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 Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 6:53 pm
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Art by: Chi Sohma ( self )
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 8:10 pm
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-AMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM
[ Baby Photo ] 
Name: Melody Sophia Fortesque
Nicknames: Melly
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Faction: Undead
Race: Patchwork
Natural Ability: Two Possible Abilities that I may need help deciding which one to make her natural ability...
1st Choice ) Vocal Manipulation, her voice can change tone, tune, and frequency to match a certain pitch that was once heard or made up. This can also hold different 'voices' so to say and can mimic noises she hears.
+ I have a strong like over the Vocal Manipulation over the Re-animation ability but want to know what others think. Or if the vocal manipulation can be a variation of her 'FEAR' Ability, ie if she 'eats' her fear shadow then her voice can be tampered with so I'm still juggling ideas.
2nd Choice ) Re-animate anything that is attached to her. For example, a wing will re-animate if attached to her in the proper way. Along with tails, or switching 'feet'. It will take time to get used to and sometimes that object she is attaching may or may not cooperate at first but will tame over time.
Personality: ( I am going to rp her as a growing character, some of her personality may change with exp etc. This is just a basic start / Brainstorm of how I see her / )
She is quite decent to say the least. Melody is proper as proper can be. Learning from a very young age how to be humble and learn from her mistakes. Except, she has a tendency to be indecisive and may be impulsive with her actions which makes for a lot of mistakes on her part. Overall, she is a bright girl and always tries her best at things and only wants to make her family proud of her. Likewise, she is feminine but can easily go sparring with the boys.
Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? "Mother and father, though gentle undead believed that I need to experience new things and hopefully find my place among the dead. They enrolled me as soon as I came of age to help me carve my own path.." - Melly
FEAR Ability: Can manifest her fear in a black shadow ie turn in to different shapes which her favorite shape is a sword to envoke sound pulses or silences. Silences will amplify what others will fear the most of and sound pulses is to maneuver without another hearing your steps.
Although I would like her fear to manifest as a dagger first and later as she learns to use it and manipulate it, it will take on various shapes.
Weakness of Fear: When SHE is scared, her black shadow of fear will dissipate or when her attention is captured by something else. For example, if someone comes up behind her- her fear ability will disappear meaning she has to stay concentrated to make it manifest as it should be.
Physical Description: Her body is 'intact' more than she can say for her brother as he is mostly skeleton but her 'parts' are sturdy yet look delicate and are able to be sown together. Although some parts remain just bone for the lack of that body part being found. ( Her mother only wants the best parts for her daughter and would let her go without than to put something that would rot the rest of her away ). Her hair is curlly and untamable for the most part, having a hard time getting it to straighten like the normal dead hair. Her eyes are the only part of her that remains 'fragile' and anything can cause them to 'pop out', mostly her right eye. Along with her, is a family of worms that live in her body and try to keep her body together along with helpful advice.
Eye Colour: Black ( left ) and one milky white ( Right )
Hair Colour/Style: Deep blue/purple
Skin Colour: Pale blue
Clothing Style/Colours: Assortment of Loli dresses but has a simple dress in mind.
Extra:
+Part of her chest area is missing ( Skin&Guts ) and shows her rib section
+ Doesn't have a left leg which is in place a bone that fit her size.
+ Currently her teeth are.. jaws because they were a complete set and they were white .3.;..
References: (If you have art or design sketches for your character, include them here!) --
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 8:23 pm
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- Extra Info
+ Honorable thoughts,
Although she is scared of entering a school that isn't in the underworld. She finds herself becoming more excited with the chance of meeting new ghouls.
+ Wants in a partner/friend,
Understanding, patience and determination
+ Talents,
Piano, Violin, Singing, swordsmanship and dancing
+ Hardships,
Running, acrobatics, and tag
+ Likes,
Music, Art ( Can't Draw ), sparring, dancing and singing, along with her family and outdoors. Has taken a liking for old fashion wear and loves stuffed animals.
+ Dislikes,
Bats, Puppets, hard mazes, stairs, running, rotting, clowns, color red, knots and crosswords
+ Sins,
Envy of the 'cool kids'
+ Virtues,
Innocence, Constantia, Courage, and Temperance
+ Family Life,
Father - Sir Fortesque is a noble warrior and swordsmen. Along with various talents wielding other weaponry he excels in hammers and swords above all else. In his own right, a skeleton with a massive brave soul he has made his home in the afterlife with his wife.
Mother - Emily Fortesque is a dotting corpse that believes in finding everlasting happiness but isn't afraid to force the good down your throat and if you mess with her and her family- you will face the dire consequences of a VERY angry mother.
Brother - Odin Fortesque, named after a great hero in history and believes himself to have his path already chosen for him. Although, his teeth are a little messed up, he is strong and dependable older brother that encourages and writes to his sister often.
+ History,
It all started when her undead mother and father wanted children. They loved each other very much [ censored love ew gross here ] and then they decided that children would be best. But how would one make a child if you are undead? Edit: Off to the pumpkin patch they went. Offering their fears to bring forth a skeleton boy that they called Odin.
They wanted another. One to accompany their skeleton son and thus birthed Melody. Unlike her brother, she was a patchwork. Their baby girl, beautifully undead.. Like her mother. Surely that she would follow in her mother's footsteps or so they all thought. End of edit .Even her eyes popped out! And a family of worms would move in! Her musical talents were superb as she sung beautiful, along with learning to play the piano and violin. But she also had a thing for swords. Which made her father proud but even then something was missing. Although she excelled in these arts at an early age, you could see it in her that she wanted something more with meaning. At the age of schooling begun, her brother was sent to a boarding school for 'heros' or so her father calls it and she was sent back to Halloween town where she was 'born' to attend school there.
+ Pets ( User Name: Chi Sohma - Melody Pets are in Box 1 )
Edit: Would like to find her a dinosaur mini pet!
Along with a pet Skeleton dinosaur that in way too miniature for its big head. ( Miniature t rex )
+ Credits
TiH - The creatures
NBC - Tim Burton
Gothic picture frame - [ xxx ]
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 8:24 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 8:30 pm
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-Work In Progress
+ Basically all the critics that are being considered and revision notes
+ Points of Interest
Natural Ability ) I have two possible choices of a natural ability but I think the 2nd choice can become her fear ability's next level? Or however I can explain it and from what I understood about it. Can the second choice be a variation of my chosen fear? What do you think?
Fear ) Do you think the fear is a good one ._.;... Maybe have it turn in to a sword later ? Or .. But its not really a sword, its darkness like a black shadow that will resemble a sword and do you think its a good fear?
Hair ) Her hair is going to be a solid color I think, and am kinda wishy washy over what color. Im thinking a dead sea green sorta teal? Or Royal Purple?
Family ) Is this ok? Or should I tweak it to go further than the obvious OxO?
Eyes ) Yes, she has two eyes but they.. just fall out sometimes. She is very frank about it and sometimes a little embaressed but she tries to play it off like it doesn't embaress the snot out of her o3o.
Worms ) She has a family of worms that live in her body and fixes things that sometimes don't work or give her advice when she's lost.
Dinosaur ) Her pet dinosaur. Yes, well her father found him in a very funny place and when well.. He followed him home around the time their daughter was 'born'. He seemed to act more like a dog than a dinosaur and sometimes he munches on your limbs but HEY! What can we say- he loves bones ;D! - Is this allowed?
Art? ) Yes art. There will be more art and art of her 'now' self.. I just had a lot of fun with her baby picture >3<; But more art should be coming up soon! Maybe I might even give away art... >3>.. You never know!
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 9:54 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 9:58 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:09 pm
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