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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 12:31 am


Etlys

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╫Main Information╫


Full Name: Etlys Avuwada
Bloodline: Sylph
Age: Sixteen
Gender: Male
Nation: Sol Soliis
Land: Aqualiis
Title: Sylph for the High Temple of Aqualiis


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╫Equipment Information:╫



Weapons: None.

Armor: A slight under armor beneath his robes that he wears for protection when going out. It probably wouldn't protect him from much though.

Clothing: Etlys is almost always dressed in the robes of the Okria temple, considering that is where he spends most of his time. Though when he ventures outside the temple he will don a less restricting outfit of a white tunic and leggings with a shawl thrown over for harsh weather.

What else do they have on their person?: He always carries a satchel, packed with rare herbs that may be needed for emergency remedies, vials of various potions, and a small book in which he writes his notes and observations.


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╫Fighting Style╫
He runs and hides behind a rock until his guardian has made all the bad guys go away.

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╫Character Description╫


Personality: Etlys is still very young, still learning, and eager about it. He is easily excited, and attacks any new task or challenge with a great tenacity. Though he isn't always the brightest, and his need to help others can put him in the way of danger he can't get himself out of, he is a boy pure of heart and mind. He would quickly put others, even strangers, before himself and that's just who he is. And even if he isn't the smartest in a lot of situations, he is brilliant when it comes to his line of work. Even though he can't fight, and would never even consider raising a hand to hurt another person, he tends to put himself into harms way a lot, usually because he is protecting someone else.
Height: 5' 3"
Weight: 112
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Also green.
Talents: Well, his obvious talent is as a healer being a Sylph and all. Though it's a very uncanny talent. He is also a very good cook, surprisingly, and spends his off hours in the kitchen whipping up something delicious. Etlys has an incredibly sharp memory, able to recognize the name of even the most obscure plants and herbs, which helps a lot in field work.
Companion: N/A (for now?)
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╫Background Information╫

Etlys was born in the temple, not surprising considering that was where his mother and father both worked and lived. Unfortunately, the emerald haired boy never got to meet his mother, for she passed only an hour after his birth, he body hadn't taken very well to the pregnancy and the birth was what put it over the edge. As he was growing up though, Etlys never had much time to dwell on it. His father and he never spoke about, and instead he spent all of his time learning the trade. Thankfully, he took to it quickly, even at such a young age. Most of his childhood was spent with his teacher and best friend, he was always studying and learning, getting the experience he needed to complete his apprenticeship.

Life in the temple was strict, but he was always protected. Which was for the best, considering his pacifist nature. Every now and then though, he would sneak out to go on some sort of adventure. With his best friend and guardian by his side of course, there to protect him when he couldn't. Etlys managed to get himself into a fair amount of trouble, always being caught by his father when he would go out without permission; or when he would run into someone who didn't particularly favor a child getting in their path. But when ever it was called for, Etlys was there to get down to business and willing to help any who asked for it. Seeing all the wounds and sickness that comes through the doors of the Temple to be healed, the boy is anything but sheltered. He has seen some of the cruelest things, just making him even more determined to help as many people as possible and make the world a brighter place.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:49 am



Approved, but you'll probably wish one of the other mods had got to it because I go nitpicky on spelling and grammar sweatdrop .

When you talk about his underarmor, you need to correct 'fro' to 'for'.

In clothing, 'spend' should be 'spends'.

Fighting style... made me laugh.

In your backrgound information section, 'Emerald hair' should be 'emerald-haired' or 'emerald haired', and it should continue on as ''never got to meet his mother, for/because she had passed on only an hour after his birth because her body ....''

'His father and him' should be 'His father and he'.


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:51 am


aha, thank you x]
i refuse to read over my stuff more then once
because i dont ever catch any of the errors (i just dont see them)
and because i end up hating and deleting it all >.>
so, yea, thank you x]
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