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General Information
Name: Khryses
Age: 22
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 172 lbs
Likes: Action figures, Pizza, Romance novels, Costumes, and Movie soundtracks
Dislikes: Artichokes, Snow, Bright lights, and Comedies
Habits: Letting go of whatever he's holding without realizing it and saying sound effects to his own actions.
Personality:
Before he was even a Gijinka, Khryses was obsessed with the idea of becoming a super hero. Thanks to having a trainer who was a comic book nerd, the Lucario developed a strong set of principles (most of which were based off of the idealized heros his trainer was so obsessed with). Since gaining his more humanoid form he goes about trying to emulate the heroes his ex-trainer taught him about.
Traits
Positive
Passionate- Khryses has a very strong sense of justice which motivates most of his actions. He's the type who will easily argue a subject into the ground if it involves something he firmly believes in.
Protective- This Lucario will take a bullet for anyone and he'll take even more for someone he cares about. If he sees someone that he considers to be in danger he'll jump in to the rescue!
Selfless- When comparing his own situation to that of others, Khryses could care less about his own well being. He'll gladly give away food or lend a helping hand to others at his own risk.
Neutral
Serious- With his often comical behavior, people may think that he's simply joking around. But, this Gijinka is very resolute about what he does and that is fight crime!
Loyal- This Lucario would rather die than betray a friend. But, he's faithful to the point of being easily led astray by someone he trusts.
Disorganized- Khryses loses things very easily, especially due to a habit of just leaving things around. Once something leaves his hands it ceases to exist for him until he needs it again.
Negative
Delusional- Long story short, Khryses thinks he's a super hero and anyone he catches doing anything even remotely bad must be a super villain! He goes about saving the day, but in actuality causes more trouble than there was originally.
Gullible- This Lucario will believe anything anyone says. This often leads him to befriending people who intend to cause him harm, fall into traps, help the "villain."
Unreliable- He's almost always late and is easily tricked into helping the enemy. The only thing you can depend on Khryses for is to make a mess of things.
Strengths:
Courageous- Due to his foolish beliefs, the Lucario won't let even his own fears stop him from trying to help others.
Weaknesses:
Vulnerable- This Gijinka may pack a punch, but when it comes to defenses he's clueless. 99% of the time his attacks will leave himself wide open. When it comes to verbal beatings he's even worse. If someone were to dare point out what a poor super hero he'd be/is the Lucario would be crushed.
Easily startled- Often lost in his own fantasy world where he's fighting crime, it's quite easy to sneak up on him.

I'll try to help as best I can.
Personality: Cut down on traits please! 2 Positive, 2 Negative, 1 neutral. You've got a bit of over kill going on here with 3 each.
That said, traits should be able to be applied to various situations and in everyday events, not just the one. You want them to be able to apply all the time, and give examples of when they might not.

passionate- Also shows the trait of being stubborn
protective-"This Lucario will take a bullet for anyone" <- Small word change probably needed, unless he is willing to take a bullet for murders, criminals, ect. Simple as 'Almost anyone'. If he thinks someone is in danger but is not how will he reply after finding out?
Selfless- To go with protective, give a bit more here please. Like are there situations or people to whom this does not apply? Protective and selfless can go into one trait

Serious- This trait is very conflicting with his overall character. When you want him to be serious it can be done casually in RP, but the trait here is only showing me one particular instance and application. I'd scrap this trait.
Loyal-is a trait that can fit into what you have in protective, since the one can be implied within the other. As far as neutral traits this is the strongest however, so if you can elaborate on it that would be better.
Disorganized- How is this a neutral trait? What does he benefit from this?
^ As stands the only trait that really fits into here is loyal

Delusional- How does this fit into what he's told and what he sees? With everyday activities?
Gullible- Can fit into delusional
Unreliable- this can have disorganized worked into it.


Overall, make the traits apply to a broad spectrum of instances, rather than isolated ones.
Strengths/weaknesses: Courageous is coming off like a trait in here, and I'd ad other things like, is he a good dancer, does he know anything special, does he have a talent that helps him? in weaknesses, this thing comes off as a one scenario application. I'd suggest looking at some of the approved quests to get a better grasp on this.


History: You need to set up a why he became human reason. Did he want to become the hero his trainer idolized? In the dream, Musharna offers a clear option to obtain that goal, but doesn't outright state it. The after should say what happened to the relationship with his trainer. You need a bit more depth in here and again, take a look at some of the approved quests