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DeadAssassin1

PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 10:41 am


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ғeel free to call me. . .
Joric Cleris

υnless you're blind, you should see that I'm. . .
male
чou think I'm what age? No, I'm. .
18

The υniverse welcomed me on. . .
September 26

α lot of people say I'm. . .
Strange and curious,obsessed with his cat,Jack, and that he's kinda hard to figure out.no one seems to bother getting to know him at all before judging him.And they seem to think he's a weirdo because he has bandages over his eyes.

can you blame me for what I am now? After all, I grew up. . .
Parents died soon after his birth, he has been wandering the streets ever since, he discovered his powers when he was 6 and has been using them to help him survive.when he was 8 he found an injured cat in the street,he took it with him and cared for it,they have been friends since then.he continually sneaks his way into libraries and schools so he can learn.When he found out about this place he came here to see if he could get in and learn everything he wanted to know. he has been blind since his birth.

αbilities? Yeah, I have . . .
Can control gravity and the elements,has incredible speed and hearing,his speed is slowed and his hearing is dimmed when he uses his powers over the elements too often or when he runs for a long period of time.because he is blind, he sees using body heat or the natural energy surrounding people.
I aםore. . .
○ Cats
○Sneaking around
○Listening to music
○Learning about things


єvery time one of these come into my life, things just go downhill . . .
○Being caught sneaking around
○An injured cat
○Being called a freak


мy House, Dorm, and Homeroom are. . .
House: Burnar
Dorm: Thistle
Homeroom: World studies


чou see, I'm controlled by . . .
Deadassassin1
PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 1:02 pm


your character almost checks out; however, i'm having a few issues with the 'powers' section. it's alright for a character to have multiple abilities; however, full control over gravity and all elements as well as heightened physical capability is edging towards god-mod status. please think of ways to restrict his abilities; for example, perhaps he can only hold control over an element for so long, or perhaps his physical abilities get drained the harder he pushes himself.

thank you!

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DeadAssassin1

PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 1:14 pm


Masten December
your character almost checks out; however, i'm having a few issues with the 'powers' section. it's alright for a character to have multiple abilities; however, full control over gravity and all elements as well as heightened physical capability is edging towards god-mod status. please think of ways to restrict his abilities; for example, perhaps he can only hold control over an element for so long, or perhaps his physical abilities get drained the harder he pushes himself.

thank you!

K i edited it just tell me if there's anything else.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 1:21 pm


DeadAssassin1
looks good! approved, and sorted into burnar house, thistle dorm!

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