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 Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 3:14 pm
 ғeel free to call me. . .
Drake Bloodsmear.
υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
Male.
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
17 years
The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
Nov.11
α lot of people say I'm. . . A troublemaker, 'cause he tends to do pranks and other mischief that can go out of control. I'm quite a hothead so please try to stay on my nerves. But don't think he's that bad, he can be polite and gentle since he's born English.
can you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . .
As a rich delinquent kid who gets what he wants and his parents don't care that much. He never felt much love from them since they were too busy from their jobs. His only companion is his butler, Edward. Just a few years ago, his parents died in a car accident but he didn't grieved much. He was taken in by his uncle since then but he was too strict to him and made him feel worse than when he was with his parents.
Before he went to this school, he had trouble with his former one. Skipping classes, having fights and even bringing illegal firearms to campus which he got expelled for that. His uncle was furious and couldn't think of a punishment for him. Once he found out of this academy, he decided to send him here and hope he'll learn to control himself and be more responsible of his actions.
αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
He's half-vampire (his father and the mentioned uncle are vampires while his mother is an ordinary human), so he has enhanced speed and strength. He can also turn to mist and read minds at will, but those abilities are nullified when he's exposed to sunlight. Asides from that, he's a good swordsman and can also handle firearms well.
I aםore. . .
○ money
○ cool stuff
○ getting what he wanted
○ doing mischief
○ tea
○ cats
○ weapons
єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . .
○ filthiness
○ being tested of his patience
○ people thinking they're better than him
○ sunlight
○ dogs
○ his family
мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: Wyvern.
Dorm: Dorm Room , ecru dorm
Homeroom: magic and weaponry
чou see, I'm controlled by . . . Vladimire_Vlod.
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 11:47 am
can you please choose a homeroom and add to his personality, and also explain his elemental abilities? :V
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Posted: Fri Sep 02, 2011 11:51 am
Masten December can you please choose a homeroom and add to his personality, and also explain his elemental abilities? :V better? and also due to picture problems I changed a few things, hope you don't mind?
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Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2011 1:00 pm
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- ғυчυ αcαםємч -
cяєω
Unapproved, here's why:
○ His personality is much too short, and doesn't really tell me anything about him. It needs to be expanded, and elaboration would be appreciated-
- Why do people think he's emo? Is it just because he wears dark clothing, or for some other reason? The bit about watching a lot of vampire movies making him look emo confuses me - it would be like classifying all Twilight fangirls as goth, when they're not. Also, how do people think he's emo when you say he is happy-go-lucky? If he's usually in good moods, then why does it look like he's always in a bad one?
- Tell me more! There's hardly anything here to go on, I can't really tell wht kind of person he is at all. Start with the basics, (what Drake is like when he's happy, sad, angry, etc.) and go from there. Once you start to develop a deeper character, it gets easier to write about them, trust me.
○ History- You need to expand, and really dig deep. Try thinking about it as cause and effect, it might help with his personality too. --
- When ____ happened, Drake felt/did _______.
Here are a few questions to get you going:
- What kind of relationship did he have with his parents? Did they give him everything he ever wanted because they loved him and wanted to make him happy, or just to keep him out of their hair? Obviously they didn't pay much attention to him, did that affect who he is today?
- By "salary" do you mean an allowance from his parents/guardian, or did he get a job?
- Talk about his childhood! What was his early schooling like? Did he have any friends, or was he always cold and money-obsessed? Does he have any siblings or pets? What did he do with himself during his free time, if he had no friends and his parents ignored him?
- Why does he get the money, but not the company? And why does he have to wait 15 years? Why can't he live alone, minus the butler?
- Why did he come to Fuyu Academy? Does he want to hone his skills, or just needs a place to live? Minor detail, but what newspaper was he reading? Fuyu is pretty hidden from the outside world xD
○ His powers- he has way to many. If you could, please pick say, two of those you have listed.
- Being good with weapons would be a fine choice, but be realistic, and remember you'll need to incorporate how he got so good in his history.
- How is he vampire-like, but not a vampire? If he's super strong, super fast, and turns into mist, but doesn't suck blood, how is he 'vampire-ish' at all?
- Try to explain his powers in detail, and remember to explain where he got them (or whether he was born with them, and from whom/which side of the family or however/whatever he inherited them), and that no power is unlimited. As we like to say, "Fuyu is a school for the magically gifted, not God."
If you need any help, feel free to ask. We don't bite! (usually. . .) : D
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Rukia Arisawa Vice Captain
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Rukia Arisawa Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:25 pm
vladmir_vod If there's anything else just say so... I already edited it.... HAPPY!!!! I swear this might be the most number of changes that I have to do in the history of character changing. so pissed of.▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀
- ғυчυ αcαםємч -
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Thank you. Approved, sorted to Wyvern. Please be patient for a dorm assignment.
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Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 8:18 pm
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cяєω Drake now has a dorm!
Wyvern House, Ecru Dorm
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Rukia Arisawa Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2011 7:10 pm
vladmir_vod oh by the way, Drake's butler and servants are accompanying him at the game, are they suppose to have character info too? Cause they sometimes go out the town without him. ▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀▄▄▀
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Hmm, that's a delicate matter. If they are basic, space-filling servants who do Drake's bidding (like say, clean his room) and maybe say a few things here and there, no, not unless you want to. If they do, however, do things without him and have their own motivations and personalities, then yes, they need their own character info. (They would technically be their own characters, not just in the background)
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Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:29 pm
(sub-character/s)  Edward DastAge: 45 Race: Vampire Occupation: Drake's Butler Specialty: Serving, being in time, cooking, cleaning, alchemy, and hand to hand or firearm fighting. Powers: Enhanced speed and strength.
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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2011 4:58 am
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