this bullet
Has won me this round  

[Illiandra]

Wow, nice imagery. I like the first two stanza's a lot. Though that second line of the first stanza now has a Bon Jovi song stuck in my head... like I said on the other poem of yours I commented on it holds a certain lyrical quality... ever think of writing lyrics and seeing if you can make some money off them?