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Vanna1994

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:02 pm


Dont need help on this first one really, I plan on fixing the hands eventually, the most I think I need help with are the feet, but if you see something else thats wrong, let me know ^^
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-1393.jpg

My horrible rough
Never drawn a desk/chair before I think the whole body is off..
Got the idea from here A picture/ base on DA
My character is such a slacker lol
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-2339.jpg

Update:
http://i539.photobucket.com/albums/ff351/Shadow-37/My Drawings/LastScan-700.jpg

Desks/chairs should be a bit better now.. I think?The sleeping guy's desk and head dont look right still..
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 7:42 pm


The first thing I notice with the chairs/ desk is that none of the peices match up with each other. For some, the view is full on sideways while for others the viewpoint is coming from higher up. Since the bodys are a sidevew, I suggest fixing the angles of the furniture to match them.

Mabye you could spend some time doodleing desk chairs, so you are comfortable enough to draw them with your characters.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 7:52 pm


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The first thing I notice with the chairs/ desk is that none of the peices match up with each other. For some, the view is full on sideways while for others the viewpoint is coming from higher up. Since the bodys are a sidevew, I suggest fixing the angles of the furniture to match them.

Mabye you could spend some time doodleing desk chairs, so you are comfortable enough to draw them with your characters.


I noticed that, I didnt have a ruler with me while I was sketching out the lines with so they are all wacky xd
Got my ruler now so it should be fixed.. eventually ^^;

I planed on finding some desks/chairs on da. The only time I could do it is at school otherwise, unfortunatley I only get the first two hours to draw crying
PostPosted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:04 pm


Ah thats right, school. The ultimate inspiration killer. haha

well, good luck. ^^

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:07 pm


Thanks ^^
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