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Keitchi Mori

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Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:18 pm

Name: Keitchi Mori
Pic: User Image

Age: 18

Gender: male

Birthday: febuary 2

Relationship: none yet

squad: 12

rank:requesting captain

personality: nice and crazy

history: you don't wanna know.

Sealed Zanpaktou: [zanpaktou]

Zanpaktou`s name: muzuka

Zanpaktou`s spirit: [spirit]

Kido

Captains can use 32 All levels Maximum through low.
♦They can only use the same low level spell 12 times in a fight.
♦They can only use the same medium level spell 10 times in a fight.
♦They can only use the same high level spell 8 times in a fight.
♦They can only use the same maximum level spell 6 times in a fight.

Hado:
♦Shimoku (Purple Tree)
♦Tsuchikamu / Mizukiba (Earth Bite / Water Fang)
♦Tenran (Orchid Sky)
♦Hyoga Seiran (Glacier Vapor Storm)

Bakudo:
Hanaiwa (Crawling Rope)
Enkosen (Arc Shield)
Sajo Sabaku (Locking Bondage Strips)
Danku (Splitting Void)

Healing Kido: Kaikaku (Reformation)

Shikai

Pic of Shikai Weapon: [shikai]

Shikai name: muzak

Shikai Release command: freeze to the core muzu"

Shikai Attack one: ice cut: if the blade cuts you ice starts to form over that part of the body. (can only use 3 times)

Shikai Attack two: peircing water: slices water and makes water spray toward you freezing the water making then turn into big needles flying at you. (depends on amount of water splashed)

Shikai Attack three:N/A

Bankai

Pic of Bankai Weapon: [bankai]

Bankai name: muzak titega

Bankai Release command: Ban...kai"

Bankai Attack one: sends a gale force blast of ice wind at the opponent sending them back a few feet if it hits. (can be avoided)

Bankai Attack two: creates an ice barrier blocking off enemy attacks.

Inner world: [my world]

Theme song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T8dyxGiBx3g&feature=player_detailpage

Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:51 pm

Hello I'm Krono (Voltarion in RP) And ill be your judge today. Alright it seems fine just a few things you need to fix.

First off Your first shikai. How do you stop if from freezing father because it seems like this attack is impossible to recover from and also whats the draw back time on the attack like how frequently can you use it? This draw back time goes for all attacks.

Secondly you second Shikai attack, Its all good but just one thing I would like you to add. How many can you make at one time from how much water etc etc.

Third and lastly, you need to re word your first bankai attack. The way its worded now makes it a god mod it is described as though it will hit no matter what. Like how wide and tall is the wind and how powerful is it?