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 Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 4:28 am
LEAH BROOKS||GOLDENROD||CROSS-HAIRS||SNIPER RIFLE 
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 11:14 pm
YOUNG GIRL
Name: Leah Brooks
Colour: Her eye colour is Goldenrod
Age: 17
Nationality: Canadian
Home/Financial Status: Lower-Middle Class
School: Teufel Town High School
Personality: Leah believes in following your dreams no matter the costs. Her dream is that one day her parent’s footage of the perfect storm they died chasing will be found and the world will finally acknowledge their worth and marvel at what they captured! If you dream of obtaining something close to your heart Leah will always be willing to help you in your goal.
What’s her goal besides fulfilling her parents dream? She doesn’t actually know…
When it comes to her future Leah is a little lost, she has low self-esteem and confidence thus why she will always put the goals of others before her own, she's a bit of a mother-hen in that way. If everyone else is happy then Leah thinks maybe she can be too!
When she isn't running around trying to keep everyone together Leah likes to find some solitude at the Libraries and Museums, old things fascinate or and she finds something very comforting in the relics of ages past...
If she could she'd devote her whole life to them but her aunt thinks that's silly so instead Leah studies to be the next best thing - a history teacher.
Appearance: Leah entire appearance can be described as average; she is one of those people that can seamlessly blend into a crowd at a moment’s notice.
She’s about 5”5 and is neither skinny nor pudgy. She does not have the build of an athlete and is more of a bookworm, even having the poor eyesight that requires glasses as per the stereo type. Her black hair is short, kept above her chin in length with no real styling.
Clothing wise she goes for comfort over style and can often be seen in tee-shirts, shorts and flip-flops. If the weather is near artic she may be found adding a hoodie to this ensemble.
History: For the first half of her life Leah had no set home, she lived on the road with her parents who were storm chases. It was a happy if simple life that was all ruined when she was seven. Her parents had gotten wind of a ‘perfect storm’ forming near where the family currently was and raced out to capture it on film. The night ended with both her parents dead thanks to the storm and all their possessions, including their converted footage, lost to it as well. When Leah was identified during the post-storm clean-up she was sent to live with her only living relative; her Aunt Abigail who had always disliked her sister and became only more scornful when she learned how they died, constantly telling Leah how worthless her parents had been.
Family:
Paternal Grandparents (Deceased)
Leah’s Paternal Grandparents had her father late in life and never had any children other than him. Her Grandmother died when she was four and her Grandfather followed two years later, both dying of old age.
Maternal Grandparents (Deceased)
Leah’s Maternal Grandparents had only two children, Leah’s mother and her aunt. They both unfortunately died in a car crash when the siblings where in their teens. Leah has only stories and a few old photos of them.
Mother (Deceased)
U/C
Father (Deceased)
U/C
Aunt (Living)
U/C
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 11:29 pm
PUELLA MAGI
Language: French
Desires: To find the lost and acknowledge the forgotten!
Emblem: The crosshairs from a snipers scope
Weapon: Sniper Rifle
Type of Magic: Tactical Magic, Leah can scan her opponents to tell you all about them so you can best plan how to strike!
Outfit:Something based on world-war era military uniforms, prefarably the type that involved peaked caps. It’d also be nice if it had storm motifs worked into it.
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 11:38 pm
WITCH FORM:
Name: Sturm der Verlorenen
Type: Storm Witch
Description: ( A short basic description of the witch and how her 'Type' affects her. )
Nature: Lost
Appearance: ( What is the witch's design? What mediums/materials/style is she made up of? )
Barrier/Maze: ( The world your witch surrounds herself with. How is it set up? Themed? )
Location: ( Where in Teufel Town has your witch settled herself? How has she affected the area/it's people?)
Attack(s): ( How does she battle? What is her offense? Defense? )
Grief Seed: ( What emblem/themes are displayed within the grief seed of this witch? )
MINION #1 FORM:
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Duty: ( What specific task does this minion preform for the witch? Ex: Antony = 'Landscaping' )
Description: ( A short, basic description of the purpose/duty of this minion )
Appearance: ( what does this minion look like? Keep in mind similar themes and mediums to the witch it serves! )
Attack(s): ( How does the minion attack? )
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 10:00 pm
HI ROSIE. DOIN' SUM CRIT.
i think the only big problem is that theres not really ... a ton to go off of
like so far shes
- believes in chasing her dreams
- low self esteem
- mother hen type
- likes museums
- wants to be a history teacher
like ... that could literally be ANYBODY. theres gotta be some things that are unique to her! i suggest concretely laying down some traits like:
is she generally a happy person? sad person?
what kind of things make a person not like her?
what kind of things attract a person to her?
what would kyubey find attractive/vunerable in her?
why isnt she a sexy ditzy amnesia demon
hobbies of course help, but they dont really give a clear picture of a person
like you could easily be the nicest person in the world and love museums
or the most evil dastardly riley villian in the world and love museums
might want to elaborate on what "find the lost and acknowledge the forgotten" means. cause like, that could go a thousand different ways (unless you want something vague to give kyubey room to manipulate).
uhm ... anything else/clarifications just IM me gurly * u *
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